Date: 11/04/10 01:55 am Title: Chapter 3
That first chapter made me cry, those letters broke my heart. To think of all the time wasted and to find out they actually felt the same about each other after all was heartbreaking.
I don't think bill willbe able to go in past and stay away from Tom;)
Author's Response: ;-) We'll see what does Bill. Bill is Bill, he never does what everyone. :-D I'm happy you like it, thanks a lot for your review, it means a lot to me. J. :o)rnPS: I'm sorry for any grammatical errors, my English is poor. ;-)
Date: 11/03/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
hmm...I don't see how Bill could go back and not save Tom, esp after reading those letters. Thanks for the update, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Violet :-) Next chapter will be on Saturday.
Date: 11/03/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow this story is quite intriguing! I love Back to the Future and I that you wrote a twincest story based on it.
I admit that I was almost crying with Bill while he was reading Tom's letters, but I trust your Author's Note: if you say it'll get better I believe it.
So, don't keep us waiting! I, for one want to know what will happen to Bill and his lost love!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much, I'm glad you like it. "Back to the Future" is a perfect movie, I'm glad you know it. I used it on just the basic idea. I hope I do not disappoint your expectations. :o) J. rn
Date: 11/02/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congratulation for publication it on THF =) I recommend this amazing story to everyone b29;
PS: sorry for my english xD
Author's Response: Thank you, Janca! :o*
Date: 11/02/10 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2
So sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks! :o)
Date: 11/01/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am really excited about this story and may I say that it would be officially the first slash story I am reading in two languages at the same time.
I would love to comment on both versions too as it is pretty fascinating to see how much they would diverge fro each other, meaning if anything gets lost in translation, lol:-)
Author's Response: I was wondering if you'r Czech and now I finally find out :o) I'm really glad that you read both versions of my story. And I'd be glad if you tell me those differences wich you find. :-) Thanks J. & my helper son Tom :o)
Date: 11/01/10 02:15 am Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD. i swear i had no idea this story existed, the first paragraph sounds EERILY like one of my stories tittled "DNA"; but now i've read some more, i have a feeling the resemblance ends there. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story :D
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review, Billa. :) You don't worry, our stories are certainly different. DNA hasn't role in this story. I apologize for my bad English, but this is not going to be better. :-D I hope I don't disappoint your expectations. I hope you understand me, ugh! Me and Google Translator :D
Date: 11/01/10 01:35 am Title: Chapter 2
ooh, very much looking forward to this meeting tomorrow. =)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. The next chapter will be on Wednesday. :o)
Date: 10/31/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my, I forgot again. Banner and trailer are great! Especially trailer. I must admit I am not interested in those things, but Kettyīs work is impressive! :-)
Date: 10/31/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Janule? A confession!!! I have never read this chapter before! I donīt know why, I can tell a whole story by heart, but except this chapter. Interesting, right? :)
It is such a touching chapter. Sonner or later Bill will get used it. That is life! But in this case we have a sci-fi story, so we will see. :-)
Author's Response: Katty, OMG! :-D This shocks me! :-D How could you do this to me? :-D Unbelievable! Award of crime! :-D rnI'm definitly glad that you finally red it. :-D Thank you for that. :-) I'll sleep better now! :-Drn
Date: 10/31/10 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this story from the first moment, youīre awesome writer
Author's Response: Oh, Thank you, Hinomaru, you flatter me! :o) I'm glad you like it. :-* J. rn
Date: 10/30/10 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness , that is so sweet.
I am more than super excited to see this story being posted over here. I have been reading TH slash like frantic over past couple of months being a relative newbie to a THF myself but so far everything I have read was in English only. I became familiar with Czech TH fan fiction site just a couple of days ago. I have noticed that some of the THF authors are heavily translated into Czech which is so great to see.
Are you officially the first Czech author over here? If so, congrats to that!
Interesting story. I am looking forward to see more of your work over here.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. :-) I'm second Czech author here, the first was Katie. She now translates stories from THF into Czech, which ones you've come to see. :-) The third Czech author is Deni_cookie here. :-) This is my second fiction on this site. :-) I'm thrilled that you like my story, it's amazing to me. My English is not very good, so I apologize if there are any mistakes. J. :o)rn
Date: 10/30/10 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god! My beloved author and my beloved story! I am absolutely speechless!
I love this story, you know it. I must admit it wasnīt love at first sight, of course, because of Tomīs death. To this day I cannot read the first chapter without tissue, there are just sadness and pain and hopelessness. Doesnīt matter I know the end of this story. ;-)
“Guess what, Lina just told me that she likes me! Can you believe that?" I donīt know why, but because of this innocent sentence I always start crying. Always. :-)
Sooo, it is enough to start off. ;-) I just wish your story a huge success on this site and lot of avid and satisfied readers.
Good luck!!!
And I agree with Deni_Cookie, I am proud of you, too. b29;
Author's Response: Thank you so so much, honey. When I wrote this story, I laughed out loud, if I told anyone that I'll post it on the site in English! :-D And now this is reality. Unbelievable to me. Absolutely! :-D Thank you for your support, Katty. :-* J. :o)rnrn
Date: 10/30/10 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This is great! I'm looking forward to the rest of it!
Author's Response: :o) Thanks, I'm happy. Tomorrow will be next chapter. :o) J
Date: 10/30/10 04:50 am Title: Chapter 1
I know this story, I have read it in czech and I have to say, that itīs really good. Iīm glad that this story is on this site and hope many readers will enjoy it :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for the wishes of many readers, Zuzu. :-* J. :o)rn
Date: 10/30/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, great trailer! ^^ And I'm glad to see you have 5 reviews already (6 including this one ;) ). You really deserve it.
If anyone is deciding whether to read this fic or not, based on the reviews it gets: I am the beta-reader and I've read most of the other chapters already; believe me, it's good. Just keep reading, follow this fic and you will get surprise after surprise. ^^
Author's Response: Thaks a lot, Koos! :-) You're very nice to me. Also thanks for your praise. :-* J. :o)
Date: 10/30/10 02:36 am Title: Chapter 1
i have to say that i am very glad you have already told us not to worry about Tom being dead. If I didn't know you were going to go back and fix this, this would be too sad and too much for me. As it is, it has lots of potential and I look forward to the rest of it. Post again soon please. =)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, there will be another chapter on Sunday. J. :o)rn
Date: 10/29/10 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay... I finally managed to read this chapter! *yeay me* Anyway... I've aldready told you, this is one of my favorites stories in Czech (still not the best one, but you know this) and I'm really glad to see it translated in this language! I'm really proud of you!
Anyway... it's a long time ago since I've read this story for the first time and I'm really happy I have a chance to read it again now! Though, it makes me cry! You know I've cried! xD The only luck of me is that I know what's going to happen next 'coz I'm sure right now it would be simply too much for me! xD
Well, once again: I'm really happy to see the story as good as this one withouth doubt is here and I'm looking forward for reading it again! I'm really proud it got here!
D.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Deni. I Love you. :-* :-* :-* J. :o)
Date: 10/29/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw...I almost cried. It's so perfect!
Date: 10/29/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, that was saddening... I like death fics, and the idea of reading letters until after death is pretty sweet. Original, but sweet to use!
I love Bill-loves-Tom-secretly-and-is-jealous-of-girl fics. xD They're very fun, and also heart shattering. :3
This was a very lengthy chapter, but still highly enjoyable.
Is it complete or incomplete? If incomplete, I wonder what Bill may do... It's called 'space time' so... it makes me curios. (?)
So Sabrine stabbed him in the heart. ;_; Wow, violent... and pretty.. fucked up. I can't respond to that. I wouldn't call that self defense, I mean she's a murderer. Instead of killing her faggin LOVER she could've knocked him out and gotten authority or something... better than death.
And Bill feels very out of the picture with Tom...
In the letter one where Tom admits he would've told Bill he loved him on their 18th birthday yet didn't b/c Bill didn't seem to be.. in the mood (?). My guess was that Bill was probably feeling the same way. o_o
If I just knew what I had done to both of us by my foolishness. I should have caught him in my arms and hugged him, touched him softly and maybe also kissed him. Everything could be different now.
Tom, my only love, I am really sorry, forgive me. I hope you can hear me up there. I hope you are in heaven and not down there, despite all the scandals you had. And if not, I would come for you down there.
N'awww.. That ^ is just precious and heart breaking.
;(
I found it cute how Bill refers to Scotty.. just because.
Death is a touchy subject, hard for a writer to perfect such feelings. Usually it's even harder if for you were writing the death of a lover/husband/wife/bf/gf ect. I don't know you at all, if you've experienced death of loved ones or not, but kudos b/c you did a very lovely job playing it out.
I'm not the biggest fan of first person stories, but they are by far much easier to write, though I prefer third person, it felt appropriate in this particular story considering it was revolving around Bill's inner feelings. And when you write in 3rd person usually you focus less on inner conflict and more on the essential plot.
/ramble
Lovely fiction, I'd love to read more from you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I'm glad you be keeping with reading even if you don't like first person fics :-) The story is here for readers for such a long time, the involution surely will be there, and not only one, I hope you will like it. :-) The story is finished since the year 2007, it's completely translated so it will be updated regularly. Thank you so much once again for your review. J. :o) rnrn