Date: 10/31/10 01:13 am Title: Four.
think I just melted a little inside =]...everytime I see you updated I squeel lolz...your such an amazing writer, keep it up =]
Author's Response: :-p Thank youuu!
Date: 10/31/10 01:12 am Title: Four.
Aw cute costume and love the hair :D
Also HAPPY ALMOST HALLOWEEN!!!
Halloween is only tomorrow for me!
^,...,^ *vampire*
Author's Response: It is one in the morning here, so technically Halloween. Eee :D Thank you!!
Date: 10/31/10 12:53 am Title: Four.
Jesus I fucking love this fan fic to bits >w< I wish i was Tom though >.>
but you look awesome! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!
Date: 10/31/10 12:52 am Title: Four.
I'm gonna call you Betty Page for a while, okay? It fits.
Poor Bill. He just wants love *snuggles*
Author's Response: Haha, okay. If only I still had black hair, huh? ♥ Thanks, love!
Date: 10/31/10 12:45 am Title: Four.
think I just melted a little inside =]...everytime I see you updated I squeel lolz...your such an amazing writer, keep it up =]
Author's Response: Thank you so so much!!
Date: 10/30/10 08:19 pm Title: Three.
I am in love with the characters already, and oh my, this is so amazing. I'm so excited for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, love :-)
Date: 10/30/10 09:44 am Title: Three.
even tough i love your other non-completed story im happy you wrote another chapter of this.:D
is it me or bill look a little bit like john travolta in grease lol,i think it's the hair.
Author's Response: Typical Greaser hair. :-p
Date: 10/29/10 09:26 pm Title: Three.
oh.my.god!! I freaking LOVE this story...I think that's the first time I've said that about a story in a loonnngggg time. really can not wait for the next chappy ^-^
Author's Response: Thanks so much :D
Date: 10/29/10 09:19 pm Title: Two.
I'm sad I didn't get to this chapter before now, but dang! I'm happy you're stuck with Greaser!Bill, I'm not complaining at all ;)
Author's Response: Heeheh thank you!!
Date: 10/29/10 07:32 pm Title: Three.
omg. u're amazing. please dont stop updating ok? nothing is wrong with u!!! this is awesome and u have to keep going!! alright?!?!?!?! it's fabulous ure updating every day!!! loooooveeee it
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Date: 10/29/10 07:17 pm Title: Three.
hey I read your other stories and I don't mind the fact you can't stop writing this one. I'm loving it! (oh, hi mcdonalds!)
Can't wait to read more of this. *______*
Author's Response: Thanks :D :D
Date: 10/29/10 06:45 pm Title: Three.
I'm glad Tom said it was 2010. I wasn't actually sure before. I look forward to more of this interesting story.
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 10/29/10 06:23 pm Title: Three.
Ha I didn't really catch that it was indeed 2010 from the previous chapters! I was so distracted by Bill's character, that I didn't even notice the details which hint towards what year it really was. So I actually thought it were the '50 with some twist ha. I loved this chapter, this story is growing on me. The interaction between those two is entertaining, I like how Bill teases and messes with Tom, and Tom's reaction towards him. Ah! Can't wait for more. I always do a happy dance when you update, silly me ^^
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!!! :D
Date: 10/29/10 06:10 pm Title: Three.
Tom went from a square to a complete cube XD
You have got alot of the 'talks' down I really like it although Bill needs a time check XD
Author's Response: Aww he likes it :-p thank you!
Date: 10/29/10 05:45 pm Title: Three.
Silly Tom. I'd definitely be Bill's boy-toy ;) *haha*
That boy is sexysexysexy in this fic. I don't think it's going to take long for him to grow on Tom. Love it! ♥
Author's Response: Thank you :D :D
Date: 10/29/10 05:09 pm Title: Three.
Ha! I don't mind at all that you can't stop writhing this! You're story is awesome. It's something totally else, refressing, entertaining and exiting!
That last word would be something for Tom to say after his 'date' ;)
Haha, he's lucky he didn't pissed his pants, but I can't say I would be freaked out if I was going on a date with such a person...
But I like this Bill! He has balls.
A wonder he let Tom off easy for throwing away not only his POT but also a whole PACKET of cigarettes... I hope Tom has learned not to touch that shit any more (something is telling me he hasn't...)
I do feel bad for Bill, though, with his fucked up dad and all? No wonder he is rebellious, needs to let go of that frustration SOME way, now doesn't he?
xxx
Author's Response: Yep, I blame his father entirely. :-( Thank you!!
Date: 10/29/10 05:02 pm Title: Three.
Okay okay I don't know what my deal was with the whole "their in the 50's" madness when I kinda already knew better. Obviously with the car alarm going off & whatnot...yeah, lol. Anyways, I love this so so much! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: hehehe :3 Thank you :D
Date: 10/29/10 04:11 pm Title: Three.
@_@ I likey... lots.
Now I must find a way to convince my mother I am not on drugs...
Author's Response: Thanks love!
Date: 10/29/10 04:00 pm Title: Three.
OK, let's take this scene by scene, k? K!
Opening scene = I'm breathless and I want to undo all his hard work and lick all over. But I digress....*zones*
Next two scenes, I just went -__- because I'm really NOT liking Bill's dad. At all. A man that abuses his family is fail in my eyes. However, I'm glad he walked away rather than get into it for his Mama's sake. He really does love her. ;__;
Tom's inner monologue and indecision had me in stitches, but it just goes to prove that he has a hidden rebellious streak just waiting for it to come out! Bill would be super proud! I know I am!
I gotta say though, the fact that Bill enjoys Tom with his dreads down has me fucking FLAILING, because that was possibly the one thing I'd have begged of Tom were I to have met him in RL. I miss the snakes something FIERCE!
But yeah, that image is just GUUUUUUUUUHHHH!
I love how Bill continues talking and Tom is still ever so baffled and Bill is then reduced to talking....very....slow....so....that...Tom...gets....what.....he's....saying.
OFFERING OF THE BED JUST MADE ME FLAIL, I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW!
...the note.
Dear lord jesus, the note.
I need to go into my bunk now. >.>
Tom getting rid of the pot and Bill getting all ANGRY and in Tom's face made my heart drop. *gulps*
I think you already know how I feel about the whole shoe laces scene. *coughs*
NGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH sdgdf;gfuhge87gyeuheljbnfvhjgcvkuyzxgvx
“Why are you so interested in letting me? Look, Tom, you didn’t have to come out cruisin’ with me tonight and risk seriously disrupting Ma and Pops, but you did anyway… and you didn’t have to hide my tracks and keep me drivin’ in the clear but you did. You tell me what your deal is and I’ll tell you what mine is. Deal, Babes?”
THIS is the crux of the matter, isn't it? The ball is now in Tom's court, because with this, we're definitely establishing that there's more than a passing interest here and that Bill is soooooooooo totally unto Tom wanting him back. NGH!
So you tell them you heard a noise, thought the old hood rat was back to destroy more shit, then you got locked outside. No deal, cool your jets.”
“I… that might work,” Tom said, raising his eyebrows. “Uh, thanks.”
The man has skills. Can you tell he bullshits on a daily basis? XD
The hot chase pursuit and Tom's rush of adrenaline turns me on just as much as it did Bill. I for one, can't wait to see how much we'll see of Tom like this.
THE LICK...YOU HAD ME AT THE LICK DAMMIT OMG BILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL! *thuds*
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ACE! XD
Author's Response: GAH THIS REVIEW. WHAT IS AIR? I love you!!!
Date: 10/29/10 03:12 pm Title: Three.
Keep writing, I love this! :)
xx
Author's Response: Thank you!