Date: 12/12/10 05:18 am Title: He's a bit considerate (of his brother)
omg this chap was the best!!! omfg UPDATE SOON PLZ! i loveeee this fic
Author's Response: Really? I thought it was little weak...there wasnt as much Tom/Jensen as I would have wanted..but I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review...and for liking my story. I'll be sure to update soon. ;)
Date: 12/07/10 07:21 pm Title: He's a bit abtruse
I love Jensen, she's epic lol.I enjoy this character development, very fresh and consistent. Tom is such a perv and I'm so happy Jensen knee him, he had it comming.Bill is so blunt too, I love it. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks hun, I will.
Date: 12/06/10 02:26 am Title: He's a bit abtruse
I'm guessing....Tom stole the panties from when he was in her room!
But yes.
I love your story so much. It's so different. More chapters plleeeeaaasssseee!
Author's Response: Thank you so much hun, I'll be sure to update pretty soon! :)
Date: 12/05/10 12:39 pm Title: He's a bit abtruse
Whoa what happened? That's freaky....poor Jensen. :P Please continue though I love your story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much...and I will haha
Date: 12/05/10 11:40 am Title: He's a bit abtruse
Bwahahahaha! Jensen is my hero hehe. Take that Tom! He so deserved to be put in his place. But now i'm worried about revenge on his part lol. I love Bill's misconception of her lmao & OMG! He stole her panties! Why am I surprised by that? Thank u so much for the update. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot hun..yes I felt it was time for Jensen to even the score haha..Tom can't always win haha :)
Date: 12/05/10 08:53 am Title: He's a bit abtruse
Omg!! Hahaha this was a funny funny chapter
And I loved it especially the part where she kneed Tom in the nuts that was a priceless funny moment. I can't believe that Tom took her underwear that's just weird lol. And bill was kinda harsh in an palmistry flattering sorta way.
I can't wait to see what kinda wrath she'll unleash on Tom. Keep up the fantastic writing and update real soon! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill's brusque attitute is mainly brotherly loyalty, who else will clean Tom's mess?? haha I know its strange haha, but the panty antic will make sense lol.rnrnThanks for the review haha Means the world to me :)
Date: 11/26/10 07:46 pm Title: He's a bit intrusive
Uh-oh now what's gonna happen? Please update.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll update soon
Date: 11/26/10 04:53 pm Title: He’s a bit relentless
Nice! I like this story, is different. I love Jensen, she seens like one hell of a stubborn, witty bitcth.And I love this Tom...sure he's a real asshole but not a generic one and this smart ass personality actually works.Its a fun story. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Yeah, I felt like twisting the story a bit...make it more abtract than usual. I'm glad you like it
Date: 11/26/10 01:42 pm Title: He's a bit intrusive
Fantastically amazing chapter. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll be sure to provide more haha
Date: 11/26/10 09:23 am Title: He's a bit intrusive
I can't believe it she finally accepted his offer!
Oh I wonder what cruel and funny intentions are waiting for them both. I can't WAIT FOR MORE! keep up the fantastic writing and update real soon! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I knew it was comming and even I was surprise to be finally writing it lol. Things can only get crazier now lol.Thanks for the review, means the world to me.
Date: 11/19/10 06:46 am Title: He’s a bit licentious
this is gonna be awesome..
i am lovin' jensen's character now...
pls do update fast and yeah.. update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks hun...I already posted the chapter, it'll be up as soon as is aproved by the site.
Date: 11/19/10 01:41 am Title: He's a bit sharp
I barely started reading this today, and I must say that I love this and am totally hooked!
I love Tom's character, and the fact that he's going out of his way a bit just to have her work for him. And I love her attitude. And I absolutely love the eloquence of this story. I cannot wait for an update (:
Author's Response: Thnaks you so much...I'm glad you like my story and yeah, I decided to go with a more eloquent Tom rather than was is usually seen, its different and different is good haha. Update already posted...should be up as soon as the site aproves of it..it only takes a few hours, then it'd be avaliable. Hope you enjoy it :)
Date: 11/18/10 10:10 pm Title: He’s a bit licentious
haha i love this story, can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: thanks hun...that means lots to me.
Date: 11/18/10 02:31 pm Title: He’s a bit licentious
NIIIIIIICCCCCCCCEEEE!!!!!!!!!! This was a really awesome and kick ass chapter. I love the where she smeared that chocolate ice cream all o er Tom so classic -thumbs up-
This may sound weird but how do you come up with these titles? Keep up the AWESOME SAUCE writing and update real soon :)
Author's Response: The name of the chapter is linked to his actions...whatever trait he represents in the chapter is the one that I use on the title.Like for example...this time he was depraved, so I titled it He's a bit licentious, just a better word for perverted lol. The titles compose who he is in this story little by little, hence the he's a bit lol. BTW, thank you so much for review and I'm glad you liked the chapter..I'll be sure to update soon.
Date: 11/16/10 08:54 pm Title: He's a bit impertinent
lol I love this fic please continue this is great stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I will continue it lol
Date: 11/12/10 01:50 pm Title: He’s a bit relentless
I so knew that Tom wad going to sabotage her interview! This story is so funny and I can actually feel Jensen's anger and annoyance for Tom that's AWESOMESAUCE!!!! I can't wait to read more keep up the fantastic writing and update real soon :D
Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll update really soon...if not today then temorrow..but soon nonetheless. Yes...I totally get you, Jensen's anger towards him is very potent haha..I can feel her rage as well haha
Date: 11/12/10 01:01 pm Title: He’s a bit relentless
Omg this is great, lmao. I love Jensen's fury towards Tom...I just knew he was going to show up there. Some way, some how. Can't wait til u post again =)
Author's Response: Thanks hun :), I'll post very soon and yeah..never understimate Tom..just when one thinks he cant get any more despicable he manages to outdo himself haha...gotta love him haha..there be plenty of his outdo's next chapter haha.
Date: 11/09/10 06:32 pm Title: He's a bit impertinent
Omg lmao! I had a feeling that he had something to do with getting her fired but I would have never guessed that screwed the boss to do it. O hell, that's determination there lol. So good, I hope u post again soon. I love it & I love Jensen. She's awesome xD
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I'll try to post soon...maybe temorrow I hope, soon nevertheless. HAHA...oH YEAH that's determination rigth there from Tom lol
Date: 11/09/10 05:50 pm Title: He's a bit sharp
Lucky girl xD This is really good. I'm on to the next chapter =)
Author's Response: Thanks you, it means a lot to me that you like my story
Date: 11/09/10 05:23 pm Title: He's a bit impertinent
Awe yay!! You updated woot woot
I really do love this story.
I so know that Tom got her fired! What an asshole he was, but there encounter at the restaurant and phone was funny I don't know why but it was lol.
I can't wait to read more, Im so excited =D
Keep up the greatly exquisite writing and update real soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a million, I'll update very soon...and yes Tom can be an asshole when he wants to be lol. Keep checking in the needs few days for a new chapter