Date: 06/06/11 12:44 am Title: He's a bit sharp
Finally got a chance to catch up on all the stories I track and I was so excited to see that you got a chance to update! Amazing chapter! You sure know how to keep a girl on her toes haha. Please try and update again sometime soon!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy reading my words and that I keep you on your toes as I would hate to bore my readers with a tedious story. Thank you so much for reviewing.Chapter submitted, it should be up shortly, I have to wait until the site approves it.
Date: 05/23/11 05:42 am Title: He's a bit sharp
I'm not going to lie and say the second I saw this story I thought it would be amazing or anything like that. I skipped this one over for months based on the title. I figured this was some bratty teenagers Lady Gaga song fic. I have been connected to my computer screen all day reading this and I must say it has been an absolute joy and I cannot wait for you to write more.
Author's Response: Misconceptions are common, is a controversial title. And in a way your intuition was right seeing as such ideal was briefly considered prior to the start of the writting process for this particular story, but I was quick to discard it for the concept was just so trite and arid I couldn't bring myself to write a line around it lol I'm so happy you gave my story a chance in spite of my devious title and I'm thrilled you liked it so much. Thanks for taking the time to review, it means the world to me.
Date: 05/22/11 08:18 pm Title: He's a bit opressive
What a dick...
Author's Response: Simple but presice, brilliant!
Date: 05/22/11 01:11 am Title: He's a bit opressive
Wow, Tom just keeps getting more & more vicious lol. I absolutely cannot wait until next post!
Author's Response: Well it is one of his best qualities, the recurring sadism lol, I just submitted the new chapter and hopefully it will be up in a few hours...more viciousness comming up!
Date: 05/22/11 12:32 am Title: He's a bit opressive
While it was a tad overzealous with big words in the beginning this turned into the torturous bliss that I crave with each and every chapter you write! Can't wait for the next battle round to begin ;)
Author's Response: Oh I apologize, my Bierce/Poe mode was widely active, still I'm glad you went on to enjoy the chapter. Thanks lots for your words,next round should be up in a few hours.
Date: 05/21/11 09:01 pm Title: He's a bit opressive
Oh-no! What is Jensen going to do? I'm in suspense!
Author's Response: No more suspense, new chapter just submitted...it should be up shortly :)
Date: 05/21/11 08:50 pm Title: He's a bit opressive
I loved the last line, that was somehow the sexiest thing I've ever read. Even though Tom is an asshole, he's still extremely sexy. I love how bad you make him.
awesome chapter
Author's Response: Frankly I do put a lot of thought in that last line, sometimes I have it writen before the chapter itself is started for I'm very meticulous about providing just the right finale. Thanks for taking the time to review, I'm thrilled you enjoy reading my work.
Date: 05/21/11 08:45 pm Title: He's a bit artful
OMG, this was unexpected, I'm a loving it. Keep up the amazing work!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :) New chapter up today.
Date: 05/21/11 07:34 pm Title: He's a bit opressive
I'm so DELIGHTED to see that you have updated on this story!!! I was wondering what the turn out to Tom's plan would be and now I know lol. But I didn't think that the "gossip" would be that Jense was the "cheating girlfriend" and that the twin would be share the love of one women or that David would agree to go along with that ABSURD and DEMENTED idea but hey what can you do? *shrugs* It's obvious that Jense will go with Tom to continue on with this plan of David's. I can't wait to find out how that will turn out, there are so many possiblities :)And I'm blithe to know that you always enjoy my reviews ha.ha.ha.ha
Yes its true that writing an idealsitic personality is boring and it is also repetivite, your story and heyepic's story are my favorite because they don't protray the usual lusty Tom xD I can imagine writing something like this to be fun lol. I can't wait for more please continue with your immaculate writing and update real soon!!! ^-^
You're welcome I'm giddy to know that my words are encouraging, its rare for me to know thank you!
Author's Response: Again so thrilled to hear from you :) I'm glad you found the chapter unpredictable, it is a purpose of mine with this story as I find a predictable plot to be so tedious, I really don't want my readers to become bored with a painfully foreseeable story so I'm elated you mention this to me. Oh yes, writting around this version of Tom is quite fun for me, sometimes I want to neglect other characters to perfect his but I'm fully devoted to Jensen's character so my guilty pleasure must wait lolrnrnI just submitted a new chapter, it should be up in a couple of hours. I really hope you like it :) Thanks a million for your words. rn
Date: 04/17/11 11:34 pm Title: He's a bit sharp
I just want you to know that I seriously check back every single freaking day hoping you've posted a new chapter!!! Please post soon before I explode from anticipation!
Author's Response: That's is nice to hear, that you like my story...not the exploting part haha I much rather you remain in one piece lol! Update just submitted, hopefully it will be aproved soon.
Date: 04/16/11 06:18 am Title: He's a bit artful
Awesome!!!
Author's Response: My favorite word hehe, thanks :)
Date: 04/09/11 04:51 pm Title: He's a bit artful
Oh man poor Jensen Tom is so evil here! But the story itself is amazing! :D Update soon!
Author's Response: Will do, well already submitted the new chapter...it'll be up soon. rnYes, he is evil; but honestly I wouldn't have it any other way ;)
Date: 04/09/11 02:24 am Title: He's a bit sharp
You're brilliant words drew me in after the first paragraph. I just read every single chapter in 1 day because I literally couldn't stop. You're ability to create a perfect cliff hanger leaves me dying for more each and every time despite the fact that it just about kills me knowing I have to wait until who knows when for another update. lol.
Oodles of Kisses-n-Love for such a compelling story!!!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm thrilled you find my story worth reading and I'm terribly sorry for the lapses between chapters...I know what is like to wait for an update and I admit I should be more consistent with mine considering my emphathy for that feeling of anticipation. I will most definitely try to submit my chapters with more consitency. Well, I just send in a new chapter so you'll get to read on in a few hours, sometimes it takes a little time for the chapter to be approved but It'll be up today :)
Date: 04/09/11 01:08 am Title: He's a bit artful
FINALY!!!!! and omfg i actually loved it wen tom was "hurt" from the fact dat jensen went with him only cuz bill said but the FRONT PAGE KITTEN!? omfg she should kick him in the balls!!!! XD idk y this fic gets me so excited. damn tom is such a asshole! l.o.v.e. i.t! plz update asap
Author's Response: YAY, I'm glad my writing emits emotion..it really is important to me to have my words come to life so I'm thrilled to read your review ;) Update submitted, the moment is approved you'll get to find out what comes next so stay tunned today :)
Date: 04/08/11 09:42 pm Title: He's a bit artful
o.o
Whoa....did not see that coming.
Hope to see another update soon-ish!
Author's Response: I take your surprise as a good thing :)
Date: 04/08/11 08:48 pm Title: He's a bit artful
OMFG! WTF!!!! I absolutely enjoyed this chapter oh so VERY MUCH. It was also very amusing especially when Jensen and Tom were in the car. I understand why she would do anything Bill would ask and come to her rescue. But I do feel bad for Tom when he found out that Jensen only came along because Bill asked her too. But at the very end when Tom said 'front page kitten' I was like ASSSSHHHOOLLEE! ha.ha.ha.ha. But boy I MOST DEFIENTLY CAN NOT WAIT to find out what will happen next. Please please please I beg you to update real soon lol and to keep up your very addicting and joyous writing. And It makes me giddy to know that you love reading my review/comments :) I'm glad you enjoy them.
Author's Response: Always enjoy your reviews haha, always do! Yes, he is an asshole but is no secret I'm enamored with the fact that he is so unconventional to the norm, an idealistic personality is so boring to me, evil is much more dynnamic, and so much fun to write on ;) No worries, I just submitted the new chapter, it'll be up as soon as is approved. Thanks for your words, I find them always encouraging.
Date: 04/08/11 08:18 pm Title: He's a bit artful
What the hell!? What has Tom done to her now? I need MORE asap. I'm addicted to this & am dying to know what's happening.
Author's Response: Paparrazi by Tom, not so much Gaga but just as fun!rnUpdate submitted, stay tunned today.
Date: 04/08/11 06:38 pm Title: He's a bit artful
I have been waiting for this chapter soo long! :D I loved it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, means lots to me! Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 04/07/11 12:37 pm Title: He's a bit cruel
Amazing chapter, cant wait till the next one, I have to know what happens with these two, I predict some form of mayhem, they'll kill each other haha and I cant wait to read it :-)
Date: 04/07/11 08:03 am Title: He's a bit sharp
AWESOME;)
Author's Response: Thanks :)