Date: 08/19/11 11:43 pm Title: Say Goodbye
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
You made me laugh.. you almost made me cry... omg..
Tom´s hangover was very fun! I really enjoyed it.. but the "goodbye" was so sad.. I hope that Andreas will not have trouble with his classmates.. and that he can make more friends.. because he is an only child and the twins were his only companions..
You know.. I was putting off the reading of this chapter beacuse I didnt know when the year 6 was going to start.. and I´ve just saw that has already started!!! I´m so excited!!!!!!!!..
I want to know what is going to happen now.. who are they going to meet.. etc etc..oh.. and I want to know also how is going to be the room situation!..
You know.. I love the fact that this story is not only super interesting but this also help me to improve my english :) ..because you use wide range of words.. not the common ones.. and I have to look at my english dictionary always :D..
Anyways.. congratulations for this fic!
P.D: I´ve just saw your twitter account.. I will follow u right now ;)
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Yeah, it's sad to leave your "childhood" behind. And it sucks for Andreas to be left behind. Lots of new things coming up for year six! Sorry to make you wait. :)
Wow, thank you! I'm really glad if it can help you improve your English, that's great to hear. Thanks so much! Oh, what's your name on Twitter? I'll make sure to follow you back. :)
Date: 07/31/11 04:37 pm Title: That Which Makes the Difference
hahahahahaahaahah :D
Loved it!
So..skritches to them are like kisses uh?.. how cute!..I dream about doing that.. how soft their ears and tail would be!..stroking them while their eyes are looking at you.. omg *.* .. you know what?..If I were a girl from their school I´ll make a plan with my friends to intercept ONE of the twins in his way to the bathroom for example.. and steal him a kiss.. and then I´ll just run and hide :D ..but in front of him.. I would show myself like very confident and everything :D!!.. you really make my mind fly far far away!..
Great chapter by the way ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it!
Well, it's not exactly the same, skritches are really in their own category. It's a friendly little gesture. Omg so bad! You'd traumatize the kits forever. ;D
Thanks so much!
Date: 06/13/11 04:29 pm Title: Say Goodbye
Hey Tay, it's Daisy. I've nver read these before so I spend the last few days doing that in between reading the stories I track. I'm in love. Will there be a year six?
Author's Response: Hey Daisy! I'm glad you're enjoying this one, too. I'm definitely working on year six right now and hope to start posting it soon-ish. ♥
Date: 05/18/11 07:15 pm Title: Say Goodbye
*still waiting on the edge of her seat for the start of year 6*
Author's Response: Soon, I hope! ♥ I'm working on chapter seven right now.
Date: 04/28/11 06:49 pm Title: Say Goodbye
I've read the whole series so far, and loved it. This is far more original- than fan-fiction, and I think with some editing, and name-changing, you could publish it as such... though the underage-incest could cause problems, it might not if approached from a very fantasy genre angle, with the reader knowing, from maybe a mini-introduction to the world chapter, a bit more about youko customs than the main characters. Anne McCaffrey makes excellent use of such a mini chapter before most of her Pern books (which you should read, they're awesome). Anyway, as it is fanfiction, I can't wait to see what role Gustav has in your world, how well the city really suits the twins and Simone &Gordon, and "Black Question Mark"-though I must admit, I really hope they decide upon a different name. You develop your characters quite well, although I do wish we heard more from the viewpoint of the people around the twins.Your plot is interesting, surprising and delightful in its details, and is utterly believable in the context of the world you created- which should always be the case, but often isn't. ok, I've rambled on enough, and probably made myself sound like an utter creeper, but I do hope you continue writing this series.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The universe definitely started out in my original universe and I've always wanted to make a go of trying to publish the original stories I've written for that. I have read Anne McCaffrey's Pern books - grew up on them! I'm flattered you think the world-building stands up so strongly.
We're getting further on to the answers of some of those questions! Thank you so much for this review, it really made my day. :) I'm almost done with the first chapter of year six, and a banner is coming together...I hope to start posting soon! Thanks for your support.
Date: 04/16/11 03:28 am Title: Say Goodbye
I'm all weepy. b29;b29;b29;
Author's Response: Awww. ;_;
Date: 02/17/11 09:47 am Title: Say Goodbye
Gah!!
I can't wait for year 6.
I just read through all 5 years and now i'm totally HOOKED!!
I even gave my Bill and Tom sims fox ears and tails. LOL
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm excited you're looking forward to it! :D Hee, Sim youko sounds absolutely adorable. Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 02/11/11 02:28 pm Title: Say Goodbye
I just finished to read the last part and I have to say this story is one of my absolutely favourites! I love this world that you created and love youko twins. Please don't make us wait too long for Year Six!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you love it so much. ♥ I will do my best to make sure you don't wait too long!
Date: 02/06/11 03:04 am Title: Say Goodbye
LOL No way Tom and Andi would listen to Bill, and I bet they were regretting it with every heave. Silly boys.
The end was so sad, though. Yes, they're going to have new adventures, but leaving Andi behind is such a huge thing for them. The hug at the end was lovely. I hope they'll really see him again!
Author's Response: Of course not. ;) Alcohol is TASTY and VERBOTEN and it was so much fun at the time! How could they resist? But yeah, Tom's sure he's never drinking again. :P
It's really sad. And too bad Andi and his family aren't moving with them. :/ Thank you so much for loving this story. ♥
Date: 02/04/11 01:59 pm Title: Say Goodbye
First time getting drunk for those kits what a "great" memory of their last night in Leroux... or not lol But you don't think about the consequences too much when you're young (only Bill does but who listens?)
*camps out waiting for year 6*
Author's Response: Ha, no kidding. D: Bill's always been mature beyond his years! ...He'll probably be joining Tom with the drinking when he gets a bit older though. ;)
It'll happen! Thank you for your support. ♥
Date: 02/04/11 05:02 am Title: Say Goodbye
Oh, silly boys.
It's very sad for them to leave Andreas, but I'm looking forward to the new chances that the move will bring for them--perhaps people will be more accepting of them in a bigger town? Maybe they'll even meet others of their kind (who don't try to take them from their parents)?
I know you're discouraged by the drop in reviews on this story, and mentioned taking a break before writing/posting Year Six, but I want you to know that I'm still behind the kits, and will be looking forward to more whenever you end up writing it.
Author's Response: They just couldn't help themselves! Unsupervised access to alcohol!
It's very sad, but yeah, there's SO much in Miltonne, I've really been looking forward to writing what's coming up next! (I had such a meeting scripted, but further on...I think I'm gonna have to move it up.)
It means a lot to me that you're behind the kits. ♥ Now that my mood is picking up I'm feeling more positively about everything! I hope to start year six very soon.
Date: 02/04/11 04:49 am Title: What You Know
Aww...I love the ending to this chapter. The kits are just so perfect together.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ♥ I am really happy you think so. :)
Date: 02/04/11 04:31 am Title: Playing the Final Days
Yes, poor Andreas. But at least he came around in the end. I didn't want them all to be mad at each other.
I'm excited for the changes that will come with this move, though.
Date: 02/03/11 07:19 pm Title: Say Goodbye
Oh! I guess I didn't realize that year 5 was coming to an end already!
I really enjoyed each and every chapter of this year and I was really looking forward to your updates! I feel so lucky to be able to follow the kits as they grow, the development of their relationship is adorable and I can't get enough of this series! I love this chapter and I think it's cool that they got drunk for the first time together for their last night. They definitely won't forget it! It really is the beginning of a new life for them and I can't wait to read what you have in store for us. Take your time tho, I'll be there whenever you're ready to share the next step in the kits life with us! =)
Author's Response: I said it was gonna be a short year! :o
I'm so happy you love this story so much! *hugs you* That's exactly what I want to do - go through their whole development process. :) You're right, they definitely won't forget this night. Poor kits. :) But yes, it's a new beginning for them and I have LOTS in store. :D Thank you for sticking with me!
Date: 02/03/11 07:12 pm Title: Games in the Night
Ooh, the kits are definitely working things out, aren't they? This chapter was just what I had been waiting for.
Date: 02/03/11 07:01 pm Title: Gallery Night
Bill's kilt was just the cutest thing ever...I'm sure Tom could see that, in the long run.
Very sweet chapter. Although, I'm so wary of adults in this story, that I'm instantly suspicious of their paying gig. I hope it works out for them!
Date: 02/03/11 06:50 pm Title: Resolution
Aww...well, I'm glad the kits worked things out, and that Tom realizes how good he has it with Bill.
Also, I'm excited to hear they're moving somewhere new. I'm sure there will be challenges there, too, but it will be exciting to see what the kits make of it!
Date: 02/03/11 04:52 pm Title: For the Price of One
Oh Tom....you silly, stupid boy.
Author's Response: Infidelity is a big, huge squick of mine, too. This chapter was very difficult to write!
Date: 02/03/11 02:41 pm Title: Say Goodbye
Oops, not so smart of those boys. But not terribly shocking either. I look forward to year six and all its adventures. I hope you find your motivation again. =) I'll be waiting until you do.
Author's Response: Definitely not so smart. But it was bound to happen sometime. ;) Thank you! I'm already feeling loads better and I hope to start year six after a brief break!
Date: 02/02/11 11:26 pm Title: Say Goodbye
Silly, silly kits. Also, sad goodbyes! I hate goodbyes. :( I'm going to miss Andi </3
Author's Response: They sure can be! :o Yes, very sad days. We're all going to miss Andi. :(