Date: 09/19/14 06:16 am Title: le petite mort...
TH boys' way of waking up, before they have to face the world for another day...
Date: 04/13/13 08:01 pm Title: le petite mort...
aw so yummy :3
Date: 07/09/12 12:48 am Title: le petite mort...
love it....why are these storys never long?
Date: 12/27/11 11:35 pm Title: le petite mort...
Well...I have to agree and disagree that you're bad at writing smut. Agree, because it wasn't a great smutfic, and disagree, because I can totally see how it COULD have been. I think, if you'd written it with the TomxBill stuff, then the GeorgxGustav stuff (or GeorgxGustav first then TomxBill), instead of switching between the two, it could've been a really awesome smut fic. The only thing I can say is that it's definitely not fluff. It's a lot more like angst, especially with the end line. It definitely shows the sweeter, more loving side of yaoi (Japanese word for gay porn. As an otaku, I prefer that word, because no one (except my fellow otaku friends) knows what I'm talking about XD), but the sweeter, more loving side of yaoi has a very dark side: that, often, that sweet, loving side can only be shown in private. That makes almost any yaoi fluff fics into angst, but it especially does that when one of the last lines is "Four boys got ready to face another day in the public eye, pretending that it didn't hurt that they couldn't hold their significant others all the time." I mean...that's just a really angsty line. It was still an awesome fic, though ^-^ Well done ^-^
Date: 09/07/11 02:33 pm Title: le petite mort...
i didn't know there was a sweet side to gay porn. but if there is, this is definitely it.;)
Author's Response: Awsh, that is actually really good to hear! Haha thanks so much ^^
Date: 11/30/10 05:31 pm Title: le petite mort...
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE :D
this is amazinggg!!!and u said i didn't exist... bitch -.-'' jk lol
but now u have my account i think? maybe whatever i love this lots its amazingful
Author's Response: THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS THANKS :DrnAwsh, danke twin!! Nooo, I said I couldn't find your name in search THEN I said it's coz you had no storreh's. and yeah, you're in my favourite authors now! :DrnLOL haven't you read the full version on dA?
Date: 11/18/10 01:04 am Title: le petite mort...
aws! I loves it! Good job
Author's Response: Why, thank you, love!
Date: 11/06/10 05:27 am Title: le petite mort...
That was so sweet for a pwp. Fluffier than I expected. Awesome!
Author's Response: Awsh, thanks a bundle!
Date: 11/01/10 11:42 pm Title: le petite mort...
this is very cute, very sweet.
Author's Response: Why, thank ya, thank ya very much ^^
Date: 11/01/10 02:38 pm Title: le petite mort...
Awww...this was actually so sweet <3
Good job! You should be proud :D
Author's Response: Why, thank yoooouuu (:rnIt's reviews like these that make me proud!rn
Date: 11/01/10 12:12 pm Title: le petite mort...
it was really sweet...and sexy!
Author's Response: Why, thank you!
Date: 11/01/10 10:38 am Title: le petite mort...
Well I disagree with you; you write great smuff The smut was great and loving, a nice way for them each to start their mornings with the ones they love.
Author's Response: Why, thank you so much! Smuff, eh? I wonder how I never even thought of that term... Well, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 11/01/10 09:24 am Title: le petite mort...
What a way to start the day, sweet, loving hot smut!LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Awsh, thank you very much ^^
Date: 11/01/10 08:59 am Title: le petite mort...
This was completely adorable.
I love when fluff and smut are mixed together in a story.
It makes me feel all happy inside.
Donīt worry about the length of the chapter.
Itīs not about the length of the story.
Itīs all about the contense of it.
Author's Response: Why, thanks you very much!rnYeah, me too! This was my attempt at it, and I'm glad you enjoyed ^^rnI'm glad to here that.rnYes well, I'm glad you see it like that! ^^
Date: 11/01/10 08:26 am Title: le petite mort...
I Lust this *coughs*
Author's Response: Haha, well thank you very much ^^