Date: 11/12/10 10:18 pm Title: Show Me
Have I told you how incredibly sexy this story is? Well it is. I'm not even 100% sure what it is. Strong, sexy Bill taking charge or sweet, innocent, virginal Tom being dominated. I'm sure it's all of the above and more. It's so delicious!
Author's Response: *squishes* I'm just so glad you and others are enjoying it as much as I'm enjoying writing it :D
Date: 11/12/10 06:37 pm Title: Show Me
This was an excellent story and I'm so glad I got a chance to read it. Danke and now I'm going to read the second one.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/12/10 06:23 pm Title: Show Me
What a marvelous oneshot.
I have put it into my favorites before I even read it because I just like your writing a lot, but I was postponing the initial pull to read it; was kinda worried a bit. This kind of prompt of 13/19 year-old ones is really a tough one if you want to avoid making it too pervy, or too cliched or too unrealistic. You rocked that plot though. What a fantastic story. Highly realistic sounding, perfect balance and chemistry between those two and hot, hot, hot.
I adored your responsible, more mature Bill and needy, eager but shy Tom. They were sublime together.
I am overjoyed that the sequel is on it's way. Can't wait!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thought the plot worked ♥ I understand the 13/19 being offputting, but... In my head it's a bit more like 15/21, so maybe that helps? I like to leave it vague so you can envision younger, if you like that, or older if that's preferred.
Date: 11/12/10 02:22 am Title: Show Me
I need more of this :D It was fantastic!
Author's Response: Lol! There'll be more by tomorrow with any luck!
Date: 11/09/10 12:29 pm Title: Show Me
Oh my Goodness! *___* This is going STRAIGHT to my favourites, it's absolutely wonderful! Oh man, seriously, I feel all nggggggh after reading that xD Oh God, I don't know how to tell you how much I loved that, really. I adore your writing, it's stunning. I was honestly wondering how you'd go about this without making it too awkward or anything, but coy!Tom sort of mixed with knowing-what-he-wants!Tom sorted it out perfectly :) With the help of Bill, of course. This was such a perfect fic, I could picture it so clearly, and wow, you really wrote incredibly well! I could feel poor Tom's emotions running high, and then the way Bill treated him, aw wow. I really really REALLY love your writing, you're amazingly talented! Sorry this review is nothing more than a bit of a gush .__.
I know I'm about the join a loooong list when I say this, but do you think you'll make a sequel? I would love to see one, seriously, this is one of my favourite fics ever *___* AND THE ENDING! It's practically begging for a sequel... I do so believe ;)
Author's Response: I have written quite a bit of a sequel, so there's the good news! I think it'll be a series of three oneshots ^_^ Thank you so much for this lovely review - I'm really thrilled you enjoyed it as much as you did ♥
Date: 11/04/10 10:57 am Title: Show Me
I saw this story in someone's favourites and wondered why I never got a notification sent to my email about it. That darn submit button, I swear I miss it all the time. >.< I absolutely adored this story. I loved the forbidden fruit part, Tom being too young and I loved it even more that Bill didn't let it stop him ;) I missed the botTom part that you promised but you're saving that for the sequal right? ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this ♥ There will be more in the sequel, and I'm tentatively planning another one after that, too. The botTom warnings on this one and the next one are more for the characterisation, but the final one should have the literal act - I tend to find if people don't like the idea of 'botTom' at all, it's just as well to warn for the characterisation as the physicallity!
Date: 11/02/10 02:08 pm Title: Show Me
this is an awesome story. the banner is amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you! And Lena really did spoil me with that banner *_*
Date: 11/01/10 05:25 pm Title: Show Me
O_O whoa...
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks?
Date: 10/29/10 02:33 pm Title: Show Me
this was just vague enough not to be too creepy with the underage thing. I really like this fic. congrats on a job well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! ♥
Date: 10/28/10 12:12 pm Title: Show Me
OH! I just can't even tell you how much I adored this, and I am so upset with myself for not reading it sooner. I just stashed it away in my Tracked Stories for a rainy day and since I've been so ill lately I've had a chance to sort through it. Anyway, I LOVED it, and although I will not beg you for more, this would make a fatastic basis for a series. Love your twins. Love your writing. Love you!
Author's Response: And belated thank you for this too - So glad you enjoyed it :D Was enormous fun to write ^_^
Date: 10/26/10 08:11 am Title: Show Me
As the OP for this prompt, let me just say again how incredibly awesome this story is! It totally exceeded my expectations. I love how vulnerable you made Tom, and the entire setup of pseudo-teacher/student is fantastic.
I'm desperately hoping this story will be continued.
Author's Response: Aha! Thank you - I really enjoyed writing it, so thank you for such a fab prompt XD Not sure on continuing right now, but we'll see!
Date: 10/25/10 11:37 pm Title: Show Me
I'm not going to tease you for a sequel, I adore this as a stand-alone piece. But I would certainly love to see more if you were ever so inclined!
I really enjoyed the dynamic between the two of them in this story; Tom so coltish, yet so overcome with desire that he started out determined to ask for one thing, yet was lured to ask for what he really wanted. And Bill, seduced by that gorgeous young Tom from his determined role of mentor to being a passionate lover. *_* Quite beautiful, and Lena's art really captured the moment, as always.
Very glad you picked up this prompt - this was sweet, yet also so very sexy.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much Tay :D I had a fab time writing it so it's lovely to know so many people enjoyed it!
Date: 10/25/10 10:47 pm Title: Show Me
I love this! Please tell me you'll write more to it X3
Author's Response: Not sure on more, but thank you for enjoying it!!
Date: 10/25/10 08:43 am Title: Show Me
SEQUEL PLEASE! this was awsome! :DD
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!
Date: 10/24/10 06:32 pm Title: Show Me
oh my god. i love it so much!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 10/24/10 05:15 pm Title: Show Me
wonderful. =)
Author's Response: Thanks ^_^
Date: 10/24/10 04:42 pm Title: Show Me
Oh btw... the banner?
Simply adorable in the cutest way :3
Author's Response: And thank you for this - Lena is incredible and she really spoils me *_*
Date: 10/24/10 04:38 pm Title: Show Me
Oh man... you just gave path to a new fetish for me: Older Bill guiding an unexperienced younger Tom...
That's hot *phews*... so hot!
You should TOTALLY make a series based off on the things Tom learned about older Bill. Oh man, what a good series that would be!
Loved it, so very very much!
Author's Response: Haha, awesome - I adore Older!Bill with Younger!Tom and I think it'd be fab if more people liked it. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying!
Date: 10/24/10 04:31 am Title: Show Me
I was hoping this would make it to a nice even 50 and so I'm swooping in to give it to you! ;) I loved this and add me to the list of people poking for a sequel if you can find time!
Author's Response: Haha ♥ Thank you Lenapie - I credit your amazing banner for a lot of this!
Date: 10/23/10 10:33 pm Title: Show Me
Oh damn. Usually it's teacher Tom with student Bill but with teacher Bill and student Tom...well, Bill doesn't last nearly as long in the face of pure teenage seduction. I like that just fine, by the way.
Author's Response: I like to mix things up - I'm glad if you enjoyed it. I think the 'problem' with older!Tom is that the protectiveness of younger!Bill always carries over >.> Slows things down ^_~