Date: 05/13/14 03:23 am Title: Chapter 1
I tried using the link you posted but it doesn't seem to be working; so I was wondering if you could send me the explicit version?
stealkix@gmail.com
Author's Response: Okay I'l'l send it. To be honest I have to check and see if I still have that on my computer...
Date: 05/05/13 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
i was wondering if you could send me the explicit version? rawanloasa@gmail.com
Author's Response: kay I'll send itrn
Date: 12/17/12 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, wont lie but the banner creeped the hell out of me, i thought that they like surgically removed his legs, arms, eyes, nose, mouth and ears and left him only with touch. But im sure being trans-(oriented?) into nothing is equally disturbing, because where the joy of living like that? As for the story itself, from what i actually read of it (my stomach kept gurgling and being sick) was amazingly written, as is everything from you. Youre just so amazing that everything you write ill probably read, even the awfully disturbing ones like this. Ugh, just ugh. I want to cry and puke and rewind this whole scene. Your original characters amaze me, you make them so real no matter how devious they seem to be..
Author's Response: I'm glad the banner creeped you out, since that was the intende effect, lol. I right with you that this story is disturbing and quite horrifying. I can't really remember, but I must have been in a really bizarre mood when I decided to write it. So with that said, it really means a lot that you could still evaluate the story enough to say that it was at least well-written. I always appreciate hearing that. And don't worry: I may never write something quite so depraved again. Glad you like the original characters! Oh, and your summation of what you THOUGHT this fic was going to be about? Waaaay more disturbing than what I came up with, lol.
Date: 02/02/12 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Where is the quote from your chapter notes from? The book?
Author's Response: I actually made that quote up. I have a habit of doing that just to make thinks seem interesting and deep.
Date: 12/16/10 05:17 am Title: Chapter 1
I have to say that it was AMAZING! I think you should make movies, when you write and put all the feelings in it, I could see it perfectly in my mind, I like this kind of hard stories, it's very unique, realistic in some way, part of me liked that it wasn't a happy story, I want to read the original, and I want to thank you for make my mind running free :)
sorry if I'm not clear with my words, my first languages is spanish.
Author's Response: You're words are perfectly clear, and I'm flattered by your nice comments. It's so nice to get readers who can appreciate the quality of a fic, even when the plot issuper disturbing. That's what I was going for after all--super disturbing. I like your movie sugestion; that would be fun. If you want to read the original version, it's posted here: http://tabootwins.com/fanfiction/viewstory.php?sid=94&warning=4
Date: 11/05/10 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This was interesting to read and I think it'll stay on my mind for quite a while. The mark of a good story, I think.
Age play is not something I've seen in fic until yours. It's interesting and unfortunate that that's what he took away from the experiment, since it's worse, socially, than being gay. Anyway, this was good. :)
Author's Response: I just tried to make it as utterly horrible as possible, without killing him. Glad it made an impression. Thanks!
Date: 10/27/10 02:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Lol, yes, this is sick. But also thought-provoking...
Science truly is potent in being a weapon for monstrous deeds.
Author's Response: Glad you thought so, that's what I wanted. rnrnMonstrous... That's a good word.
Date: 10/26/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Strange, disturbing and I couldn't stop reading. Very nicely written.
Felt so bad for Bill when he tried to get back what he'd lost and couldn't so ended up with what he knew. Very sad.
Author's Response: Thanks! All the things you said were what I wanted the story to be.
Date: 10/25/10 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I want to comment... like I'm dying to, I just... I couldn't do it. I couldn't get through it. I'm sorry. The reason I'm commenting is because it is in no way fault of your writing... your writing is fabulous! You'll forgive me if the bile gurgled threateningly in my throat and forced me to stop, right? ;____; I guess I'm weak... much too weak. *tears* Great job, because I know from the bit I'd read, that this was somehow a masterpiece in itself. ^^ *goes to wallow somewhere in illness and in shame*
Author's Response: Hey, don't feel bad. This story was sick and disturbung. It almost squicked me too much to write it, so I don't blame anyone who can't read it. But you're awesome for reviewing anyways. I actually want to know how much it bothered people! Hope you didn't feel seriously ill, and thanks for saying such nice things about my writing. I won't be writing such horrible things in the future, so don't be afraid when you see other stories posted by me =)
Date: 10/24/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is fucking evil... just the way i like it
it was really good girl!
Author's Response: It was pretty evil wasn't it? And disturbing too... Hmm, does it say something about me that I wrote such a sick story? IDK. Glad you liked it!
Date: 10/24/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear god that was awesome! I loved this so much. Really well written.
Author's Response: Thanks. I didn't expect anyone to tell me that they "loved" it, as it's a pretty miserable little story, but it's nice to know you liked it anyway.