Date: 02/17/08 01:55 am Title: Chapter 7
NOOOOO!!!!!
I'm hanging off this cliff for dear life here. More please!!!
Author's Response: Sorry! My head was hurting so I had to stop. I'll update soon! <3
Date: 02/16/08 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
GRAAAAAA
This is cute!!!!
Keep going!!!
Date: 02/16/08 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
.::Didn't Know You Had Updated::.
Yay! I love the little window scene. So cute. X3
I can't wait for the next chappie. I shall keep my eyes peeled! O_O
.::Waits::.
XD
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Date: 02/16/08 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMFG that is so mean!!!!!i was gasping the whole way!!!DAMN if that happened to me i would have died a little inside>
Date: 02/16/08 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
shit...it's so romantic. i wanna know what exactly Bill is going to say.... it's killin' me slowly... just can't wait
Author's Response: Thank you :D <3
Date: 02/16/08 09:19 am Title: Chapter 6
NO way - you are the awesome one here! :D .. you are the one writing this EXCELLENT story, i'm just commenting how good it actually is, so it's you that should get the credit, not me! :)
And I only credit like that, because it seems natural to do it to this story, cause it's .. hm? what is it? . it's like .. GREAAAAAAAAAAAAT!
And i'm from Denmark xD - what about you? :) .. and hm? i'm sorry to ask, but what is your name? xD
And btw, I acutally liked that you didn't, in the pool scene, let "the kiss" happen, 'cause like you said, many people expect it, but it is also to much a cliche - so I very much loved that you didn't write it that way :D
Ih, I just wanna know who it is - the sms part xD
And anyways, I can't wait untill the next chapter, your writing makes me sad and happy - just so you kwow! :D
I think I would die a little on the inside, if you didn't write more. SO WRITE MORE! :D
I LOVE IT SO MUCH - i'm like a little child with candy, I just wan't it xD
This site is definetly annoying - me to - with the diffirent time thing xD
And OF COURSE will I read the next chapter - are you kidding me? ö .. I will read the next, and the next, and the next, and the next . until there aren't anymore - and then .. then I will be sad :( .. LOVE IT! (L) *squeezes you tightly* .. MANY hugs from me to you xD . and again, I loveeee you’re story – it’s the best. And you’re the best (L)
Author's Response: Denmark? Cool :) So what were you doing in Germany anyway? You're so lucky, I would love to go there... Your reviews make me really happy for some reason x) You are just so NICE. I'm going to start writing the next chapter in an hour or two so it will be posted tonight... Maybe late though. Oh, and my name is Marissa x) and u are Mia, yes? And guess what?! I'm 15 turning 16 soon TOO!!! =D In MAY... What about you?rnSo thanks for the review! I'm going take care of my annoying cousin now :s <3 xoxox
Date: 02/16/08 06:01 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww - I'm sorry i'm so late on reviewing, but I just got home from germany, and in the car on my way home, I was like: "Mom mom, drive faster," 'cause I wanted to see if you had written another chapter, and you had. So I was like totally extatic and happy :D - thank youuuuu so very very much :)(L) 'gives BIG huuug'
ARRGH! you say it's short and crappy, I say it's PERFEEEEECT! I just LOVED this chapter :)(L)
How can you not ? ö
And oh, how was I so glad, that Tom stood up to Daniel, and punched him. And when he said to Bill, that if they didn’t accept Bill as his friend, they weren’t his real friends. It was so good! Loved it. 'squeals soo much' x)
Daniel and the others, were just cowards! Grr. I hate them so much! They were just mean to Bill, and to Tom too! :/
Oh my god - the scene in the pool, I was like 'they are gonna kiss him - they are gonna kiss him' xD .. but they didn't and it just makes it more exciting :)
Ih, and the sms, I hope it's from Tom, saying something good xD(L)
But, anyways, I know I will love whatever you write in the next chapter, because you are so veeeeeeeery good! :D
But but but but - I can't wait, so update SOON! *gives puppy dog eyes* (L) .. I just can't wait untill next chapter - I need to know who wrote the sms and what was written in it, ihh xD(L)
LOVE IT - LOVE IT - LOVEEEEEEEEE IT! :D
It's just GREAT GREAT GREAT - keep up the GREAT work xD ..
.. 'huuugs you' :)(L)
Author's Response: Haha x) You're just totaly awsome, seriously x) I naver got a long review like this before! =P Thank you so much <3 Where are you from anyway? :) Oh, the pool scene... everyone was prob thinking they're gonna kiss, but I couldn't let it happen, not just yet ;P The sms might not be from Tom, who knows =D I'll make the next part longer so it might come in late. I don't really know when cos this site annoying, it shows a different time than mine so... Yeah =) I hope you will come to read it! xXxXx
Date: 02/16/08 04:35 am Title: Chapter 6
AAAAAH!!!! That f*cking cowards! With how many were they? 6? Against 2? HATE THEM!!!
Go on!
Author's Response: Everyone hates them, they are so poor :( =P Thanks for the review, it makes me happy you like it! :) xoxo
Date: 02/16/08 03:25 am Title: Chapter 6
LOVE THIS STORY!! MOOOORE PLEEASE!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'll update SOON! <3
Date: 02/16/08 03:18 am Title: Chapter 5
OMG NOT TOM NOW TOOO!! :O
Date: 02/15/08 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
OOOHHH!!! Tell me, tell me, TELL ME!!!
I like this very much. :)
Author's Response: I'll tell you! In the next chapter! =P xoxo
Date: 02/15/08 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
As usual, another brilliant chapter. I hate how poor Billy gets hurt though but it works, with Tom always there to protect him. -Hums happily.-
Author's Response: Might not always be there... Like maybe... he won't next time =P <3
Date: 02/15/08 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
damn...damn... i'm in real shock. it was great as always. i hope that sms from Tomi. fuck, i want them to kiss.. can't wait 4 next chap.
Author's Response: Haha, Thank you! I'll make the next chapter longer... But I won't give away when there will be a kiss scene =p It will prob be unexpected though :) <3
Date: 02/14/08 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ack! NO! Bill! Tom!
Daniel! O>O
Update!
Yay one word sentences! XD
Date: 02/14/08 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
AWWWWW, Tom saved Bill! :)))) that's just sweet... even though he said "i fucking hate you". that's just mean. but i guess he makes up for it by being the knight in shining armor. :D
but i seriously wonder what that ass Daniel will do to them. O.O
please continue soon! can't wait1 :DDD
Date: 02/14/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
As i said before, I fucking love this story!
You gotta get up another chapter soon! Or i'll be dead of longing!
Author's Response: I'll update tomorrow :) Thanks xoxox
Date: 02/14/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Damn girl. I think you r so talanted. oh i love this so much. if i could i would kick Daniel's ass & kick shit out of him. great job. keep going
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Wouldn't everyone want to? :p <3
Date: 02/14/08 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
I loved it! :D Keep up the grt work! Ö ^^
Author's Response: Thanks :) xxx
Date: 02/14/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like it! Continue please!