Date: 03/04/12 03:03 am Title: "Because we can't"
Very nice. Not what I expected, but I liked it. Alot.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/05/10 10:53 pm Title: "Because we can't"
LOL Remy, if you see my reply to your review, I made a stupid and forgot which fic I was dealing with obviously. So embarassing haha! Anyways, it was even MORE of a challenge in By Proxy, because the level of kink was lower and I had to delve deeper into tender emotions (Gag!).
Author's Response: =)
Date: 11/05/10 08:29 pm Title: "Because we can't"
What can I say that havnt been said already...? Just beautiful! I love their twin connection and I love it even more in a well written story like this. Just breathtaking!
I can see that I must read more of your fics :D
Author's Response: Oh yes, please do! I'd love to hear your thoughts on my other stuff as well. Just be warned: it varies widely.
Date: 11/05/10 07:16 am Title: "Because we can't"
i'm pretty sure that that wasn't supposed to make me cry, but you wrote the emotion of the situation very well. i love the last two lines. great job.
Author's Response: Everybody's getting all emotional! LOL, no, I'm glad you felt strongly about it. Thanks.
Date: 11/05/10 12:47 am Title: "Because we can't"
This nearly broke my heart.
Author's Response: =) It was angsty for sure, but at least it seems they'll be together now, right? Glad I could evoke some emotions, even with smutty fluff... smluff?
Date: 11/04/10 09:58 pm Title: "Because we can't"
I've read this premise written by some of the best authors in the fandom and this one is right up there. So well done--I love how you kept the focus on the twins while still giving us the sexy factor. *_*
Author's Response: Thanks! That was a challenge, figuring out how to make it about them and not have Bill just abandoned against the wall while everything degrades into het.
Date: 11/04/10 07:08 pm Title: "Because we can't"
Wow, very unique, and extremely well written... because, as you said Georg is doing the fucking, but all you see is the twin connection. Heartbreaking in so many ways. This was beautiful.
I'm so glad the twins let themselves touch in the end. Even though its a happy ending, it still feels sad that they had to deny themselves this for so long. I'm also kind of sad for Georg who had to be part of this and his feelings were unrequited.
This was soooo well written, everything vivid and touching. Well done. I loved it!
Author's Response: Things may be awkward with Georg for awhile, but he's not in love with Bill, so he won't be heartbroken from this.rnrnThanks! I'm so glad that it came across as both heartbreaking and happy.
Date: 11/04/10 01:28 pm Title: "Because we can't"
you know i love you, right?? xD everytime i open the page i see one of your stories wich is really damn good because i love them.
i tried to contact you because i wanted to read the original text of altered but you never answered... could you send it to me? please?
Author's Response: That's so nice to hear that someone likes all my stuff. Sure I'll send it to you. For some reason, people are not being able to contact me through THF. I don't know why
Date: 11/04/10 12:46 pm Title: "Because we can't"
beautiful
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 11/04/10 09:31 am Title: "Because we can't"
So powerful---the description of the twin's connection is, I don't know...just amazing! Loved every word.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, I felt like it was kinda short for having so much emotional stuff in it.
Date: 11/04/10 07:40 am Title: "Because we can't"
That was beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 11/04/10 06:17 am Title: "Because we can't"
I'm ever so glad it wasn't just smut, even if it was against your intention. In fact, I didn't even see it as that. (I'm not one who tends to favour random, pointless sex anyway.) This is the second time I've read something like this (Georg acting as the tool between the twins), but of course this was some different, and equally as emotionally satisfying. It was really wonderful, sad, but wonderful. I always love when people write the twins' connection just right - perfectly in tune, deeply engraved into the other's heart, you know the score. The only one for one another~ Ah~ Great work dude. ^^ *hugs lovesick twins*
Author's Response: There's a similar story out there? What is it? I don't like being a copy cat... Oh well. You said it was different right? That's good. Glad the emotional stuff made it better in your mind. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/04/10 02:18 am Title: "Because we can't"
;_; *sniffle* ohh...that was really...it could have been strange and pleasurably disturbing, but instead you made it painful and pure and beautiful. god. i really just...loved how they tried to keep eye contact the whole time, how georg and his actions slowly faded into the backround, not just for them, but for us, too. Favorite sentence: "Bill comes with one man between his legs and another’s name on his lips, the former having helped ease the ache, and the latter sure to bring it back again." really gorgeous. thanks for that
Author's Response: Painful and pure and beautiful? Yay! That's what I wanted. I really pushed the whole eye contact thing. Hope I didn't go overboard on that. I don't want my readers to feel like they're reading the same sentence over and over again.
I'm SO SO happy you noticed Georg's part diminishing throughout the story. I wondered how many people would really take notice that his inner dialogue was getting less frequent. And that sentence you said you liked?-It's one of my favorites too; I was so pleased with myself when I thought of it.