Date: 01/30/11 08:25 am Title: Chapter 4
HEY I LOVE THIS STORY CONTINUEEE
Date: 12/26/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
This Is Amazing! Ive Been Anxously Waiting For This Chapter! Update Soon Please :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I must tell you that your comment means the world to me. It seems that you're the only who really enjoys this. thank you again for taking the time to comment.
Date: 11/30/10 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow...this was...wow. This chapter was remarkable. Really, truly, remarkable =]
LOVE THIS! ~ 'I was already shattered and broken. Tom, I knew, was the only one who could mend me.' ~
Keep up the great work! I am really looking forward to more! =D
Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked this update.
That you call it remarkable is just so amazing, especially since I felt I didn't do too well on this chapter
Thank you for the support!
Date: 11/30/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
I don't mind ur filler chapter, it helps me to understand the characters better. I really love this fic & now u have me in the mood to watch Cruel Intentions again lol. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you don't mind(:
rnAnd I'm so happy that you love this fic it really means a lot:D
rnCruel Intentions is amazing. I honestly love it<333
Date: 11/15/10 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story, and that says a lot since I was OBSESSED with Confessions, that story was very well written but it is nice to see a different writing style, and I like how your making Tom and Camilla's relationship. It's no where near as harsh as Confessions which is cool because it's nice they can admit their feelings for each other, even if its a little more mental than verbal. Well done. Please continue (:
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you like this(:rnYes, I wanted to try a different approach to their relationship. Not as harsh, as cold, as closed off in a way? I mean, the way that relationship was written was absolutely amazing. But I wanted to do this differently. In a sense that they really are in sync, and can admit it, even if it isn't to each other.rnThank you for the comment. It really means a lot(:
Date: 11/12/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
I must say, this is really good. I read Confessions a long time ago. It was the very first story I read when I joined THF. It is also one of my favourite's =D. When I read that your inspiration came from it, I was a bit leery about reading this. I'm glad I did though. I can see a few similiarities, but that's only because it's based on the movie Cruel Intentions as well. I am really enjoying it so far. I can't wait to see what else happens. =]
Btw, best line.... “You may not see it now Camilla. But you’re his princess. He’s the only one who can save you”
Author's Response: I honestly started hyperventilating when I saw that you commented my story. I'm not even joking. Which is quite pathetic, but what can I say? I love your work. When I came onto THF I read Confessions and was in awe at the emotional depth that came from it. I really wanted to create something that could touch people as much as that story touched me. And that's why I chose to start Deception. I'm really glad that you took a chance and read this. Yes, there are similarities, and there will be more as the story progresses. But mine is, and will be different than Confessions.rnI love Cruel Intentions so it'll be in there too.(:rnThank you so much for taking the time out to comment my story. I really appreciate it. And I hope you continue to read it(:rnrnBTW Really?(:
Date: 11/12/10 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wao!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!! I love how much Tom wants her and how protective he is.
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it(:rnAnd yes, I must say it is pretty adorable how protective he is over her.rnThanks for the comment(:
Date: 11/07/10 04:48 pm Title: Prologue
Look, I didn't even read it because I couldn't even read the summary. People are going to take one look at that huge block of text and run away. Shorten the summary to a few carefully-crafted, short sentences, and I promise you read count will go up.
Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I really appreciate it. I did what you told me to do. I cut it down by a lot.rnI hope you take the time to read it now.rn(: