Date: 10/24/10 01:13 am Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
But when Chuck Norris goes into the water, he doesn't get wet; the water gets Chuck Norris.
I like this. It's very Vanilla Sky-ish but more... possible.
Author's Response: Yeah I know because even if you spell Chuck Norris in Scrabble, you win. Forever. D:
I've never seen Vanilla Sky, been told it was a piece of shit of a movie. XD Should I bother? Well anyways thanks for reading, glad you're liking it. Cheers for saving a kitten as well. :D
Date: 10/23/10 10:38 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
Bill needs public transport.
Author's Response: Quite possibly. (.____.) Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/23/10 05:56 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
I don't want Chuck to kill kitten, so I have to review :D No, I wanted to do it even if he wouldn't kill them, sooo...yeah, I like TomiPsyho really bery much;) And this story is like, wow, I really like it. Interesting plot, and your way of writing is really amazing:) Good luck and give us more asap;)
Author's Response: You saved a kitten, and you even originally wanted to without the ultimatum. You're a good soul. XD I like that you're liking it thus far~ I hope you will enjoy future installments as well. Glad you enjoy my writing! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: 10/23/10 05:33 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
wow, this is so amazing. please, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you~ I will do my best! ^^ Thanks for reading~~~
Date: 10/23/10 04:49 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
LEAVE THE KITTENS ALONE CHUCK! D:
-reviews vigorously-
My, my. I always enjoy your writing, which of course you should be well aware of by now [must get to reading your collab!] but this particular fic is right down my alley. And your writing style has changed? Is it just for this one, or a continuous thing? I like it, but I was all "Ahh what's going on!?" maybe I'm afraid of change? Actually, I really want to thank you for writing this, it's answered alot of unanswered - and unspoken - questions I've been having. You are full of wisdom -heart-
The idea of Bill working with children is adorable. I am very curious as to what happened wto Tom, and can definately feel Bill's pain through this due to how well you wrote it [I am so pleased when people can do this, it really getsme into the story, and it's nice to feel some emotions that aren't my own every once in a while]. Admittedly, I am a little bummed out that this is only a three shot, but maybe you could consider doing more paranormal stylized fics? Also, your warnings are amazing, I can't wait to see what happens with those. Looking forward to seeing the next chapter, as always~
P.S. I'm not sure if I've told you already, but I keep telling myself to let you know that I love your long notes. And I recognised some of the medicines you named, although to be fair I'm not from Canada or the US.
Author's Response: Monkey, so good to see you! (Ah, I love monkeys. XD) You saved a kitten, hurray!
Yes, I'm aware, and ever so pleased to know that! It never fails to warm me so. ^^ No no, it hasn't changed so much as been tailored to suit this fic. I took on a different narrative style so I could better portray this style of story, I hope it's all right. Haha, I'm totally afraid of change too, but sometimes it is inevitable. However I don't think there's any big changes in my writing (just yet?), so not to worry. XD I like being full of wisdom - it doesn't happen often! o.o;
I -love- putting Bill in occupations with children, I don't know why. I can see him as someone who relates to kids, I guess. So happy you felt connected to what the twins were going through, as that's the intention! Ah, don't be too bummed, I just can't fit any more chapter fics into my schedule, and this story is one that calls for only a few chapters at most. Writing more paranormal pieces... maybe in the future? Maybe if I get the idea, or someone bumps paranormal ideas off me? (Hint? Haha~) I don't know, I never look too far into the future when I can help it. We'll see!
You must be one of the only ones who do! XD That is, like my winding notes. Tch, man, I have such an issue with that! D: Thanks though, darling. I appreciate it. As always, thanks for reading. *hugs*
Date: 10/23/10 04:46 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
this seems really really REALLY interesting.
I'm looking forward to this storty! update soon!!
Author's Response: Does it now? XD
I'm REALLY glad you came and read - and reviewed of course, as well!
Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy what is to come~
Date: 10/23/10 03:56 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
I'm really interested to see where this is going. I've never read a story about sleep paralysis before, mainly because most people probably don't even know it exists. It's seriously the most scariest thing I have (and still will) experienced in my life.
But I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, it's not an everyday, 'round the dinner table sort of topic is it? D: It is -very- frightening to experience, and I hope I can capture even a fraction of that intensity in chapters to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/23/10 02:51 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
This is very intriguing and interesting, I've never read something like this, btw. It's very different and I love the amount of research you did on the subject. It must be hard to live with a condition such as this one, even if it's dramatized and whatnot. *hugs you tight* I'll be looking forward to more, I want to know what happens to Bill and if he's going to deflect the accident or get out of it not as badly injured.
Author's Response: As always, research is a given, yes. ^^ Well, living with any sleep disorder isn't very easy I suppose, narcoleptics, those with progressive EDS, whatever it may be it's impeding your function during the day and is both dangerous and frustrating on an intense level. I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far, as always it's pleasing to hear. I hope you continue to enjoy it! ^^ Thanks for reading, Mari!
Date: 10/23/10 02:21 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
I'm so intrigued by this story and how you're been able to blend the dreaming world with the real one. Plus the mystery surrounding Tom...I'm so excited by this story!
Author's Response: I'm excited that you're excited for this! Haha~ Thank you so much for reading! ^^
Date: 10/23/10 01:43 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
Loved it! You've got a very interesting idea going on here and I can't wait for the next chapter! Your writing style is great btw :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate that! Thanks for reading, and I hope you like the rest! ^^
Date: 10/23/10 01:11 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
wow! okay, i've got to tell you, this scared the hell out of me. the beginning was a bit confusing but the way everything is explained little by little is great and really helps build the tension. i did get the nightmare on elm's street vibe but this story stands on its own very well. the car scene had me literally SHAKING! it's sooo well written, the way you described everything was fantastic, like i could actually see everything with my own eyes, hear the static, feel bill's building panic... it was just so real. super amazing story! i think this is my first time reading anything by you and i'm so impressed. really looking forward for the rest of this :)
seriously i wish you could feel how fast my heart is beating right now. haha crazy!
Author's Response: I do believe your username is familiar darling! I think I've seen it another of my stories, quite possible 'Guileless Charade'? ^^
We're you that taken by it? Oh, I'm thrilled! :D I'm so happy you were deep within the story, and felt what needed to be felt. *hands glass of water* Calm woman, calm~~ I wish I would sympathise to some degree, but I find myself grinning happily instead. It's always good to hear your story has been taken so well.
I appreciate your review, thanks for reading! I do hope you enjoy what's to come~ ^^
Date: 10/23/10 01:03 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
Okay, this is all going to be in one big pragraph because I'm on an iPod Touch and it hates tinyMCE so I have to use HTML. And I forget how many BR's you have to add to space or double space and there's no preview so I'm screwed, lol. Anyway. I am adoring this. The disorder is so fascinating and the way you write it is stunning. Your detail is astonishing and I swear I read every word of this which I usually don't do. I'm sad it's only three chapters and that it's not going to be a full production. :( The hallucination with Tom, although predictable, was very well written and I loved it, especially since I'm really into the idoglossia thing (the twin connection) and it broke my heart when Bill knew Tom was dead instinctively. Poor baby. :/ Ugh, and Brigitte pisses me off. Maybe I'm just being a fangirl but if I was her, I would leave the fucking speed dial thing alone and let poor Bill sleep if he needs to. I know it was forbidden but the poor thing needs sleep. >.> And I certainly wouldn't sleep over if he didn't want me to. :/ She's just annoying. But anyway this story is wonderful and I can't wait for the other parts. I hope this makes up some for me not commenting before. :)
Author's Response: Not commenting before? Whatever do you mean? - This is the first chapter! XD Haha~ Oh goodness, I cannot stand the iPod touch for all it's worth. ==; I appreciate the lengths you've gone to leave me a review, thanks!
Your compliments are far too gracious, thank you kindly~ I cannot possibly add another chapter-fic to my list of things to do. *goes greenish-white* I have too many at the moment as is, but also I felt as if this story, plot-wise, could only stretch as far as three chapters? *puffs cheeks* We'll see, but I hope you enjoy anyway, even if it is a mere three chapters; the brill thing about me (I'm kidding, it's not all that great actually) is I write very heavy chapters, so expect the next ones to be in the 5, 6, 7 or 8 thousand range, making up for what most authors dub numerous chapters anyway. :D You should always read every word, each word is a thread to an author's golden quilt~ ^^ I appreciate that you've done so here, I do.
I think all those in favour of twincest resent, automatically, any threat to the system. XD He/she needs not even be within the physical proximity of one of the twins, and everyone flicks on their torches. (Ha, I mean lights up, of the wooden variety.) It's quite all right, and yes, I agree! You have to ease on her for ignorance though, as she really -doesn't know-, much like Bill describes.
At any rate, I appreciate your review, thank you very much! I hope you'll enjoy future instalments. Cheers! ^---^
Date: 10/23/10 12:50 pm Title: One of Three (Stop Me)
Eee when I saw this I was so happy you'd posted :D
As usual, I love the first part, I cannot wait to see where you take it, although I'm 99% sure I already know :P
Your writing is improving, (if thats even possible)
I hope you get over your writers block soon though, it fucking sucks when you want to write but can't. And you should sleep more too ;) We all know we dont want you sleeping in class.
Hope you're okay sweetheart and I hope you update soon! *shakes fist* Otherwise I'll be hunting your ass down, asleep or not ;P
Author's Response: Haha... I laughed, aloud; of course I can improve, oh my god. Although I didn't realise any improvement was happening now. o__o Good news? :D
It does fucking suck... a lot. It's tummy-turning when everything you do is unsatisfactory. ;____; And I hope you know sleep is much too overrated. =__=;
Aww, I'm okay... I'll live anyway. It hasn't been easy, but I'm a fighter. Eep! @___@ I'll work hard I promise! (It's not like you have a gun or anything...............) *Snore*
Thanks love, as always. ♥