Date: 02/13/16 01:54 pm Title: Aftershow
That made me cry. I loved the orginial so much. This was great and I love that Bill has not learned to knock. Thank you for this story.
Date: 02/20/11 11:03 am Title: Aftershow
Want to know what's going to happen more after that Bill said, Tom?
Date: 11/23/10 01:09 pm Title: Aftershow
Awww, how sweet! I liked how you really did your own spin on it, but still hinted towards the original with the dialogue.
And tsk tsk, Bill of all people should have learned how to knock xDD
Date: 11/08/10 10:45 am Title: Aftershow
I really like this remix! I love this challenge cause it makes me read pairing and stories I wouldn’t usually read... I felt so sad for all the characters while reading this. For Bill, cause reading about one twin getting hurt is always painful for the other. And for Samy too cause he’s feeling so guilty and all. I like how we learned about their past as a couple by Samy talking to Tom. I love the ending! Bill will always be in his twin’s life, this time he proves it with his horrible timing ! That was a good remix, I really enjoyed it!
Date: 11/07/10 07:21 pm Title: Aftershow
...Wow. I....just wow. I am speechless! I adored this! I love the little bit at the end with Bill walking in on them!!! I am so glad that Tom woke up!! Good luck in the contest!
Date: 11/07/10 06:47 pm Title: Aftershow
haha the end made me chuckle, and practically swell with happiness! I'm so glad Tom woke up, it would have been even more tragic had he not. The way you took us through Samy's thoughts was incredibly moving, i really felt his emotions. I'm coming to like this pair more and more and you definitely shoved me a bit further into them :) so thanks for that! Aw this was beautiful, well written and really lovely to read.
Date: 11/06/10 10:53 pm Title: Aftershow
I thought Bill at the end was funny. You would really think he would have learned.
Date: 11/06/10 07:05 pm Title: Aftershow
This was really good. I loved it. I cried a little too, it was like it was real and happening right then and there
Date: 11/06/10 03:53 pm Title: Aftershow
Excellent! I was very nervous to see what story would be chosen and how it would all be seen but this certainly surpassed my expectations. It was lovely and beautifully written. I'm very lucky to have had an experienced author get their hands on my story. Thank you for your excellent work.
Date: 11/06/10 03:49 pm Title: Aftershow
That made me cry.I loved it.
Date: 11/06/10 03:46 pm Title: Aftershow
Omg. Yes! The original was just so sweet, and very... I don't even know how to say. Amazing, but you know that, yah. And this one was.. well, damn, a perfect sequel or remix. It was just.. I can't believe that someone would beat Tom, that's cruel. But Samy's confession was so sweet and touching. He really loves Tom, aww. I loved the description, and I loved to get Sam's view on tom and his first time!:) to know how he felt and yeah..:P Sam's really deep about Tom! It was really realistic and really amazingly remixed! I thought Tom was going to wake up during his confession but when he didn't, i almost thought that he wasn't going to wake up at all... but then... the last part, I was so relieved and that part cracked me up a bit even though it was so sweet! that tom made them go back to where it all begin! that's so...romantic, in a way! and sooo typical Bill to interrupt or not knocking for that matter XD I totally loved the ending. Bill will never learn knocking! haha! AMAZINGLY WRITTEN. totally loved this