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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/12 07:46 am Title: Where's Tomi?

this was a good story!

Reviewer: XxPhantomGuidexX Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/11 05:48 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

I should do that to my friends (: and a very cut ending! :)

Author's Response: *giggles* thanks, it would be fun to do but really mean as well.

Reviewer: iloveandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/10 06:41 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

That was really interesting. I loved it. Poor Bill had to go through all that scary stuff but it was still good at the end. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much =^_^=

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/10 02:07 am Title: Where's Tomi?

this was great. I think Bill could have been mad longer, or more upset. I just wanted Tom to feel guiltier. but great job, i loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you for you review ^_^. i think my problem was i couldn't hold off on jumping right into the happy ending *has horrible self control* it's something i'll have to work on. thanks again, glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Jelly Pencil Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 11:36 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

This is marvelous! I'm surprised to hear it's your first fic. =) I feel so bad for Bill. Tom is an awful brother! And an awfully sweet one, but he still deserves all the scolding Simone dishes out! Bill calling their mom was such a cute detail.

I could pictures the horror scene and Bill discovering it by the light of his phone. My favorite detail in the fic has to be Bill cuddling up to Tom even when he thinks he's dead -- disturbing, and yet kind of adorable. ;)

I hope there will be more fic from you in the future! ^-^

Author's Response: aww thank you for this review, i love waking up to things like this *gives extra candy* When I put the bit with Bill snuggling up to Tom I was in the mindset of "yes, he thinks he's dead, but that's still his brother so he could still take comfort in that." hehe *claps hands enthusiastically* thanks again for this review, and no this is not the last you've seen of me *cackles maniacally*

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 11:01 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

That was a really good first fic! But omg, that was such a mean thing to do on Tom's part! Just imagining how Bill must have felt made me so sad. I can't imagine the twins without one other so faking his death was kinda cruel of Tom. But it makes a great Halloween fic and Bill forgave him, so it's all good! I really enjoyed it :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much *bows* I know it was kinda really extremely mean for Tom to plot something like that, that's why I had them throw a party for Billa. I couldn't end it with him being mad at Tom, like at all. *gives cookie* hopefully that makes up for making you sad!

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 10:56 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

okay that was awesome! first the trick, and then the treat! and poor georg, can't get any alone time!

Author's Response: XD i'm glad you liked it. you know it never really donned on me that Geo didn't get to finish his alone time....

Reviewer: Billsexxxual Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 10:19 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

I liked this. :)

Author's Response: thank you! ^_^

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 08:24 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

aww..i loved the ending..
brilliant story & very well written
*takes candy* and *gives you Bill cookies*

Merry Halloween ! (wait that doesn't sound right..Happy Halloween!

did you go trick or treating? i spent the evening handing out candy to stupid kids.. did you dress up? X

Author's Response: A very merry All Hallows' Eve to you as well ^_^rnrnthank you for the review (and cookies hehe)rnrnNo, sadly there was not tricking or treating. We haven't even had any kids come up to our door (more candy for me hehe)... and currently im dressed up as a 19 yr old in her pajamas who'd been up since 2 AM. (Best costume ever :) )

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 08:11 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

Epic Halloween prank! The boys should have known that Bill would take it pretty badly!

Author's Response: *giggles* silly boys. but at least they made it up to him in the form of a halloween party =^x^=

Reviewer: AmyJean76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 08:00 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaw!! I love you, Heidi! :D This is just what I needed. *grumbles* Stupid old man Joop. >.

Author's Response: haha dont get in a funky mood again *gives skittles* BUT if you do just read the story again and it'll make you feel better haha. Thank you again for helping me out with this!!! <333333

Reviewer: Tomi_N_Billa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/10 07:53 pm Title: Where's Tomi?

OMG!!!!! KAWAII!!!!!!! it was AMAZING!!!!

Author's Response: thank you so much ^_^ *gives candy*

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