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Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/10 11:22 am Title: Chapter 17

Awww =) I'm so glad Bill was able to change the past! Let's hope everything will be alright! Please tell me there will be a happy ending!

Author's Response: :o) I can't promise that everything will go smoothly, it is soon to end but... you will see. ;o) J.rn

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 17

awwww... that was one of the best chapters so far! "It's the beginning of us." And that's when I could feel the tears too :D Love you and this story so much!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :o) I'm so glad you love my story, it means a lot to me. The next chapter will tell Tom how he fell in love with Bill. I hope it will like you. :o)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 17

I love that adult Bill was in the video. thanks for the update!

Author's Response: When I wrote it, was 2007, I am sorry that they have not played in any movie. Maybe 2011th :o) Thanks

Reviewer: Katty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 17

I love chapters like this one. So funny and nice and peaceful. No Karin, no troubles, no police, just Bill and Tom in bed and their "I love you" :-)

Author's Response: Well, Katty, I like to write it, too. :o)rn

Reviewer: Katty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 16

Hmmmm....

Just kidding!!! ;-)

This is such a desperate situation. I feel so sorry for my little Bill. I don´t like people lying but I can understand he doesn´t want to hurt Tom´s feelings.

Janule, really impressive!

Author's Response: Hmmmm... Kattys, really thank you! :-D

Reviewer: Katty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 15

Yeah, we are in trouble! Karin looks like the sort of person who always makes trouble. Poor the new Bill, poor Tom and poor me, of course! :-)

Author's Response: Yes, poor you, you have to read everything and suffer with them again and again and again... ;D rn

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter
Idyll of beautiful home, relaxing by the TV ... xD
That birthday video was awesome...

Jani, vadilo by hodně, kdybych komentáře psala v češtině? =)

Author's Response: Thanks, Jani :o)rnrnin Czech: No, Jani, asi by tomu nikdo nerozuměl, což je blbý :-D Klidně se na to vykašli a piš mi jen nějaký blbosti jako většina, klidně ty výkřiky a smajly obšlehni, to bude stačit. :-D Dceru už to nebaví, co? Já se jí nedivím. :-D

Reviewer: Katty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 14

Just because of you, my beloved author... I mean I don´t like BotTom. Maybe it sounds funny, but I cannot help myself.:-) But on the other hand I appreciate Tom´s effort, he is just sweetheart. :-)

Author's Response: I know you're my favorite reader, who will forgive me everything. :-) Woman, botTom, everything. Thanks for your beautiful words. It means a lot to me. :o)rn

Reviewer: Katty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/10 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 13

Oh my, Karin on the stage! She is just a dream or a flash of a new memory and I already don´t like her.:-) You know, no women, no men, just Tom and Bill... happily ever after. :-)

Author's Response: :-D No women? :-D Oh, poor woman. :-D What would a world without women? :-D They are not likeable, but they are sometimes needed. Some things the men did not manage without them, you know. ;-Drn

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh, Tom is so sweet :) Nice chapter :)

Author's Response: Yes, I agree, Tom is amazing. What once wrote Michelle M., he is simply "Space-Time Story Tom" :-) Thanks :o)rn

Reviewer: Katty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

This sex is just... just... well written :-) I really admire your skills of writing. It is so gentle and exciting as well. Like Tom and Bill.:-)

Author's Response: You're so good to me, thanks a lot! :o)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/10 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 16

interesting. but bill better stop lying, its going to get him in trouble. thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Yes, you're right. Thanks for the review, the next update will be soon. :o)rn

Reviewer: Katty Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/10 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 11

Tom like a tender lover? Yes, I am sure, he cerntainly is, I agree with you and I love him in this story. :-)
I like this chapter because this reading is sweet, funny and touching. As always. :-)

Author's Response: I love that you love it, you know. ;o) Thanks :o*rn

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/10 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 16

Bill, Bill...
If you only knew...
Karin will be in your life for long time...

Author's Response: ;-) Yes, long time, you're right. Thanks, Jani :o*

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/10 07:47 am Title: Chapter 16

So she was a blackmailer? I knew it!

I'm glad she died, I hate parasites.

Author's Response: Karin was not the best girl, that's true, but no one deserves to die. :o) Maybe she was not happy so she did a desperate thing. Thanks for review :o) J. rnrn

Reviewer: kissme_goodbye47 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/08/10 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oh, god, I was mentally freaking out when Karin said Bill was the father but calmed down when she said she was getting an abortion. Honestly, and this is going to sound so cruel, but I'm kinda glad she's dead. Amazing chapter, as always!

Author's Response: Well, Karin was really a bad girl. I'm glad you like it. J. :o)

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/10 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 16

I think Bill needs to learn a lesson about telling lies and half truths to the person he claims is the love of his life. It really gets me angry when he lies to Tom.
I honestly think that Tom will be able to deal with the truth in the long run. Lies scar 4ever :(

Author's Response: Yes, Bill is a liar but he still does not know the full truth about the "old Bill", so he has it tough. Any way to hell is paved with good intentions. Thanks for your review. J. :o)rn

Reviewer: green_and_blue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bill! To have a "dream" like that and then being woken up by Tom's tender whispering into his ear. What a mind fuck. I am surprised he is in enough good condition to make those pancakes for Tom. But yeah for pancakes ŕ la Central European style....whipped cream and jam (what kind of jam would Bill like, was it strawberry one?)

I can't stand Karin's character, btw.

Author's Response: Well, poor Bill has to be ready for anything, he's getting used to. Of course, strawberry jam! :-D Thank you :o)

Reviewer: tokiohotel_love4ever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 15

OMG can't wait awesome :D

Author's Response: Thanks ;o)

Reviewer: Janca Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 15

Poor Bill, and he don't know everything yet...
Super =)

Author's Response: :o) Thanks, Jani :o*

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