Date: 10/23/10 06:14 pm Title: Show Me
sequel? :D
Author's Response: Maybe? :D
Date: 10/23/10 05:39 pm Title: Show Me
This was so good.
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 10/23/10 04:39 pm Title: Show Me
oh my gawd! this definitley needs a follow-up! sososoooo great!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 10/23/10 11:35 am Title: Show Me
So close to being caught! Naugties!
LOVED this!
XD
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 10/23/10 10:13 am Title: Show Me
OMG that was awesome =) I hope there is a follow up =) xxx
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! I'd like to follow it up, not sure yet!
Date: 10/23/10 09:57 am Title: Show Me
What a thrill :D This was really sexy, but that's not all it was. It was also beautiful and fearful. Such a dangerous boundary to cross for Bill, but sometimes it's not everything to stick with the rules. And initially, it was more important to take into consideration what the outcome would be for Tom and not Bill. But oh, Bill cannot resist the sweetness of Tom, and the young teen will soon become a young man so there's really only happiness on both sides to gain from disregarding the position of responsibility.
And Tom is insanely happy. He gets to make out with his first crush and what a prize he got. Bill invites him home for more cuddling, where they can be undisturbed. There is a lot of beauty here and I wish this couple all the best :D Good job! *Maria
Author's Response: Thank you so much ♥ I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it and got all of this from it - Thank you for reading and such a lovely review!
Date: 10/23/10 07:24 am Title: Show Me
That just calls for a sequel!!! Pleeeeaaaase .. :D
Author's Response: If I can find time! ♥
Date: 10/23/10 07:09 am Title: Show Me
Awesome.
Really good one :P
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/23/10 06:55 am Title: Show Me
I read this on the toho_kinkmeme and I effing LOVED IT!! It's sooooooo sexy.
And very well written I think. You can see the age difference, but you can also see that attraction, and hesitation, and how Tom is shy and it's all "Awwwww" and brilliant!!! :)
I love the dialogue in this fic- it gives your characters distinct personalities and it's believable.
This fic has to be my fav this month. Very well done. :)
PS- there's room for expansion, so if you feel inspired, I would love to read a Part#2 for this fic. :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much - I've really enjoyed writing it and I would truly love to write more if I find the time. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10/23/10 04:22 am Title: Show Me
WOW. O.o (its a good wow XD) damn this was... wow. ive only read about a younger bill and an older tom, never the opposite. damn. : D
Author's Response: Thank you for giving this a try! :D
Date: 10/23/10 02:49 am Title: Show Me
Oh... my... I have a terrible weakness for younger or bottom Tom, so this was an incredible treat. I absolutely loved how Bill took care of him in more ways than one. Amazing work. :) Can I hope for a sequel? :3
Author's Response: Maybe >.> I adore bottom Tom too - thrilled you enjoyed reading this :D
Date: 10/23/10 01:41 am Title: Show Me
ohhh baby, i love your way.
Author's Response: Lol ♥
Date: 10/23/10 01:25 am Title: Show Me
That was hot! sequel? please?
Author's Response: Thank you! And maybe? >.>
Date: 10/23/10 01:19 am Title: Show Me
AHHH! I LOVE THIS! I love you so much for writing this, it was... ah, just perfect! It was so realistic, too; I imagine that if this were a real situation for Tom, he would act just like that.
One question! Maybe I'm just dense and read the numbers wrong, but how old is Bill, and how old is Tom?
EEE I LOVE IT!! Marry me, please? ;_;
Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!! I'm thrilled it came across realistic. I actually purposely left out ages for people to draw their own conclusions. Prompter suggested 13-14 and 19-20, I've probably written it a bit more along the lines of 15 and 20-22 in terms of what was in my head, but apply the ages you want XD
Date: 10/23/10 12:15 am Title: Show Me
I love it! Sequel please?
Author's Response: Thank you! And maybe?
Date: 10/23/10 12:05 am Title: Show Me
OH MY GOD...how incredibly hot and the way Bill was talking to Tom was so erotic~~Fantastic! I can only try to imagine how sexy hot it will be when Tom goes to Bill's! *Fantastic*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thrilled you enjoyed it XD
Date: 10/22/10 11:44 pm Title: Show Me
That was an ode to every teenage fantasy I've ever had about my teachers and tutors. GOLLY!
Author's Response: Lol!
Date: 10/22/10 11:27 pm Title: Show Me
First of all I have to comment on the banner, which is just adorable *__*
I loved this! You wrote Tom so pefectly - nervous and confused without making him pathetic (which often happens when people try to write needy twins!).
'the open acceptance that he needed so badly'
If only every young boy needing to 'come out' had a Bill in his life ...
Author's Response: Thank you! Lena does such amazing banners - I feel very spoilt. And thank you for reading; I don't think I realised quite how topical it'd turn out to be when I started writing it ._.
Date: 10/22/10 11:21 pm Title: Show Me
sequel!!!! =D.... wow.. this is a mind blowing one shot!! can't help but to want for MORE!!!!
Author's Response: Awwm thank you!
Date: 10/22/10 10:49 pm Title: Show Me
Very hot!
Author's Response: Thanks!