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Reviewer: Marita94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 22

What, Bill has a child?! Oh, shit, his new life is really complicated

Author's Response: Yes but it eventually will not be so bad... ;o) Thanks :o)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 22

uh oh....thanks for the update!!

Author's Response: Thank you :o)

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/28/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh god. So Karin's dead... but she didn't get an abortion!? Bill's child is out there!?
Well, this opens a new door if I'm correct.

Author's Response: I can't reveal anything ;-) but there are some new doors that Bill will have to open. His new life is really complicated. If he knew before he got to Beda and changed history! :-) Thanks a lot, Jamie. And love your reviews. :o* J.rn

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/10 10:48 am Title: Chapter 21

ooh, big twist. and are tom and bill going to end up with davey? =)

Author's Response: Really? Poor Tom in this case, for he does not like the snotty little kids! ;-D Thanks J :o)

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/10 10:07 am Title: Chapter 21

Beautiful chapter =)
Little David is so cute, he likes Bill from the first moment. And that's good =)

Author's Response: All children are amazingly cute :o) they are so innocent, the orphanages would not exist at all. Thanks, Jani :o)rn

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/10 06:17 am Title: Chapter 21

Bill would make such a good dad!

So Karin was Sabine's best friend? That was unexpected and I'm afraid it might change things between them...

I'm surprised Bill and Tom's parents took the new so well but I'm very happy =)

Author's Response: Twin's parents are rational, they know that love is stronger than anything. rnThanks and Happy Holidays additionally, Lune. J. :o)rn

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 21

oh goodness. That can't be good news. And dangit, those dreams... I'm as confused as Bill to whether or not theyre events in his life or just... dreams. Great chapter and merry christmas!!!!!

Author's Response: These are the events in Bill's life, his memory returns mainly in the moments when he sleeps, and when does not think his mind is clear. This really happened. Thank you, Jamie, enjoy your holidays! J. :o)rn

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 21

My favorite part of this installment must be the dream sequence, when Bill and Toma are coming out to their parents. It was really touching, and so realistically written....first worry, disbelief and finally prevailing love.

Author's Response: Thank you for your nice words, green_and_blue, they make my day nicer. After I spent today in the kitchen, I'm glad I live. :-D Thanks J. :o)

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/10 08:09 am Title: Chapter 20

Haha Sabine is a smart girl and funny girl =)
It's very nice of her to help children

Author's Response: :o) Thanks, Lune, I love Sabine, she is perfect girl. :o) Marry Christmas, enjoy your holidays. J. :o)

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/10 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 20

Children's Home ...
On this visit Bill will never forget =)
Nice =D

Author's Response: Yes, Bill can certainly remember this visit, it will be strong. J. :-) Thanks a lot, Jani :o*rn

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/10 03:55 am Title: Chapter 20

thanks for the update! i'm surprised sabine hasn't caught on yet.

Author's Response: Thanks :o)

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/20/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh god, my heart started racing when they got to the orphanage. I thought sabine wanted to adopt or something! I hope she doesn't end up adopting. If I was bill, I would tickle her to death too. I hate being mocked. great chapter :)

Author's Response: Sabine and Bill are very good friends, they apparently still behave this way but Bill does not know it yet. :-) In the next chapter, they meet with the children, I think it would be nice. Thank you, J. :o)rn

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 19

This story of Sabine is crazy xDDD
Really funny...xD

Author's Response: ;-D yes, poor Sabine with twins in their bed! :-D Thanks :o)

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 18

Amazing chapter!
I love this story =)

Author's Response: :-D Thanks a lot! :o)rnrnrnNo vidíš, že to jde, úplně to stačí, díky moc.

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 19

It's good to get the back story but I'm worried that Bill doesn't remember :( I hope soon he does! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Don't worry, he is in new life just a few days. Grandpa Schulz told him that it takes at least two weeks or month before he remembers. He meets with Sabine again in the next chapter, so we'll see... Thanks a lot :o) rn

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 11:24 am Title: Chapter 19

Sabine is really, really nice, she's obviously very different from her other self and I really like her =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Sabine, she is amazing. :o) Thanksrn

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 18

that was a wonderful chapter. great description by tom of how he felt and everything that led up to their birthday.

Author's Response: Thank you :o)

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 07:34 am Title: Chapter 18

Aww poor Tom =(

Author's Response: He is happy to have their new Bill, so he's not poor so much. ;-) Thanks a lot, J. :o)

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/14/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 18

sometimes I almost wish twincest would be real. This is the cutest story in the world!

Author's Response: :o) Twincest is real at least in our imagination, that's enough. Twins should not be an easy life with this, so we will prefer to dream about them. :o) Thank you somuch for your reviews, they're awesome. :o)

Reviewer: Katty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 18

I absolutely adore Tom in this chapter! :-)

Author's Response: :o) Simply "Space-Time Story" Tom. ;o)

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