Date: 04/04/11 12:07 am Title: He's a bit cruel
update soon please. I want to know what happens next it's killing me!
Author's Response: One more day,please please bare with me :(
Date: 03/23/11 11:25 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
Are you going to update soon? I really hate to be a pest, because I know how long it can take to write something sometimes.... but I really miss this story! So please update soon!
Author's Response: Is been a rough couple of weeks for me, I had quite a lot of work do before Spring Break, just hectic. Luckly things seem to have slowed down a bit and I have been devoting any free time to working in the new chapter, there is a lot I have revisited ect but I'm almost done. I expect to have it up by Friday, well I estimate to probably have it finished tomorrow but its likely to be posted on Friday, it takes a few hours for the site to process it :)
Date: 03/20/11 07:39 am Title: He's a bit sharp
"You will be with me.."
ohhmygosh...they'll spend the night together. fighting w/ each other.. :))
Author's Response: Haha, perhaps ;)
Date: 03/05/11 06:22 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
Nooooooooo!!! I need more ;)
Author's Response: I will provide you with more soon, promise :)
Date: 03/02/11 05:10 pm Title: He's a bit impertinent
Tom's a bitch!
Author's Response: Yes he is, adore that particular trait on him ;)
Date: 03/01/11 08:18 am Title: He's a bit cruel
Yeah, they'll spend the night together. Playing Scrabble.
Author's Response: LOL, that's one prediction I can garantee will not come to pass. I like the idea very much but I'm afraid there are no board games in the Jensen-Tom war...assuming you mean the literal game rather than a metaphor to their conversations, which is brilliant by the way.
Date: 03/01/11 06:19 am Title: He's a bit cruel
Oh how I love this story!Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: No problem, I'm glad you like my work :)
Date: 02/28/11 09:19 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
Tom is quite the clever one.
He does care, despite what he may show.
awesome chapter
Author's Response: Yes, he is very deciving. rnIs great that you can decipher what I've hidden.
Date: 02/28/11 09:02 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
:O dammmmn it. I hope you can post a new chapter soon(: I really enjoy your story.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like my story, thanks in lots :) Update very near!
Date: 02/28/11 12:27 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
He will spent the night with her???
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Jesuuus!!!!!!
Your story makes me so addicted!!!!
Author's Response: LOL, thats awesome! I'll estimulate your addiction to the story with a new chapter very soon ;)
Date: 02/28/11 05:59 am Title: He's a bit cruel
I just had the chance to properly read this story, and I love it ^^
The sophisticated words you used in one chapter alone is more than what I used in my whole story XD I think it's a good thing, and it makes me want to improve. Bravo ^^
And I noticed one thing: In previous chapters, you ended dialogue with period and then started with capital letter. It was distracting me... because I am very firm about punctuation XD
But I saw that you have fixed it in this chapter (before I pointed it out *giggkes*)so I can't complain anymore ^^ Good job :)
I also think that the plot is quite unusual - the fact that Jensen hates Tom with passion :D That's awesome ;)
Oh, and one more thing, my name is Jensen XD it's my last name actually. Jensen is a common last name in Denmark, but not for first name, especially for a girl. But I think it fits in this story :)
Ok, got to stop my rambling here XD Can't wait to see how Tom and Jensen manage to survive the night together without killing each other :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much, usually my writing style is not taken is such a positive manner. I cant help my Poetic inclinations if I tried. Knowing you appriciate it puts one hell of a smile in my face :) I adopted the name Jensen, originally Jennsen form a series I read. I was so captivated by the name I just had to use it, it was a first name there but is interesting to know is a last name in Denmark, and its your last name, that's fascinating, the ways of the world I tell you lol rnrn
Author's Response: Thank you so much, usually my writing style is not taken is such a positive manner. I cant help my Poetic inclinations if I tried. Knowing you appriciate it puts one hell of a smile in my face :) I adopted the name Jensen, originally Jennsen form a series I read. I was so captivated by the name I just had to use it, it was a first name there but is interesting to know is a last name in Denmark, and its your last name, that's fascinating, the ways of the world I tell you lol rnrn
Date: 02/27/11 07:03 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
eiiiiiiiiiiiii you will be with me ohh how sweet word :))))i love it hahahaha im shivering haha
Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 02/27/11 05:11 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
Out of all the 13 chapter endings this one....this one right here is the most supurb(?) And exquisitely wonderful endings so far. I absolutely CAN NOT wait to find out what Tom and Jensen's night together would be like. Please keep up your magnificent writing and update real soon!!!!!!! =D
Author's Response: Always a joy to read your reviews Izabel. So glad you like the ending, alot of thought goes into that last line, this one happens to be my favorite too. Thank you so so much, an update is comming so I promise. Give it a day and you'll be able to read into their night together :)
Date: 02/27/11 03:19 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
Lmao! Just when Jensen thought she'd gotten him back....O, their night together will be an interesting one to read lol. Thanx for the update! I was beyond excited when i'd seen that u had =)
Author's Response: I'm so happy right now, thank you so much for your words and for always reading and reviewing my work, it really means so much to me :)
Date: 02/27/11 01:56 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
I'm so glad you updated this is getting really good I love this story I hope Jensen will be okay!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy you've come to love my story, it means the world to me. Thanks again :)
Date: 02/25/11 11:32 pm Title: He's a bit sharp
please update soon! XD
love this story!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I already submitted a new chapter, it should be up in a couple of hours :)
Date: 02/21/11 07:05 pm Title: He's a bit impulsive
Jeez is that boy frustrating! I would have cracked him in his dome already, but that's just me and I'm a little aggressive haha. I really hope you get the chance to update soon!
Author's Response: You ar enot the only one eager to hurt him I assure you lol, I'm sure they are alot how would like to take a crack at him, I sometimes feel the urge as well :) Update will be here tomomrrow, I already submitted it :)
Date: 02/20/11 03:21 pm Title: He's a bit impulsive
Your choice of words are unusual - and I like it =) The plot is also intriguing.
But... there is a mistake that I can't bring myself to ignore -_- sorry...
It's about your dialogue. I notice that most of your dialogues are ended by a period or exclamation point or quotation mark, and then followed by a capital.
For example:
“I do say.” He crudely confirmed.
The correct way would be:
“I do say,” he crudely confirmed. It ends with a comma, and then followed by a lower case.
That kind of mistake will interrupt some readers, and it's such a shame because your writing style is very good and your choice of words are excellent =)
Please take this as a constructive criticism, I point it out for your own good, so don't get me wrong =)
Author's Response: I do take your words as constructive criticism and I'm very much thankful for them :)rnNot much dedication goes into puntuation when it comes to my pleasure writting, is something I often dread and get lazy about for is not my favorite part of writting, but I do understand how it can affect the reader and I will rnmost certainly work on fixing my mistake for I want those reading to be able to fully indulge in my work.rnThanks again :)rn
Date: 02/11/11 10:40 am Title: He's a bit impulsive
mm next next next hihihi excited..hahah tom was so funny ..i love your story hehe it feels so good to read again and again
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like my story, thank you so much for the review, it means lots to me :)
Date: 02/08/11 08:46 pm Title: He's a bit impertinent
I find Tom 's evil ways to be hot haha, I love this Tom so much, he is egotistical but he can back it up.Brilliant!
Author's Response: Yeah, I always make sure he can.