Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 10:28 am Title: Five Times Tom And Georg Spooned And One Time It Led To Something More

AAAAAAAAAAAH.

YES.

Oh, man. I loved every second of this. Amazing! There's no other words for this.

You, amazing person, have to write more Torg. I beg you. *_*

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! This was my first torg, but I generally prefer to write twincest, so we'll see ;)

Reviewer: eiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/28/10 07:51 am Title: Five Times Tom And Georg Spooned And One Time It Led To Something More

Torg!
Well written Torg *_*
I love your style btw. The fact that Tom's admiration started way back then is making this more believable. It's very realistic really. Each setting was perfect, and you built the sexual tension only later, which is making it even more intense.Plus you used Andreas and his boyfriend to entice it. That was clever. I loved the motorbike part, Georg was definitely the coolest at that moment. What had me melted whoever, was when Bill worried because Tom didn't have a helmet on.Aww, so much brotherly love in this entire fic. Their closeness is just...It had good twincest potential too.
The way you write them is basically "in character" to my standards. I really think Gustav can be quite the bitch when he's in a bad mood lol. Every dialogue was very realistic and no "Billa" in sight, thank god.

The sex scene: HOT HOT H.O.T! Please, more of Georg's cock bumping Tom's balls from behind,back and forth between his legs. That was brilliant, and it's so rare in sex scenes. Just for that,this goes straight to my favorites.

I also want to add that the last dialogue was just *love*. Sometimes, you don't need long paragraphs to show that your charcters have a high level of intimacy, and that they're open to each other. Tom would tell Bill one day that he knows what it's like huh? *wiggles eyebrows*---And hoping for a little sequel?

Author's Response: Wow, juste, wow, merci pour cette superbe review, tu m'as collé un immense sourire au visage! C'était mon premier torg, une impulsion vraiment, vu qu'en général je n'écris quasiment que du twincest mais je suis contente de me diversifier un peu ^^
Pour le sexe, je voulais pas qu'ils le fassent directement, je trouvais ça un peu rapide vu que c'était la première fois qu'ils étaient réellement intimes l'un avec l'autre, donc je suis contente que ce petit coït intercrural t'ai plu!
Une suite, c'est vraiment pas prévu pour le moment, j'ai ma fic à continuer et je ne l'update vraiment pas assez régulièrement...
En tout cas un énorme merci à toi, ce commentaire m'a vraiment fait très plaisir!