Date: 03/15/11 11:17 am Title: Nightmare Hotel
That was awesome! Intense!
Date: 12/10/10 12:53 am Title: Nightmare Hotel
wow.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/11/10 01:02 pm Title: Nightmare Hotel
Very creepy! And what a creative idea you had here, with the video diary. I like the original story very much (I decided to read it before I read this, which I don't regret now), and I really do think this goes well along with it :D
The end gave me shivers *shudder* Freaky dolls.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Date: 11/07/10 10:42 pm Title: Nightmare Hotel
Whoa. That was really creep and very good!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Date: 11/06/10 06:29 am Title: Nightmare Hotel
Hmmm....perhaps I shouldn't have read this just before I was planning on going to bed, lol. It was quite creepy...I don't usually read this kind of story, and to be honest I don't think I want to start reading stories like this more often, but I was glad to have read this one. I loved the way you wrote it, with the whole camera aspect to it, definitely worked well with the story. Best wishes in the contest! :D
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I wanted to try something different from the usual.
Date: 11/05/10 10:52 pm Title: Nightmare Hotel
Ok so the first thing i thought of reading this was paranormal activity and quarantine. not the best movies in the world but few scenes to scare the shit out of you. that's how this story was. the only part that i did not really think went well - maybe you had writers block? maybe you were rushing? didn't know what else to write? - was the ending. I just couldn't get an image of tom slitting bill's throat and then his own. i thought the imagery was pretty good and how it could have almost been a play or a movie script. very detailed and i loved it. good job [:
Author's Response: Thanks. The ending wasn't created by me, by sticking to the remix's rules, I used the original ending from the original story.
Date: 11/05/10 10:08 pm Title: Nightmare Hotel
O_O That was so creepy! I don’t want to go to bed now! I really like how you used the camera to tell the story, really clever idea. It made the fic even more interesting and original! The ending made me scared and sad. Thinking about one of the twins killing the other is just the most horrible thought ever! It works well it the context of a horror story like this, I couldn’t be more terrified! You did great with this remix, it’s not the type of story I would usually read cause of the warnings and all but it was mysterious and it kept my interest! Oh and did I mentioned it was scary as hell too?! :P
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I always try to do my best!
Date: 11/05/10 07:48 pm Title: Nightmare Hotel
oh my, that was creepy! I was shocked at the end, when Tom had to kill Bill, whoa man! This was well written, nice entry :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot.
Date: 11/05/10 06:34 pm Title: Nightmare Hotel
That was definitely freaky. I would have actually liked it to be even freakier. But, I loved the confessional style of the story and the use of the camera. :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I tried to let the imagination keep this one freakier.
Date: 11/05/10 06:22 pm Title: Nightmare Hotel
Wow I think you did such a great job remixing my story! ^^ I'm so proud and I can't wait to find out who you are. :P I loved that you made it into a sort of Cloverfields thing with the camera and all (I won't say Blair Witch Project, because that sucked :P). Great surprise ending too! ^^ You've definitely got my vote!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I couldn't be more thankful for you creating such a wonderful, mysterious story that allowed me to do something different that hadn't been done before. By the way, I hated Blair Witch too.
Date: 11/05/10 03:47 pm Title: Nightmare Hotel
....shit dude. That scared me hardcore. It was very mysterious. I like the idea of the video camera, and the background of it. This was very intriguing and I loved it! Best luck in the contest!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, even though I did not win I am still very proud of this story and is very thankful to the original author for providing me with such a good plot.