EEEE Mein Liebe!!!! this was amazing, hot, sexy, beautiful-and everything in between. U r by far, one of my favorite authors!!! :-) du u take requests by any chance?

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! Glad you liked it so much. I haven't ever taken a request, and I do have a few stories that I need to be working on, but if you tell me what your request is, I might consider writing it. Let me know!

Ach mein gott....
I was digging around in all myriads of requests on toho_kinkmeme last night until I found this one. This was such a piece of brilliance.
You have written chemistry between the twins so well, Tom being so shy, Bill trying to please Tom by giving him this present and the lady delivering the gift was written superbly, so to my taste. I happen to be incredibly territorial when it comes to OFC in Bill/Tom stories, I can barely tolerate them at all. This one though was really good. It is pretty funny I almost liked her; given the fact she was aggressive and dominating she was never overpowering or threatening to Tom/Bill constellation and THAT I liked a lot. Although I have to say I could almost feel how Bill's stomach was all in knots when he had to watch Tom being handled like that by someone else and actually enjoying it. Wicked mix of arousing elements, anxiety, jealousy and worry for Tom's well-being. You balanced the fic so nicely with dominatrix's presence. Good job.

My most favorite moment must have been when you depicted their eye contact, just gazing into each other´s eyes while Tom was being pleasured and Bill was restrained by cuffs watching it; not being able to touch, the only contact possible was the visual one....that was incredibly sensual, expressive, erotic, intense and so intimate.... you mastered the ambiance, the emotional aspect, the bodily reactions.....overall brilliance.
This goes to my favorites!

Author's Response: I usually hate OFCs as well. I tried to write this one in a way that territorial readers wouldn't mind. Glad all of those emotions and aspects came through so clearly for you. Thanks so much!

haha, oh man, that was....crazy. i didnt know what kinkmeme was either until recently (i googled it as to not admit defeat) xD way not something i would have ever thought of, but man, good. you seem to be into voyeurism lately ;P

Author's Response: Well it was a prompt, so I can't take credit for the idea, though I have considered doing fics where Bill has a more long-term relationship with a dominatrix xD Hey yeah, you're right I have been writing voyeuristic stuff, haven't I? I hadn't noticed =)

I've been looking for a fic like this *____*
OH EM GEE!!!
You have no idea how much I loved this!
It was beyond amazing! So incredible hot *_*
I adored the way you characterized the twins. Tom is so adorable when he's all shy :3 and thr way Bill had to hold back his jealousy - BRILLIANT!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the way I wrote the twins. ShyTom is one of my favorites. Thanks for the nice review.

There's something about your OFC that made me instantly like her. I like how professional she is, and how she manages to get the twins more comfortable in a for them quite 'difficult' situation.

I love shy-yet-eager!Tom :) I love that Bill has temporarily taken over the big brother-role from Tom. It's amazing how they're always there for one another, doesn't matter what kind of situation they're in.

Priceless! She physically closes their mouths. xD She must really be a sight in her dominatrix-outfit.

The forms had allowed them to create their scene, or rather Tom’s scene, to a very elaborate degree, detailing all the specifics of what they wanted, and more importantly, what they didn’t want.
I like how they got the opportunity to keep some kind of control of the situation, even though it's only about the setting of the room, while the whole experience is mainly about giving up control.

Sexy, Bill is getting turned on already, that's promising for later on. Also, I like how you described Tom's position, I didn't really need to look at the picture to get an accurate idea.

“you put down anything you want, ok? This is for you. It’s supposed to be perfect.”
“There’s nothing on there that you could pick that would make me think badly of you.”
This melted my heart, it's an absolutely perfect thing to say.

Tom’s eyes meet his, and with his pupils blown wide, lips parted, he does not look the least bit embarrassed.
I love that Tom's just enjoying the experience, and left his embarrassment behind.

and yet somehow Bill feels about an inch tall in front of her.
Must be an intimidating woman.

That's some convincing acting that woman is doing. And Bill restrained on the wall, leaving him to do nothing but watch Tom? Oh god...

I like Bill being jealous because someone else is touching his Tom. And the “Yes, Mistress.” is complete win.

Bill reminding himself that this is what Tom wants, and that despite his protectiveness he's turned on by everything that's going on, things like that gives the story depth because of the character development, it makes it a bit more than just porn. Maybe PWP here stand for Porn With Plot instead of Porn Without Plot.

It's kinda thoughtful of the woman to undo Bill's pants, but on the other hand, it doesn't really matter if his pants are on or off, because he can't do anything to get some relieve anyway, gotta love those restraints on his wrists.

Poor Tom, it must be torture, that gap in the table. But at the same time, I think it's genial!

The things she’s doing to Tom, and talking about doing to him, are beyond hot.
Hell yes, they are!

Well you will today. Your twink brother may not have the stamina to fuck you till you come, but I do.”
I bet Bill will prove some time that she's wrong.

Oh my, Bill and Tom being hot, makes me feel hot.

“Does it feel good?”
I love how much that simple question means.

I feel so sorry for Tom when he made that strange noise, it's almost like I can feel his desperation, it makes me want to go over to him and give him what he needs.

I really like the two sides of the OFC, the dominatrix one and the 'normal human' one. It's a kind gesture that she immediately leaves the room after Tom has come and she freed Bill.

It's lovely that Bill's first concern is Tom, making sure he's alright, even though he must still have a raging hard-on. I'm glad Bill got to come as well eventually.

How adorable that after the experience Tom's all shy again, and Bill has to pay and thank the woman. I like that Bill really appreciates what the woman has done for them, because after all, Bill's main goal is to make his Tom happy.


Damn, that was HOT!! And so well-written!

I left only a few words when I first read this on toho_kinkmeme, but I absolutely LOVED this story, so I decided that you deserved a proper review (it turned out kinda long, sorry).
This story will find a place in my favorites, and I can't wait to read more fills from you.
Thank you for writing this.

Author's Response: I'm so glad the OFC was agreeable to you. I usually have to be convincced to like an OFC, and I think that, at least in one sots like this, the more vague about the woman, the better. That's why I didn't giver her a name.

Actually, I think most professional domiatrixes cater to what the client wants, even though like you said it's "supposed" to be about giving up control.

That's very reassuring to hear, that you could picture t from what I wrote. I wasn't really sure if people would be able to.

Aww, thank you forbeing sweet and thinking my smutty fic has plot!

Glad you could notice the two parts to the OFC. The dominatrix is just a character she puts on for her clients, beneath that is a regular person.

Don't ever apologize for a long review! They're the best kind! Thank you so much you don't know what a treat it is to get a review like this where the reader goes through all the things they liked in the story. You made my day =)

I was so excited to see this prompt filled! I loved the idea when I first read the prompt and hoped someone would write it. So glad you did! To see it come to life like this was out of control! Thank you!

Author's Response: You're welcome! Glad you liked the way I spun it.

GAH! I love you for this, you hear me? love you. That was perfect, beyond perfect. I can't make a coherent review. ZOMG!

It was hot, burning hot, insanely hot and sweet and so full of twinlove and awkward!Tom and Tom getting a rubber cock in his ass is the hottest thing ever. I would sell my grandma AND my kidney to be in that woman's position.

When I read this prompth from kinkmeme, I was expecting something nice, but this was ever more than I expected. Please, do write more prompths! Definitely favoriting this!

Author's Response: Thanks for your nice words! I would sell a few body parts too to get Tom alone in a "play room." Glad you found it both steamy and sweet, and I love awkward Tom too. I will definately write more prompts if I see some I like. I just found out what everyone was talking about when they mentioned toho_kinkmeme, and now I'll check it all the time.

Very. Very. Very. Insanely. Hot.
I don't know what else to say. I loved it. I absolutely loved it and it was so well written. Thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's complete and total PWP; there really isn't much else to say about it except hot.

Very intense! Really interesting to watch Bill's reactions to what the woman was doing. Torn between that this is what Tom wants and the need to come and 'rescue' Tom and give it to him the way Tom is used to. Great job. *Maria

Author's Response: Thanks. I like hearing the specifics of what people like.