Date: 02/04/14 04:08 pm Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
Continue on please!!!
Author's Response: Oh boy. I wish I could right now. But this story is on Major Hiatus. I'm sorry :(
Date: 04/21/11 04:10 am Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
I love it! More, please!
Author's Response: This story is on hiatus. Sorry. I'll add more when I feel like it again.
Date: 11/30/10 07:07 am Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
Btw, love the new banner, it's beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 11/29/10 06:14 pm Title: Stuck in the black and going to Esid
abundance of junk..?? xDD i couldn't have explained better :D
Author's Response: That was mean of me. I just feel like there's nothing but het on here lately. I don't even bother to read 99% of it.
Date: 11/29/10 06:49 am Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
Bill's calling-sound for his pet was the same Neytiri used when she called for her ikran, right? ^^ :P
Still loving this fic :3
Author's Response: I didn't intend for it to be the sound Neytiri used, but you can picture it that way if you like.
Date: 11/27/10 11:48 pm Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
They're finally finding things to talk about! I'm glad they're getting used to each other, at least.
I'm really enjoying how you work in the information... It's not all sitting and talking, they're doing things, too. Keeps the story moving nicely.
Author's Response: Finding each other tolerable is the first step to sexy forever love!
Well it wouldn't realy be a good story if I just told you everything and there was no character action at all, would it?
Date: 11/27/10 05:03 pm Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
lol no sex for Bill is super punishment XD But the alien relationship structure sure is weird >.<
I'm excited about the baby Bill is gonna have.
Author's Response: Bill isn't happy about the disruption Tom is in his life. The Plan'ik social structure is very different from that of the humans, that's for sure. You'll find out about that later.
Date: 11/27/10 11:24 am Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
Reading this story is like watching a movie! Thanks for writing it.
The characters are developed and their emotions and communicative interaction is fascinating to read! You tell just enough detail to keep it vivid, but not too much that it becomes dry. I also like how you subtly switch povs between Tom and Bill; it gives us insight to both sides of this story. Plus, you're spoiling us with such long chapters! ^^
All in all, it's SPECTACULAR and I love you for writing it. And you're so modest! "I'm happy if it's ok, I'm not gonna break my back to make it perfect..." pish posh, it's amazing!
Author's Response: "Reading this story is like watching a movie! Thanks for writing it."--That is the greatest compliment! Thanks so much for saying that. I've been trying to stick with limited omnescence of one character at a time, but it is a challenge, as my default is to write with pure omnescence. I'm also trying to have longer chapters from now on, especially since I post so rarely sometimes.
Date: 11/27/10 11:23 am Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
This continues to be excellent. And, I find myself unsurprised Tom was attracted to Peytani first. She's much, um, friendlier. Looking forward to more as always!
Author's Response: I thought it would be totally unbelievable if I had Tom instantly attracted to Bill. I like to have my characters fight, yell, despise, and even on occasion try to kill one another before they fall in love. Thanks for reading.
Date: 11/27/10 08:51 am Title: Stuck in the black and going to Esid
This story is sooo good! Your writing always reels me in, and this is no exception. The characterization runs pretty deep in this story and I love the effort you put into creating a beautiful setting and backstory for every character.
You're an amazing writer and this story is so enticing :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your kind words! I always try to write all the pictures that are in my head. Glad it comes across so nicely for you.
Date: 11/27/10 03:23 am Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
ahhh the plot thickens!!! I loved this chapter. It was very informative. No wonder Bill was so POed at her being up and around by the river. I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/27/10 03:11 am Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
LOL, this was a great chapter with a great end. very informative too. Thanks for another great update, I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks. It felt like a filler to me, so I just tried to put a lot of info in there to keep interest.
Date: 11/27/10 12:22 am Title: Getting to know the enemy and trying not to like it
i was waiting for that. It had been a very boring week here; it's nice to find that someone good updated
Author's Response: Aww what a flattering compliment, my narcissism grows. I've been noticing an abundance of junk too.
Date: 11/15/10 08:09 am Title: Stuck in the black and going to Esid
Yes lol I loed the chapter hah a
lol and I really like Bill I find him hilarious
Author's Response: Hilarious? Not the adjective I would choose, but glad you liked it.
Date: 11/15/10 04:47 am Title: Learning the lingo and getting in fights
HolyHellILoveGustav
Seriously. Love.
I fangirled so hard when I saw this was updated. I am thoroughly enjoying this story. :0)
~RazorSoftLie
Author's Response: Thanks. Gustav is pretty lovable in this fic.
Date: 11/15/10 03:13 am Title: Learning the lingo and getting in fights
yay for really finding gustav. I'm glad he amuses Bill as he amuses me too. I'm glad Bill is going to have to spend more time with tom too, it will be good for them. thanks for the great updates, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/15/10 03:04 am Title: Hunting Gustav and putting up with "Baaile"
yay for finding gustav, and for Bill being forced to be cooperative. =)
Author's Response: Haha, yeah.
Date: 11/14/10 10:15 pm Title: Learning the lingo and getting in fights
*snicker* Oh, Gustav... I agree with Bill. He's "an odd creature."
Ouch, Tom. Poor guy just can't seem to win. Hopefully that will change eventually.
Author's Response: I've really designed Gustav's character to the extreme. He's odd and comical. And Gustav is not serious and muscled in my head. In my head he's roly-poly and adorable. As to Tom never winning, maybe that's why he's so negative about stuff.
Date: 11/14/10 07:13 pm Title: Learning the lingo and getting in fights
well that explains the sign language thing, and why most of hteir sentances are rather short when speaking, at least he english ones. Great chapter. I'm so glad they found Gustav and that he is ok. Silly guy didn't even realize he was missing, let alone how long. I would have liked to know what Gustavs reaction to the ship leaving was though, seeing as they must have told him by now a month after they've been there. Do their women not take to pregnancy well in general, or does Kifa personally have a bad history with it? Or was she really more far along than Tom realized?I really like how you've taken so much time to develope the culture and stuff for this fic. this was great chapter. I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Yes, that's why. Gustav knew they'd been seperated, he just underestimated the danger of that and misappropriated his energies and interests. In other words... he got distracted. You will find out about the pregnancy thing later. So great that you're liking the "culture and stuff."
Date: 11/14/10 06:56 pm Title: Learning the lingo and getting in fights
Damn sorry I didn't review last chapter:S
Author's Response: Well then maybe this should have been a review?