Date: 11/04/10 01:56 am Title: Because
aaaw cute and sadddd ;_; beautiful, really...
Author's Response: Aw, thank youuuu :')
Date: 10/28/10 02:38 am Title: Because
Awwwww. I have a sneaking suspicion that Bill isnt dating anyone for the same reason. lol.
This was well written, and its a fabulous question to ask, it could have easily led to a confession, and I'm kind of sad it didnt. I was looking forward to Tom giving up his secret, esp after he thought "Because I can’t date my brother,"--for a second I thought Tom had actually said it aloud and I got giddy. lol.
This was good though, I enjoyed reading it. Just a moment in time. Poor Tom. :(
Author's Response: Maybe. ;) That's all up to you; we're supposed to be as far out of the loop (of knowing Bill's feelings) as Tom is. Yeahhh, actually when I sat down to write this I had intended for it to end with a confession and yaaay happy twin fluff! But... yeah, then my mind was like "OH C'MON, Bill's not gonna automatically jump his twin!" So this was the result instead, at least at this moment in time. :( Thank you for reading :)
Date: 10/27/10 03:28 pm Title: Because
this was really cute too though! i really loved it
Author's Response: awww, thank you!! i'm glad you did :)
Date: 10/27/10 03:27 pm Title: Because
That was so sad. Tom keeps those things to himself. Now I'm thinking does Bill feel the same way about Tom? Since that last moment when he had Tom pinned seemed like he was thinking something to about Tom. But now we'll never know ;_;
Author's Response: Bill could've been implying such, I honestly don't even know. We don't know because Tom doesn't know. ;__; Yes, 'twas sad, but thank you so much for reading. :)
Date: 10/27/10 12:51 pm Title: Because
Dang so awesome and realistic ...
^.^
Dang this shulda been a longer story >.
Author's Response: aww, yeah, I felt the ending was a little abrupt :( sorry. but thank you for reading :)
Date: 10/27/10 12:37 pm Title: Because
That was heart breaking... Poor Tom. I really liked this fic, it was sad but realistic. I feel so bad for them, but I like to think that they're gonna be okay no matter what and work things out :)
Author's Response: Strangely, I could picture them being like this, having the feelings be one-sided. Tragic, yes, but realistic, i think. Yesss, use your imagination to bring about a super happy ending. ;) Thanks for readingggg
Date: 10/27/10 12:17 pm Title: Because
Awwwww, my heart is breaking for Tomi. *sniffs* This was so realistic and emotional, and I loved it!
Author's Response: Awe, thank you, I'm glad you think so! :)
Date: 10/27/10 12:10 pm Title: Because
Yes, angsty indeed...
Well written! I feel sorry for them...
Thank You!
Anders
Author's Response: Yeah... thanks for reading and reviewing as always, Anders. :)