Date: 10/28/11 03:02 am Title: He's a bit insincere
OOOOOOOOO........WHY DIDNT YOU CONTUOUE IT?
I AM DYING TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPPEN NEXT,COMON :)
NICE CHAPTER :) BUT UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON :)
Author's Response: Well, because the next part was far too long to fit, also I felt it deserves a chapter completely devoted to the event that follows, and lastly I love cliffhangers. Thank you so much for the review, I posted the chapter just now and it should be up in a few hours, I really hope you like it.
Date: 10/21/11 08:59 pm Title: He's a bit vulnerable
I just want to let you know that I really believe that this story is one of the best on the site. Unlike some others, I love the way you write and your huge vocabulary of complex and elegant words. Mainly because it forces me to expand my own vocabulary. Every chapter on it's own is such an amazing piece of writing. I look forward to each update. And I hope you get the chance to update this soon!
Author's Response: I'm so grateful for your words, they really make me smile like a fool. I appreciate so much you taking the time to comment on my ever so controversial writting, especially positively which I find very invogorating as an author. I'm thrilled that my unconventional style actually has a way to benefit you, is exactly what I try to compel even with myself, to expand horizons. I just submitted the new chapter, is a long one. Expect it in a matter of hours when the sites approves it. I really hope you like it. Thnak you again for such a review, it means lots to me as an author.
Date: 10/06/11 07:31 pm Title: He's a bit vulnerable
this was not tht entertaining: just a bunch of unnecessary loopholes and fancy words that didn't need to be there
Author's Response: This chapter was not meant to be clustered with entertainment but to built up to some. Loopholes there might be but if I don't pose any sort of unanswered questions then there absolutely no umpredictibly factor and that makes for one hell of a tedious plot...main point is I'm aware of the voids and I will fill them as the story evolves, many of the loopholes in this particular chapter would find some filling in the next. Is not a TV show..I wont present a problem and solve five lines to the closing. I'm very meticulous about each detail in my story, reason why I created those extras, to make sure no questions are left unanswered. I opt for satirical suspense, not the traditional kind. As far as my fancy words as you say, I'm tired of explaining that one. Is my writting style and I've experienced complexity from the other side of the page, contraty to being bothered by them I find myself facinated by new words, to me they are not fancy...once they where but as I learned they become part of my vocabulary and get stuck in my writting. Is not conventional or likeable to many, but is how I choose to express myself in writting and I believe while it shouldn't be loved by all if they don't wish to it still should be respected.
Date: 09/26/11 08:53 am Title: He's a bit vulnerable
oooooh... onto the next update! :)
Author's Response: Already posted, up in hours!
Date: 09/22/11 12:11 pm Title: He's a bit vulnerable
Your words show no bounds my dear. Can't wait for the next installment!!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, your comment makes me smile like crazy. Next installment posted, should be available soon.
Date: 09/22/11 11:49 am Title: He's a bit vulnerable
excelent!!!! please update soon!
Author's Response: Just did, expect a new chapter in a matter of hours once is approved. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 09/22/11 11:34 am Title: He's a bit vulnerable
Love it!! Can hardly wait for ur next post =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means the world to me that you continue to love my story...I mean to never have my readers enjoy my work and its awesome that I can achieve so. Again, a million thanks. Update posted, expect it in a couple of hours as is aproved.
Date: 09/03/11 08:13 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
Update... Pretty please with Tom on a very yummy sundae.... (sorry, I'm just craving for a sundae cause it's so hot here...)
Author's Response: Love sundaes haha I just updated, look out for the new chapter in a few hours..it takes a bit to get approval, specially when I usually post in the middle of the night.
Date: 07/24/11 09:40 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
PLEASEE UPDATE!!!! I CANTWAIT TO READ THE ENDOF THIS!!!"
Author's Response: Just did ;-)
Date: 07/03/11 01:02 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
woah....woah. I'm speechless right now.
She quits?! She can't yet! Tom's finally starting to show some kind of feeling. This chapter had so much emotion and was totally awesome.
Author's Response: I'll take speechless as good haha Thanks lots for reffering to this chapter as emotive, I always hope for my readers to notice those little details as I wrok hard to make them happen, is nice you notice. Thanks for your review.
Date: 07/01/11 01:14 am Title: He's a bit consuming
Bravo my dear! Bravo!!! It has truly been an experience following this story. Kisses-n-Love!
Author's Response: Awe thank you very much..I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 06/30/11 10:15 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
This was an amazing chapter I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks lots for your words! More in on the way, I just posted a new chapter.
Date: 06/30/11 08:40 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
This chapter was so incredibly and unbelievibly flabbergasting that I am utterly speechless. I can't believe after that lung-squeezing kiss (lol)Jense and Tom shared that she just up and quit! Trust me this story is far from bore endusing. You are welcome :)
I can tell how devoted your towards Jense's character and this story by the very intricate and detailes in this story. It's also a very intellectual story and you don't find a lot of that on her from my point of you at least. Please keep up your superb writing and update again real soon! I really do enjoy reading this story that words cannot even being to describe.
Author's Response: Is nice to hear my story is not boring, I put great effort on mantaining monotomy-free story here so I'm thrilled to be doing an effective job so far. Always nice to read your reviews for you always take the extra time to comment on elements of the story that go beyond the plot, is very cool to get to interact in such a way, specially for the writer. I greatly enjoy it. Thanks for granting me the opportunity, I'm grateful for it.
Date: 06/30/11 05:49 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
I LOOOOVEEE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! CONGRATULATIONS...YOU WRITE EXCELLENTE...I ENJOY YOUR DEEP CONTENTS OF JENSEN THOUGHTS...
Author's Response: Awe thank you so much, I do strive to give Jensen depth as I'm not fond of superficial characters, I might over do it but I believe that's better than not doing so at all haharnJust posted the new chapter, will be up in a couple of hours when is approved. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 06/30/11 05:19 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
AWSOME CHAPTER :) I LOVED IT VERY MACH :)
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE :)
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE :)
Author's Response: I just updated, not soon and for that I apologize but as of now the chapter is awaiting approval. Thanks for reading :) And thanks for the Review, means lots to me. Enjoy the new chapter!
Date: 06/30/11 05:19 pm Title: He's a bit consuming
Amazing!! I love this so so much!!
Author's Response: Thanks a million, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 06/30/11 01:17 pm Title: He's a bit sharp
In relation to this story, I'll wait as long as it takes. lol.
Author's Response: Awe thank you, that means so much to me :-)
Date: 06/30/11 10:03 am Title: He's a bit sharp
SWEET! I can't wait to read it!!!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm happy to hear that in spite of my delay.
Date: 06/19/11 12:49 pm Title: He's a bit opressive
brilliant! please update soon!
Author's Response: Just did :)
Date: 06/19/11 12:27 pm Title: He’s a bit relentless
THIS IS AN AWSOME STORY...I LOVE STORIES WHERE TOM IS A JERK AND SEXUALLY AGRESSIVE, PLEASE MAKE THEM HAVE SEX SOON...IT WILL BE EXPLOSIVE...CONGRATULATIONS AND UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Wow, that's an unusual request lol Thanks for reviewing, a new chapter should be up within hours or maybe just minutes :)