Date: 11/20/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
gah! how sad! thanks for the great update, i' glad bill's ok. poor tom though, of course bill wants you in there. they better take the tube out so he can ask for tom to come back.
Author's Response: Haha I agree poor tomi..We will just have to see..Mabey bill hates him now? we never know...
Date: 11/20/10 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is such a beautiful story !! Please continue quickly ! :D
Author's Response: Thank You!
Date: 11/20/10 12:10 am Title: Chapter 5
Awww, so sad. Looking forward to the next chapter to see Bill's reaction.
Author's Response: Muhahaha! this story is turning out to be a success!
Date: 11/20/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Dramatic and emotional-Love it!! Can't wait to catch up...
Author's Response: Haha we thank you very much for your comment and things are only going to get better so keep tracking!!
Date: 11/19/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
cant wait for more
please update soon
Date: 11/19/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love it! (: please upload soon, can't wait for the next ;D
Author's Response: we will be working on another chapter very soon! rn(: thank you for your feedback!
Date: 11/18/10 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh wow very nice story can not wait for next chapter (:
Author's Response: Thank you (: it is being beta'd right now (:
Date: 11/08/10 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg ... ! i hope him will be okay
wait for the next chapter
keep writting .. it's okay ^^
Author's Response: hmhmm mabey he will mabey he wont..
Date: 11/08/10 11:31 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG-are you kidding?! Of course continue---im so hooked! God this cliff hanger is going to make me nut's-cant wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/08/10 11:21 am Title: Chapter 3
omfg! more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more..... im soooo sure we get the picture now XD
Date: 11/08/10 02:51 am Title: Chapter 3
well you have to continue now! you can't leave us like this!!! This was a good chapter, but a very scary end. please update again soon! =)
Author's Response: Haha thank you!I'm gonna be working on a new chapter soon(:
Date: 11/08/10 01:17 am Title: Chapter 3
Love it!!!!! please continue, its really great!!! :)
Author's Response: Really? Awww thank you!
Date: 10/29/10 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
good chapter. i'm not really sure where you are going to go with this now since things have resolved so quickly, but i look forward to finding out.
Author's Response: it isnt perfect no but im makeing it work if you ask me its pretty good to only be my 2nd story lol thank you for your review!who knows mabey there will be a twist?
Date: 10/29/10 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay for working on another chappie!!! *huggles*
Date: 10/29/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
*squee* amazing cookie :D
Date: 10/29/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
that was great
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 10/29/10 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
*squee* loved it! why do i have a feeling there's going to be a twist to this though? hmmm.... *sits back and ponders* It's just so sweet and perfect that I cant help but think like that.
Author's Response: haha mabbbbey there will be mabey there wont! find out im working on another chap now!
Date: 10/29/10 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
oooooh!!! (awesome movie you put in hehe)... but like @_@ ohs nos! Poor Billa.... cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Haha hii kawaii!!!!thanks for the review!! *hands you TH cookie with the twins kissing on it*
Date: 10/29/10 10:09 am Title: Chapter 2
I don't know why but Bill seems like a little kid to me here again. Oh btw how old are they? Tom is so cute in telling Bill that he loves him too. So happy that worked out for them.
Author's Response: lol they are around the age of 17:) it isnt finished yet so keep it tracked!!