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Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 03:46 am Title: Chapter 12

oh, how sad that bill wasn't treating tom well. i am as anxious as they are for bill to get his memories back. thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Bill took a big risk when he overcame the space-time, so now he must wait for your memory. Hopefully everything will be good, love is strong. Thank you for your review, Violet J. :o)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 12

I loved this chapter, as someone else has already stated, the blossoming relationship of Tom and Bill feels too good to be true. Maybe it is a calm before approaching storm? Yeah, I know, I am only teasing because I so know what is about to come next :-)
Anyways, a great update!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, green_and_blue! You are my beloved reviewer, who never forget to write me, I love you. You sent me review number 100! I enjoy celebrating with a glass of Cinzano!Cheers! ;-D Thank you so so much! I send kisses! :o)rn

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 12

Incredible chapter!!
I'm happy just like Bill...
Amazing =)

Author's Response: :-) Amazing Janca, you never forget me, I hope you enjoy reading in English! :o* Many kisses for you! 99 reviews - this is increcible number! Thanks! :o)

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 12

awweh, these two lovely twins :) Great chapter! by the way, you are an incredibly fast updater, which is good :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much. It is easy to quickly add chapter, when the story is finished. I wrote it in 2007 in Czech, it took a lot of nerves, and one year to the translation of my friends, and now it's here. I enjoy that it succeeded, because it was not easy. Therefore I am happy that I can read your lovely reviews and attempt to answer that you understood me. It is also not easy for me. I love it. Thanks again to you letting me your thoughts here. J. :o)rn

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 12

Aw, their new found love is so beautiful, I'm scared of it being ruined when bill's memory returns. I just hope he never forgets what it was like to have lost his brother

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Love is strong, so we will hope... :o)rn

Reviewer: tokiohotel_love4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 12

OMG awesome can't wait :D

Author's Response: Thanks :o)

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 09:07 am Title: Chapter 12

The alternate Bill seems to be a much colder person...
I don't think he has a lover, I think it's a much darker secret...

Anyway I'm so happy you updated =D Great chapter !

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Lune. The next update will be on Tuesday, so we'll see what Bill doesn't know yet about himself. :o)rn

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 12:54 am Title: Chapter 11

uh oh, ominous tones. thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thanks for review :o)

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 11

Amazing chapter!!
Tom was tender...
Bill was waiting for this moment for so many years... very nice =)

Author's Response: Yes, Bill is happy man :o) Thanks, Jani :o*

Reviewer: TokioKoos Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 11

I'm glad to see you are getting so many good reviews and that you were nominated! It's a great story! ^^

Author's Response: :o) Thank you very much, Koos. Nomination is an honor for me! :o) J.

Reviewer: tokiohotel_love4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 11

OMG awesome can't wait :D

Author's Response: Thanks! We'll see on Sunday. J. :o)

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 11

wow, this was absolutely breathtaking... In this chapter you can see how much they truly love each other, you wrote it really beautiful and romantic. It was sweet, tender and with a little bit humor on the end - just great. :-) I am looking forward next chapter :) (and their really first lovemaking ;-)

Author's Response: OH, thank you so much, Zuzana. I'm glad you like it. ;-)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 08:25 am Title: Chapter 11

That was such a delicious installment.

I loved the build-up, all giddy excitement and nervousness Bill was feeling prior his first love-making to Tom, Tom's tenderness and careful approach, basically everything about that first mutual intimate moment.

I also adored how you wrote the exhiliration Bill was experiencing the morning after; the moment of pure happiness and delight over such a simple fact as of being able to wake up next to a person he loves the most in the whole world. I actually miss those moments in fan fiction sometimes. There is usually so much sexual extacy targeted , so much pleasure involved, some cuddling after wards but very rarely I come across to that what you captured so nicely...that feeling of sheer happiness and joy upon awakening the next morning. So, well done on that one.

I looooved the "Tom argues with his mom about having to go to school" routine he did with Bill. It was so great, so funny and so totally real and in the character. It was probably an ultimate highlight of this chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed their first romantic encounter in the new Bill's life. He waited so long for this, so he was in absolute ecstasy. Thanks for writing me a nice long review. Thank you so much J. :o)rn

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 02:18 am Title: Chapter 11

I love this story too much. I don't know what, but I have the feeling something's gonna happen soon... cuz this is all too good to be true... But I hope not! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Jamie. Remaining 29 chapters to the end, so we'll see if anything happens. ;-) Bill has first to remember his life and maybe everything is not as he expected. :o)rn

Reviewer: ArielBrianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 10

lol. cute!

Author's Response: Thanks, Ariel! ^__^ *learning new emoticons*rn

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/10 04:04 am Title: Chapter 10

So sweet =D I'm glad everything alright =D

Author's Response: =) I'm glad you like it. Thanks :o)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

thanks for another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for another review! ;-D J.

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 10

LoL indeed OUCH!!

Author's Response: :-D Thanks :o)

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/10 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 10

Lovely, lovely, lovely. Pure domestic bliss for those two.
Biting into a frozen popsicle at the end was a really nice touch.

Author's Response: =) They are a lovely couple, I love them together. Let's keep fingers crossed for them. Thanks :o*rn

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 10

And what was Bill featuring? xD
I like that Bill knows how to cook =)
It is beautiful how Bill and Tom are getting to know...
Nice =)

Author's Response: :-D Thanks, Janca! Yes, Bill is perfect partner. ;o)

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