Date: 12/04/10 01:02 pm Title: lost in a love hangover
*flails madly at seeing more of this* It's gettin'...intimate.
I love the use of language, it's great at setting the scene. Bill is such an intrigue, such a sexy mystery!
Date: 12/04/10 10:47 am Title: lost in a love hangover
OOOOO a kiss!! *bounces* But how will Tom feel in the morning when he's sober? Loved this chapter hon, can't wait for more *hugs*
Date: 12/04/10 10:41 am Title: lost in a love hangover
Wow. I love the atmosphere you create with your words in this fic so much! It's really different and original, you're definitely very talented. The ending of this chapter was adorable! I can't wait to read more =D
Date: 12/04/10 10:30 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
Oh hell, that's not good.
Poor Tom, the whole town knowing the effects of the potion and all the girls knowing why he took it. I truly adore Bill as the swamp witch, it seems to suit him so well. *runs to next chapter*
Date: 12/04/10 09:56 am Title: wanna know what's in your potion
*Cackles* Oooh Bill that was not nice!! I love how cocky Tom is yet when it comes to Bill he seems to be all in a tissy. Great chapter honey *hugs*
Date: 12/04/10 07:33 am Title: lost in a love hangover
Oh, what a darling chapter! I love these characters; how Tom's such a good-natured dolt, and how Bill can't quite be patient with him.
Date: 12/04/10 05:18 am Title: lost in a love hangover
I'm smiling like a fool :)
Date: 12/04/10 02:24 am Title: lost in a love hangover
Ahaha, Bill did it just because he needed something to do. XD I can totally see Bill doing something like that and laughing as he watched Tom stumble around like an idiot. I like how...not dark, but kind of...the last half of the chapter was. It was a good feeling to leave the chapter off with. Can't wait for the rest of the story. :)
Date: 12/04/10 01:35 am Title: lost in a love hangover
Adfjkadlfasafdjlfah! I love it, as usual, Kish! Seriously, I love it, so much. Tom is just so... boneheaded. But loveable; he's just so oblivious to the fact that Bill wants him to himself. And Bill is so dark, mysterious. I can't help but always call him the voodoo man everytime I think of this story. But who better to be a witch doctor than Bill?
I love how Tom always thinks of summer when he thinks of Bill. I can't help but wonder if there's a specific reason why that's what comes to mind; is there a memory or something? Or does Bill remind Tom of his mother? I know he mentioned in this chapter that Bill gave him the same look as his mother had whenever he'd done something dumb, and he was expecting Bill to box his ears as well. It's just something I'm curious about. :3
This is my favorite story, so it's always a joy reading more, and I'm surely looking forward to the next chapter!
Also, I don't know if you've seen "The Princess and the Frog", but your fic title makes me think of this song every time. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jUAQKTAm5CE ♥
Date: 12/04/10 01:28 am Title: lost in a love hangover
:O I wonder what Tom is going to think about the that the next morning :D
Date: 12/04/10 01:15 am Title: lost in a love hangover
*_*
This thing is so... atmospheric. I'm loving it.
Date: 12/04/10 01:03 am Title: lookin' for love all over
EEEEEEEEEE OMG YOU UPDATED!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!! I just wanted to say that and spazz all over you beefore I actually got started, just so you know how much I adore you. ^_^
Now, to go read, then spazz again--hopefully in a more coherent manner. >_>
Date: 12/04/10 01:03 am Title: lost in a love hangover
me thinks it be not hate the witch-man Bill be feelin'...great update! keep up the awesome work!
Date: 11/08/10 09:26 pm Title: in rapture there is no cure
uh oh! billlllll, save his poor, lost self! bill's voodoo seems to have made tom incapable of straying away from him...mentally at least
Date: 11/08/10 06:59 pm Title: in rapture there is no cure
Ohhh I just love a witch Bill!
Date: 11/08/10 02:43 pm Title: in rapture there is no cure
OMG! That was such an evil place to end the chapter! Brilliant, mind you, but evil nonetheless! I just love how this is evolving, heehee, Bill is so mysterious and Tom is way in over his head here, in more ways than he can imagine. I'll be looking forward to more. :D
Date: 11/08/10 01:55 pm Title: in rapture there is no cure
I'm so in love with this story! I love how you describe Tom's interactions with everyone -- the girls, the guys when they tease him in this chapter. I love his horror when he realises he can't get hard, and later that so many people know. (Sorry, Tom! It's just too hilarious not to love; besides, I think you'll be compensated. *pets Tom*)
And Bill. Omg, Bill is so wonderful. *___* Evil, but wonderful! I can't wait to see what he wants from Tom. I love how mysterious he is, and so attractive and powerful. Making Tom feel it when he touches the parcel! It's absolutely amazing.
I love their dynamic in the story -- as Georg puts it, "The missus'll take you back." Lol! I have no idea what happens next, who makes a move and what it's going to be, but I'm sure it'll be as marvellously entertaining as the story has been so far!
Date: 11/08/10 01:26 pm Title: in rapture there is no cure
Ohhhhh, shiz. Bill's gonna have to save Tom. I'm worried even though I know Tom's not going to die. XD I live in Florida, so gators are an actual threat around here. We even learned how to tell where alligators and crocodiles have been, where they've climbed up out of the water, because the brush and dirt is all flattened by the gator's tail. Part of why I want so badly to go back to NJ. FL has way too many freaky things. Gators, hurricane season, severe heat...I want my snow back. XD Luckily I'm moving there in three weeks, so...
OFF-TOPIC, KTHX. I'm wondering kind of where Bill came from. Like, where he was before the bayou. His past is very interesting to me. :o Like, since you dont talk about it and have him just appear and live there, it's making me wonder what has happened to him in the past. I suppose I'll find out eventually. :3
Date: 11/08/10 10:16 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
Wow! This story is fascinating! The universe you created is amazing and the characters are very interesting! Can't wait to read what will happen to poor Tom!
Date: 11/08/10 09:43 am Title: in rapture there is no cure
oh my, this is really interesting so far. I'd love to see more.