Date: 10/29/10 02:07 pm Title: Three.
LOL I was wondering what year it was!!! So its 2010 that their in but Bill talks like he's in the 50s!!!
Author's Response: I figured some people might be wondering, so I added it in. :-)
Date: 10/29/10 02:01 pm Title: Three.
I LOVE IT!!! XD Holy schmolly, greaser!Bill is absolutely fuck-tastic! I love his lines and how fucked up he is in that little head of his
Author's Response: Eee thanks so much!
Date: 10/29/10 01:41 pm Title: Three.
I honestly wouldn't mind if this was all that got updated it's just to amazing.
Author's Response: Hehhe thank you!!
Date: 10/29/10 11:40 am Title: Three.
No, you shouldn't stop writing this. :D Because I love it. I can't quite figure out why neither boy like... will hurt the other, you know? There seems to be a love/hate relationship between them. I love it. :D
Jane
Author's Response: Well I wouldn't stop completely, but I do have other things to work on. :-) I'm glad you like it though! There is definitely a love/hate there and I think both are pretty confused by it. :-p Of course, Bill pretends not to notice hehe.
Date: 10/29/10 11:18 am Title: Three.
Only just found this today! Omg, lol, the characterization in this is amazing - particularly Bill! Kind of reminds me of my first boyfriend, and I was very much the Tom part, LOL!
But yeah, love the way you're writing Bill, and how things with Tom are getting along. Got a feeling poor Tom's in for a bumpy ride! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Oh I was just telling the same thing to a friend of mine about one of my first boyfriends who was DEFINITELY Bill in this story; even down to the piercings and makeup... (he even had a twin in real life, where Bill in this story doesn't. xD) Haha, cool story, bro. XD Anyway! Thank you very much and yep! Bill definitely has his sights on Tom now and the poor kid is in for it. Hahha :-)
Date: 10/29/10 11:01 am Title: Three.
Is it weird of me to think that Tom kind of reminds me of myself? xD I guess not since you write so realistic, and it makes it such a joy to read this completely genius story! ^^ I'm looking forward for more ;)
Author's Response: I love writing characters that relate to readers, I'm glad to hear you feel like he reminds you of you! Hehe. That must mean you're a pretty awesome person considering I love Tom in this story just as much as I love Bill. :3 Thank you so much!!
Date: 10/29/10 10:14 am Title: Three.
i don't mind that this is the only one you are working on, because i love this so much!
Author's Response: Well thanks a bunch :D
Date: 10/29/10 08:05 am Title: Three.
I don't care as long as you post this
I WANT MORE I WANT MORE! omg I fell head over heels for this BIll OH MY GOD
Author's Response: Heheheh :3 Thank you!!
Date: 10/29/10 07:28 am Title: Three.
Nothing's wrong with you, keep writing as much as you want! O_O
Author's Response: XD Hahah I will for sure! I just have to post the others too at some point :-p
Date: 10/29/10 06:50 am Title: Three.
Hallo! gotta say I'm very intrigued by this story! I love the way you portray Bill as a tough punk with an attitude. its so sexy ;)
it'll be interesting to see how things develop between Bill and Tom further on. can't wait to read more! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 10/29/10 06:10 am Title: Three.
LOL the shoelaces trick, wtf, bill, aaw m dad didnt teach me?? pshh, ooh liked the lick. sexy. tom is beginning to fight back....justttt a little. as for the writing, you're in a predicament, to be sure, but i can't say i'm not enjoying your deviation from the plan :)
Author's Response: Ehehe, thanks so much!!!
Date: 10/29/10 04:40 am Title: Three.
Um... none of them ?
Haha that was priceless =)
Author's Response: ;-)
Date: 10/29/10 03:08 am Title: Three.
Favorite line:
“I… I gathered a few meanings from it…”
“I figured you would, Sweets. Which meaning did you like best?”
“Um… none of them?”
Made me laugh so hard. Tom is so confused and cute. Love that Bill licked Tom's neck instead of kissing him good-bye.
It's great to see an author enjoying themselves writing a story. Can't wait for more. :D
Author's Response: :D :D Thank you!!
Date: 10/29/10 02:51 am Title: Three.
Love this. Bill's great and TOm's awkwardly cute.
Author's Response: :D Thank you!
Date: 10/29/10 02:00 am Title: Three.
I love your other stories, you know I do! But this Bill is like...pure chaos and he's so hot and dirty and Tom is completely overwhelmed and out of his element and if you keep writing we'll all keep reading it. Promise.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :D
Date: 10/29/10 01:38 am Title: Three.
haha, poor Tom...thinks Bill's out of his mind, but at the same time likes it XD And usually at this point in the story we can be like 'aww first kiss' but now its 'aww first neck lick' lol. Anywho, great chapter, looking forward to more XD
Author's Response: haha first neck licks are good too, right? xD Thank you!
Date: 10/29/10 01:14 am Title: Three.
I'm glad that I'm not the only one who has trouble understanding Bill :D
I thought this story was set in the past until you said that actually, it's just Bill deciding to have an accent. lol.
Vandalism. In Germany, park benches see the worst of it. I think Tom and Bill should go defile a part bench together ;D
Author's Response: Bahaha! Oh benches around here get some serious attacks... and picnic tables. :-o Hehe
Date: 10/29/10 12:37 am Title: Three.
THERE IS NOO PROBLEM, BABE~ KEEP WRITING
Author's Response: :3 Hehe. :D
Date: 10/29/10 12:36 am Title: Three.
No don't stop writing this :) I love this!...but i love the others too...ugh so frustrating
Author's Response: :-p I'll do what I can.
Date: 10/29/10 12:27 am Title: Three.
I can taste Tom's frustration right now. And boy is frustration ever tasty.
Author's Response: Ehehe. :3