Date: 08/25/13 11:22 am Title: He's a bit pretentious
where is Bill? hmm and they are just so horrible to each other...next chapter could be names..He is a bit emotional or He is in love...or something of the sorts :P
Date: 08/25/13 12:10 am Title: He's a bit unorthodox
so strange...so strange indeed :-/
Date: 08/24/13 11:56 pm Title: He's a bit inconsiderate (of his brother)
this chapter was a bit confusing...
Date: 08/24/13 11:31 pm Title: He's a bit insincere
but i want him to love her :( why make things so difficult :( why??!!
Date: 08/24/13 11:18 pm Title: He's a bit vulnerable
omg he is begging for a kiss!!! damn it Jensen kiss the man!!! hells jump in bed with him and just snuggle...so Tom is capable of feeling im happy now :D
Date: 08/24/13 11:04 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
but why? why cant Tom just be nice...poor Jensen :(
Date: 08/24/13 10:43 pm Title: He's a bit opressive
seriously how do you even plot your stories????!! have you seen your writing its just wow...i bet you got a high score on your vocabulary test as well :P
Date: 08/24/13 10:31 pm Title: He's a bit artful
i seriously dont get Tom..im so confused atm :(
Date: 08/24/13 09:32 pm Title: He's a bit impulsive
tom just needs to say he wants jensen..quit the mind games now jeez..its his pride and ego he is so afraid of harming hmmm...
Date: 08/24/13 09:19 pm Title: He's a bit evasive
wtf is up with Tom, i wanna effin slap him right now..gosh he bugs me...ugghhh
Date: 08/24/13 09:07 pm Title: He's a bit callous
Toms stayed quiet when she asked awww..and the last bit is a bit weird...why does it bother her so?
Date: 08/24/13 08:45 pm Title: He's a bit controlling
omg Tom still stood up for her! he does like her a lot...he just wants her for himself..and man was he jealous :P ... i hate evan...
Date: 08/24/13 08:32 pm Title: He's a bit infantile
lol this chapter was funny...i love the way you write...so descriptive!! :D and my vocabulary is growing :P
Date: 08/24/13 08:20 pm Title: He's a bit considerate (of his brother)
oh man oh man oh man XD...porr Bill im not a virgin lmao Jensen
Date: 08/24/13 08:02 pm Title: He's a bit abtruse
oh man...Bill is their!!
Date: 08/24/13 07:47 pm Title: He's a bit intrusive
oh my..but why is tom so mean though..please tell me he shows some type of emotion throughout the story...i feel really bad for Jensen...:(
Date: 08/24/13 07:37 pm Title: He’s a bit licentious
oh man..but i think he is just so persistent because he likes her...and from what i can tell..he likes her quiet A LOT!
Date: 08/24/13 07:18 pm Title: He’s a bit relentless
“Only in the wettest of your dreams Kaulitz!” I angrily retorted; he seemed to find satisfaction within my retort…that sick freak. XD and oh crap..damn you Jensen you shouldve just hid...you shouldve just hid woman!!