Date: 11/08/10 08:03 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
OH MAY GOSH!!! Those waters are so dark O.O Witch Bill to the rescue?
Date: 11/08/10 08:02 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
Uh-oh. Tom's in a bit of a predicament right now, isn't he? :D I hope he doesn't get eaten!!
Jane
Date: 11/08/10 07:59 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
:O Nooo!!!!!
Date: 11/08/10 03:59 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
And you left it here? How typical.
I hope you update this soon! Can't wait ;) He really needs some rescuing right now. Bill maybe...?
xx
Date: 11/08/10 03:47 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
I love this story so far! Your characterization of Tom is perfect--and probably the closest to Tom in real life (or at least in interviews) as I've read in awhile: cocky and a bit dumb, but not a bad guy.
I'm looking forward to more!
Date: 11/08/10 03:45 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
Oh my god. What kind of friends are these that let him go off in his boat after drinking that much? Shame on them! Here's hoping Tom somehow rights himself or that Bill's jealous streak keeps away gators as well!
Date: 11/08/10 02:56 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
uh oh. Tom's in trouble now!!
Date: 11/08/10 01:24 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
of course he would tip it over when he's drunk...i hope someone (like bill) comes to his rescue...
Date: 11/08/10 12:22 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
Drunk ass. Same rules apply, liquor and vehicles of transportation do not mix. Tom needs to go to the Bill the Swamp Witch and ask for a clue!
Date: 11/08/10 12:15 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
I was wondering what exactly that potion had done to him, haha! It cursed him, didn't it? Oh, man, oh man, I'm loving this! You're so good with linguistics; no matter what the era, you have a way of writing it as if a person from that period or place is speaking the story themselves. Seriously, I love you for that! *_*
I bet Bill is jealous; turning all those women away from Tom so that he can have him for himself, hehe! Everyone seems to see it but Tom. Oh, Tom, open your eyes, dear boy! ^_^
I'm looking forward to the next update, and I can guarantee that when it comes, I'll make noises every bit as undignified as the ones I made tonight, haha! ;)
Date: 11/08/10 12:02 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
YOU ARE AN EVIL PERSON, YOU.
Date: 11/07/10 11:57 pm Title: lookin' for love all over
I was in the middle of singing a song when the recent page loaded, and I ended up going, "Do you ever feee--WHOOOOOOOO!" and my roomie jumped. XD So, yeah. Now you know; your fics do strange things to me. XD Anyways, off to read! *skips off*
Date: 11/07/10 04:30 pm Title: wanna know what's in your potion
OH! I'm officially in love with this fic; read both chapters in one sitting and am aching for more. This is such a unique idea, and... and... *stutters and stammers and stumbles and finally just passes out*
Date: 11/07/10 04:27 pm Title: wanna know what's in your potion
lol, i love this Bill, he is too funny. thanks for the udpate!
Date: 11/07/10 12:52 am Title: wanna know what's in your potion
Hahaha I really like how you wrote Bill :D
Date: 11/06/10 06:22 pm Title: wanna know what's in your potion
poor tom...although in some screwed up way, i'm sure he deserves it...
Date: 11/06/10 05:59 pm Title: wanna know what's in your potion
This is such a cool story! I just read this chapter and at the part where Tom is going on with Chantelle, and then the dream, a song of sirenia was playing with the lyrics "you will never realise what darkness lies inside, in side my mind." so that was funny, and right after that, when I was reading about Tom going back to Bill, Girlfriend by Avril Lavigne came on. the coincidence just made the chapter even better XD I really love this story, so soon already :D
Date: 11/06/10 08:47 am Title: wanna know what's in your potion
Ahahaha, Bill's a tricky one. Tom's going to learn soon enough that it's not girls he wants, it's Bil. ;) I do feel kind of sorry for Chantelle, though. It's not really her fault Tom isn't a raging mess of hormones. Although I do fear what will happen when people find out Tom's hot for the witch. XD
btw, I love when it's a male witch. I'm writing a het story where Bill is half faery and half witch on another site and it's quite entertaining, except he's more of the witch in Kiki's Delivery Service, and he's all, "Tom, my broomstick can barely go fifty miles an hour and all the other cars on the highway pass me! ;_;" I do enjoy seeing a more serious, official-witch Bill. :) I keep getting this picture of him dressed all in black with his hair hiding his face until you get really close to him, and then he looks up and you're like o_____o
I like that you put the picture right in my head. I really do. :3
Date: 11/05/10 10:35 pm Title: wanna know what's in your potion
Surgery?! I really hope it went well ^^
This story is fascinating. You always come up with the most original character and plot, it's always a pure delight to read stories from you. This chapter was awesome, I can't wait to read where you're gonna take this and what Bill is up to! I can't wait for the next chapter :D
Date: 11/05/10 10:10 pm Title: wanna know what's in your potion
Aww poor Tom. I have the feeling Bill won't be saying no for too long. haha. I can't wait for more.