Date: 05/22/09 12:40 am Title: Chapter 9
awww..... i lovers this story! it is really good! please upload again sooon!
Date: 04/14/09 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
lol...he TRIPPED!!!
and the Simpsons Movie is amazingly funny
Date: 12/21/08 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
really good--continue
Date: 02/29/08 08:32 am Title: Chapter 9
i loved it =D
i only started reading it today, but i absolutely loved it! XD
and when i read about Bill's diary i was like: OMG! =0 i have a black diary with silver letters on the cover too! =0 (A)
totally loved it XD
omg i just can't stop saying it =P
loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it
WIIIIIIIII
u got me all hyper now =P
write more soon please (A)
Author's Response: Thanks! =D I'm a little buisy with my other story, but I'll try to update as soon as I can =] xoxo
Date: 02/22/08 09:53 am Title: Chapter 9
it's gr8 so far wen is it guna b updated
Author's Response: I don't know... I was updating like every day, but now I kind of lost inspiration :s
Date: 02/21/08 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
hahahahah!!!! OMG, that was funny!
Write on!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Thats all I need to keep writing =P
Date: 02/21/08 10:13 am Title: Chapter 9
wieee, that's me, that's me, that's me xD(L) .
sorry for the late review – i went to bed early last night, and have been on work all day, and just got home – and then i was sooo happy when i saw that you had updated :D
first of all – GREAAAAAAAAAAAT chapter xD soo funny! epecially when tom was all embaressed an stuff, and bill is like thinking that he has diearrea (spelled?) xD .. omg - i was just flat out laughing – i actually fell of my chair when i read it :D
.. and when bill is like “tomi, i’m so bad” xD – he’s doesn’t quite know the meaning of being bad, cause he is soo cute xD and then bill is skipping on the street, and wanted tom to join him skipping, and tom is like “do it yourself” xD – SOO FUNNY xD
.. and and and – when tom fell on the kitchen floor in bill’s house, and bill kept laughing, and tom was getting angry – WAS SO HILARIOUS xD . i almost couldn’t breathe because i laughed so much – and like bill, i also began to hiccup xD
couldn’t be happier with this chapter :D it was totally hilarious and so cute – just wanna know were tom is taking bill ? xD – this should be exciting :D
and yeah, i usually go to school, but this week i’m working in an autoshop, so i’m like SO tired when i get home from work ö .. haha, and okey then xD (i’m just so ecstatic that you decided to write this story – this story makes me happy) .. and the 2008-thingy was just because i was bored, so i thought it would be funny to write, and get a reaction xD .. haha. and dubai? – is it like a good place to live? i have like never really heard about that country before – yeah, well i know where it is and that stuff, but not really stuff about the country xD . oh my god, i’m so confusing to listen to xD do you get what i mean? because i don’t actually get it myself xD .. anyways my first piercing will be in my tounge oder my lip – but I’m not sure which is first – and im not actually scared, but i know when she og he is right about to make the hole I my lip/tounge, i will be SOO scared xD . haha. i completely understand that you’re freaked out xD
keep on writing :) .. (L) . I LOVE THIS STORY MORE THAN ANYBODY ELSE :D(L)
1000 x’s from jumbie xD(L)
Author's Response: Cool, I'm happy you liked it =] GUESS WHAT?! I GOT MY PIERCING DONE TODAY! Wooooo! =D I got it like... 4 hours ago. I'll tell you how it went!!! xD I got to the lady's shop thingy. She made me sit on this big big chair. I got to pick out my ring though! I wanted a ring, not a stud. So I got the exactly SAME one like Tom has, I like it the most =] Yeah and then, she put some anesthesia on my lip and it went numb x) Then she made a whole threw my lip with a needle, it was so fast I barely even noticed it, and then she put the ring through it. It didn't really hurt! I though it would be way way worse, but it wasn't. She was so cool, she had a lip ring herself and her daughter was a TH fan too haha =P But then when I started to feel my lip again, it hurt for a while, but the pain is bareble. Now it doesn't hurt, I'll have to clean it up before I go so sleep. I bough some stuff from the drug shop so it should heal pretty soon. I'm telling you, it's not bad when she puts the needle in your lip, That doesn't even hurt, but later it does, just for like 30 or 40 minutes, and then it's ok. You should get one! =]
Date: 02/21/08 03:02 am Title: Chapter 9
AHAHAHAHAHA. seriously? i nearly died laughing. random and short it might be, but definitely not stupid! ;D
first “Tomi! I'm so bad!”, then "Come on! Skip with me! It's so much fun!”
haha. Bill's so cute! he obviously doesn't really know the meaning of being bad. LOL.
oh, and another part i liked:
“Your poop, Tomi.” Bill spun around.
“Oooh... yeeeah... my poop.”
LMAO. *giggles uncontrollably*
omg. totally hilarious and effing adorable. :D moreeeeee? ^^
Date: 02/20/08 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
that was so random!!!
xDDDD
Date: 02/20/08 03:19 am Title: Chapter 8
*squeals* that was so sweeeeet! especially when Tom carried Bill home... *melts* lol. Bill's such a tease in school! very nice touch, by the way, using the phone as a vibrator. XD
hehe. i love this so much! more soon, pretty-please! :DDD
Author's Response: The phone thing actually happened to one of my friends in class. It was the funiest thing ever x) I'll try to update soon, Thanks =] <3
Date: 02/19/08 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ahahaha
That made me laugh!
Author's Response: cool x) =]
Date: 02/19/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm glad you smiled through it xD . haha.
aww, i'm sorry you have to wait until friday to get your lip pierced :/ . and i'm hoping that very very soon, when i have money, i will get some piercings :D
and ad for the chapter - don't worry about it, it's so good, and i was like laughing almost the whole time i read it - except a few places of course.
but anyways, i'm so glad that you posted it! :D
and a question? how did you come up with this story? xD . it’s so good, and i just need to know what got you thinking about this story xD . hope I’m not intruding or something, I’m just a bit curious :)
and the clock? well it's 00.09 on wednesday the 20th of february 2008 xD and wow! Ö ou have just been so many places. and hey? i know people in poland xD so why are you like moving to dubai? xD . and i don't know why that matter, but xD and as for liking denmark? i can't say i do - the only thing great about denmark is that it's just above germany :D . and that is where i'm gonna live after i turn 18 :)
hey? have you ever been to a tokio hotel concert, oder? :D
love your story - love reviewing - love writing with you :)
- jumbie xD
Author's Response: Oh so you have the same time as me! Cool =] WHY are you not SLEEPING? Don't you have school in the morning? x) How did I come up with this story? Hm... I watched a lot of movies, and all there parts of the story are parts that I remember, I also change them around a bit (or a lot) Depends... I just want to make it fit! And by the way... 2008? C'mon I'm not from a diffefrent planet! haha =P I am moving to Dubai because my mom has work there, but I'm happy about it =) Where will you get ur first piercing? Sre you like... scared? Cos I am! Seriously! I'm freaked out about it. xoxoxox
Date: 02/19/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
first a question: DID YOU GET YOU LIP PIERCED?! :D Ö .. SO VERY JEALOUS I AM!
and thank you sooooo very very much for updating :D(L) - i'm soooo happy 'squals'.
well, omg?! ö - i hadn't thought that he would say that his parents died when he was 10 years old. so sad :'( .. but what shocked me the most, was when he said that he didn't have a penis - i was like "SAY WHAT?!", and i gasped for like 5 minutes before i read on, and then it was just a joke - omg, you are evil xD . i was almost dying there xD . but i laughed afterwards, but was a little baffled when i just read it. haha.
and awww, how sweet when tom walks bill home, and they are just outside bill's house, and tom is like “go climbing that tree,” but bill is just standing there looking so cute. and when he kisses tom on the cheek and just runs away, awww – so cute. and tom just stands there. ih, so one of the favourite places xD .
i just LOVED with a HUGE ‘L’ when bill kept ringing to tom, and tom kept squirming in his place and the he finally ran out, ‘cause he was getting turned on and ‘stuff’ – sooo funny xD bill is such a teasing boy – und tom is too sexual it’s unbelievable xD(L)
..and bill is left confused .. – I NEEED MORE :D
i can’t wait to read about what happens when bill finds tom after he left class – this should be interesting :)
‘sings happily’ – don’t make me wait too long, i would die without this story, so I need it soon ‘pouts and begs’
love love loveeeeeee to you from jumbie (L)
Author's Response: I just noticed I was smiling threw your whole review xD Ok so um.. No I didn't get my lip pierced, the lady that is going to pierce my lip i buisy, so I have to wait until FRIDAY :( So yeah, Friday I'm going to get it pierced. Are you gonna get something of urs pierced?? :D I'm glad you liked the chapter, cos when I was posting it I was like 'hm maybe I shouldn't post it cos it's stupid and way too short' but then I posted it anyway! x) Hm I'm just wondering whats the time in Denmark, cos I was born in Poland, and I was raised in Australia, Now I'm in Poland cos my family lives here, and in a month or so I'm moving to Dubai... Do you like in Denmark?? =]
Date: 02/19/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
LOL! Poor Tom. Bill is teasing the hell out of him. haha
Author's Response: Yep! He is haha =P Tom is just too sexual x)
Date: 02/19/08 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
Im loving the story. Its hilarious!
Author's Response: Thank you =]
Date: 02/18/08 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww, I’m sorry that your head was hurting :/ I hope it's better now ? (L)
And of course I like it, it's one of my favorite stories :)(L
Ih, Echo Awards was SO great, but Tokio Hotel is in USA right now, so they couldn't be there, such a shame :'((L) but I did take LOTS of photos :D
.. And okay schatz, I just can't wait to read more! Today I was frantic when I look at this site, and this story isn't updated - I was like: "say what?! I need more! ”.. I was sad :( I just kept looking, over and over and over again, to see if it had been updated, but no :( 'cries'
YOU are GREAT! Thank you for making this story! It kind of makes my days good – Your story makes me happy when I’m down, but I also cry when I read your story, but that’s because it’s sad :/ .. Ih, I just can’t wait ‘till next chapter: D
Hm, and for ideas, I’ve got a few, but I think I will just wait and see what you’ve come up with – I CAN’T WAIT!
.. And btw, I’m sorry I’m slow on answering, but I’m living at my uncle and aunt right now, so I don’t get much time at my pc :( but I try so hard I can (L) .. Btw, where did you come from? :) And so you know, I like writing with you, its fun xD ... Keep on the great writing, loveeeeeeeeee it (L) ..
Lots of love from ME – Jumbie xD
Author's Response: I'm really sorry I haven't updated! I started writing the next chapter an hour ago but it's still too short to be posted :( I'll have to finish writing it tomorrow and then I'll update. I'll make it longer this time, to make up for today. I was buisy so I didn't have time. So thanks for the concern, my head is good now x) I have to bump it once in a while to get it thinking :P And right, I forgot TH is in the US so they couldn't make it to Echo. I'm happy you like my story, I'll be writing a new one soon, so your welcome to come read it if you will want :) Tomorrow I'm getting my lip pierced! One like Tom has =P I read that you would like to have piercings too? Oh i'm so excited, But I'm also scared it will hurt... My heart will be pounding in my chest, god... Ohhh! =) I'm from Australia by the way ha :q Okay so I'm going to sleep... I'm still sad I didn't get to finish writing the 8th part today, but I'll update tomorrow for sure :D Night Jumbie! xxx
Date: 02/17/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG!!!! What does he have to tell? I wanna know!!!
Author's Response: You will find out soon =D
Date: 02/17/08 08:17 am Title: Chapter 7
o.o it just ended! gahh. but i hope your head's better now! more when you can, then! :D
Author's Response: It is better, thank you =) I'll update soon!
Date: 02/17/08 02:42 am Title: Chapter 7
Yeah – another chapter ‘does the happy-dance’ xD . But I’m sorry, I’m so late on reviewing, I was sleeping, because I had to get up early, and go to work :/ but I’m reviewing now :D(L)
First answers to what you wrote to me xD – I was in Germany, because I was at the Echo Awards :D .. and I’m so glad, that my reviews makes you happy, it makes me happy that you’re happy with them. Or does that even make sense? Omg, I don’t know, my head hurts xD . But I’ not the nice one, YOU ARE! :D(L) .. Haha, and btw. I loveee the name Marissa. And nice, I’m turning 16 in APRIL xD . and yeah, my name is Mia, but please call me Jumbie, everyone else does, ‘cause I hate my name xD..
Awww, it's such a cute chapter! :D . And yeah, I was right - the sms was from Tom :) wieee 'jumps up and down' .
And when the part, where the 'You'-sms was, I was like: "Awwww" xD . I just LOVE this story! (L)
It was so funny, when Tom was trying to get Bill to climb out the window and he's like "I'm naked", and Tom's like "You're what?!" xD . i was laughing so much when I read that. It was so funny - I could easily imagine the look on Tom’s face xD ‘laughs so much’ .
And the comment Bill came up with: “I bet I could find the Russian circus in there.” – I was laughing so much, and almost falling off of my bed xD
An awww, Bill was so cute, with the “tell meeeeee” part xD . omg, sweet .
Uh, and the last couple of line, in this chapter, was a lot of questions. Hehe xD
But when you stopped, I was actually holding my breath, to what Bill was going to say!
Ih, this story is like a drug, and so are you, and I’m so addicted, that I soon gonna need to go to rehab. But NOOOO, I loveee this story – and ö xD(L) ‘dancing in joy’ xD
I am just like in loveeee with your story – write moreeeeeeeeeee VERY SOON, please :D ‘makes puppydog eyes, and begs’
Because, I want to
And just one thing: “YOU STOPPED THE CHAPTER THERE?!” Ö . I was like ready to scroll the page more down, and when I found out there wasn’t more, I was like “SAY WHAT?! I NEED MORE!” xD . So update, VERY VERY SOON schatz :D but anyways, it was SUCH a GREAAT chapter – and I need to know, what it is that Bill is going to tell Tom, right NOW Ö . You just have to update soon, ‘cause I know, I can’t stop thinking about was is going to happen in the next chapter, and I just so want to know – so tell meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee xD(L)
Just please, don’t wait too long on the updating thingy xD(L)
Hey, just so you know – you are the best (L) ‘hugs you’
Author's Response: xD xD xD I'm sorry! My head was hurting so I decided to stop it there! It's my cousins fault cos he was over yesterday and he's so annoying! I'll try to write more today, I won't give away what Bill wanted to say, cos I have to plan it all out in my head first x) :P I'm glad you liked the chapter, though it was the shortest one yet. YOU are so LUCKY for going to the Echo Awards!!! Did you see TH? Grr I'm jealous^^ Did you take pictures? Was it fun? :D Jumbi! Was it FUN?!rnrnOk well, I'll update soon xxx AND just so YOU know... YOU are the BEST! xprnrnBy the way... What do you think Bill will tell Tom? Any idea at all? ;D