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Reviewer: rIKU rOCKS Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/09 04:21 am Title: Chapter 1

haha i like the ending ;)

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/08 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Bill is softly crooning an imaginary backing vocal to the odd video, the mattress is waving under them as he is leaning to-and-fro to the rhythm of the song. Tom is just lying there behind him and feels a vacuum surrounding them; he is sitting in this bubble with Bill, like a space capsule and nothing is out there but frozen space and time.

That part made me melt.

‘Tomi, just now in the bathroom, I used your toothbrush. I thought you should know.’
It is near.


That part made me crack up. Wonderful job, I loved it.

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