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Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 10:45 pm Title: Show Me

I love this one-shot! It was so sexy and well written, are you planning on a sequel maybe? It would be awesome! I really like the characters in this, a younger Tom and Older Bill is very interesting, it's original and different! I really enjoyed it, a new story from you is always a good surprise :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I do enjoy writing older Bill and younger Tom a lot so I should probably do more of that XD I'm always so pleased when you review and still enjoy something different :D

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 10:36 pm Title: Show Me

Oh Tomi...>:D Ahahahaha..XD HOT HOT one SHOT..XD

Is there a sequel for this??O__O Eeeeeeehhh..XD

Author's Response: Hee, thanks! There may be a sequel, but I'm not promising because I have about 5 things that need sequels as well as all my WIPs >.<

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 08:34 pm Title: Show Me

This was great! You did a great job writing a younger, inexperienced Tom and an older, hesitant Bill. The dialogue was perfect and Bill's reaction seemed realistic.

I'd love to see another chapter of all the other things Bill can "show" Tom. So hot!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad it was convincing ^_^ I'd definitely love to write a sequel if I find time so it's fab to know the interest is there XD

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 08:24 pm Title: Show Me

OHMIGOD. this is so wonderful. There should be a age difference genre/warning. I don't consider this pedo. I love it. I want a sequel :) where dey fuck. :) dankeee

Author's Response: This is so true - it does seem to have become a kink to have age difference. Thank you!!

Reviewer: Ryuuzaki_L Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 08:03 pm Title: Show Me

Needy little Tom is starting to become my favorite. EPIC!

I really don't want to sound like I'm complaining or pressure you and I'm saying this in the most positive way but please, if you have the time, write more! Not just on this - which I would love if you did - but in general. I just can't get enough of your amazing writing ♥ Thanks for this!

Author's Response: I think needy little Tom needs to be everyone's favourite :D Thank you so much - I'm working on a few things at the moment so there'll definitely be more writing, but I can't promise on this just yet. Again though, thank you - I'm utterly thrilled you liked this fic and my writing generally so much!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 07:44 pm Title: Show Me

any more?

Author's Response: Maybe?

Reviewer: Icarus Defiled Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 07:15 pm Title: Show Me

I had to read it three times before I could form a coherant thought long enough to review. God, I loved this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 07:08 pm Title: Show Me

Oh, and by the way - the banner? Absolutely exquisite!

Author's Response: Thank you! Lena is amazing and she spoils me so much *_*

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 07:00 pm Title: Show Me

OMG - *THUD*

Please, PLEASE consider a sequel? We all want to know what happens after they get back to Bill's house.

Author's Response: Hee! I am considering, I just have some other commitments first! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 07:00 pm Title: Show Me

I just awwed at Tom :3 He's so sweet *-*

Author's Response: :D I love writing sweet bottom Tom, thank you!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 06:55 pm Title: Show Me

Wow hot and so very very naughty. Ugh!!

Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^

Reviewer: InsertCleverUsernameHere Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 06:49 pm Title: Show Me

Oh my god, so fucking cute! *flails* :D
This had totally melted what`s left of my brain, totally -melted-, I tell you. It`s so adorable, I don`t even :3

You have no idea how much this was completely necessary. I didn`t even know how much till I read it, so thank god for kinkmeme XD And you too, for being amazingly amazing :)

I love Bill, he`s so easy ;) It took all of five seconds for Tom to win him over haha XD And Tom, so nervous and utterly adorable. They`re absolutely perfect :)

Can`t wait for the next part, nearly as excited as Tom lol :D

Author's Response: Haha! I don' know if there will be a next part at the moment, though I would love to write it if I have time. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying and squee!

Reviewer: AQUABUBU Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 06:45 pm Title: Show Me

It was really hot and sweet *-*

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: troublemischief Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 06:30 pm Title: Show Me

OOOOOOOOOoooooo, very nice. possibly a sequel in the future?

Author's Response: Possibly! Thank you!

Reviewer: Eirene Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 06:22 pm Title: Show Me

*FLAILS* So lovely! Hot and touching and just ... *_____*

It merits a long, long sequel. XD

Author's Response: Lol! Thank you! I have it on my list of things to maybe write :D

Reviewer: haenni89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 06:21 pm Title: Show Me

WOOOOAAAH!! O____O omg. I love love LOVE this! PLEASE, pretty please, write more? Make this a chapter story? *___* I'm begging you. D: I love this so much. O_O

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I can't promise more at the moment, but I'd certainly like to!

Reviewer: Nina Elisabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 06:21 pm Title: Show Me

That was unbelievably amazing, such a great plot and you did an amazing job - I really don't think there is enough young!Tom/older!Bill out there *__*

And your writing is superb, like always.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I fully agree that there isn't enough young!Tom/older!Bill out there - it much be rectified! Thank you again ♥

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 06:20 pm Title: Show Me

I fell in love with the banner in a heartbeat :D
Bill is so gentle, I'm jealous!!

Author's Response: Lena does such amazing banners - I keep staring at it, too. I'm glad if you enjoyed the fic :D

Reviewer: Mariesen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 05:56 pm Title: Show Me

I'm stunned and breathless D:
This was beyond amazing. Your description of the scenario etc. made it seem so real *_____*
*faves* Will be re-reading soon :3

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And happy birthday for Monday?

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/22/10 05:52 pm Title: Show Me

Nooo Realllllllyy Hot :P

Your writing a sequel? I can't wait :D

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