Date: 11/25/10 12:46 pm Title: Small Pain for Pleasure
I totally noticed and I missed the kits last week, so happy to see a new chapter =) Knowing that you just forgot, if it happens again, I’ll remind you =P
Aww, Bill’s birthday wish is so cute, it breaks my heart that he can’t have this simple thing... And it was intriguing to meet someone who knew a bit about youko, too bad they didn’t get that much info out of him... I guess they’ll have to figure things on their own!
I can’t wait for next week, especially after reading the end notes... I wonder what’s gonna happen and how they’re gonna build their unconditional trust back.
Author's Response: I'm sorry~! I did forget, and I was busy. Um. Or something.
Bill does wish for things. ._. And yeah, they're pretty much stuck figuring out things on their own!
Ummmm! *flees*
Date: 11/25/10 06:08 am Title: Small Pain for Pleasure
Oh, now I'm nervous about the next chapter! I enjoyed this one, though-hearing about them getting their piercings was great fun.
Author's Response: Ahh, I'm sorry! :x I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter though! It's fun to get through these parallels.
Date: 11/25/10 01:51 am Title: Small Pain for Pleasure
Ooh! Feisty lil kits! I was wondering if when they would get piercings. And I really like your use of the word torrid. That's precious and hot. Like the twins.
Author's Response: Them's my kits! They got their start! Glad you liked it. ;D Thanks for your comment!
Date: 11/13/10 02:38 am Title: That Which Makes the Difference
I loved the line about tom thinking breasts where going to be his downfall. hilarious. keep up the great work!
Author's Response: ;D At least he recognizes it early? Thank you! I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy it.
Date: 11/11/10 09:51 pm Title: That Which Makes the Difference
LOL I love how all Bill has to do is say maybe HE should kiss some girls, and Tom about comes unglued. I only have a small thing about possessive!Tom. ;)
Author's Response: This Tom is possessive!Tom all the way. ;) It's gonna get even better from here on out! And yeah, that was totally Tom's undoing, Bill may know his weak points!
Date: 11/11/10 10:04 am Title: That Which Makes the Difference
Oh oh... Big trouble in view for Tom if he keeps staring at girls boobs like that. Bill is already so jealous...
Author's Response: No kidding! This is only the beginning of the trouble... Thanks for your review! :D
Date: 11/11/10 07:30 am Title: That Which Makes the Difference
Uh-oh, my lil Tomi is gonna get his butt in trouble, stay away from the boobs! Lol!
Author's Response: No kidding! Tomi's judgment is somewhat clouded, here.
Date: 11/11/10 04:07 am Title: That Which Makes the Difference
I don't think they'll ever get too old for scritches. Public scritches, maybe, but never private!
Poor Tom. So many bountiful girls, and none of them are Bill so he needs to get some blinders! ;P
Author's Response: Well now, there's a fair point. ;) And yes! Tom is still young and distracted, he hasn't reached that zen place where there are bobs but they don't matter.
Date: 11/11/10 01:36 am Title: That Which Makes the Difference
great!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 11/11/10 01:35 am Title: That Which Makes the Difference
great!!!
Author's Response: Hee, thank you!
Date: 11/10/10 11:06 pm Title: That Which Makes the Difference
Awww! Poor Bill, I felt SO sad for him at the beginning of this chapter. I'm glad he found a way to let Tom see his side of things. Of course Tom wouldn't want him to kiss anybody, it was a good way to make Tom realize how Bill felt :) I adore Tom's solution in the end, how he can't stop looking at girls but give Bill extra attention as a form of repayment!
I can't wait for the next chapter, seems very interesting, especially this tongue thing... :P
Author's Response: I know, poor bb. But Bill got Tom around to his point of view. And Tom has his compromise worked out!
We shall see, we shall see! ;D
Date: 11/10/10 09:44 pm Title: That Which Makes the Difference
EHEHEHEHE TOM'S DISCOVERED BOOBIES
Uh, that was my initial reaction to this chapter as a whole, because I'm a twelve-year-old at heart. And then I was like "Noooo, Tom, but Bill! ;_;" Ah, the one thing that could come between the twins: boobs. Not forever, mind, but I can't blame Tom for looking. You wrote his boob-trance so well. Ehehe. Clever Bill, to suggest that maybe he should kiss some girls; that got Tomi's attention! Well. For the moment, anyway.
Oho, something for Tom to do with his tongue? That sounds promising. *makes big eyes at you*
Author's Response: BOOBIES HAVE MYSTERIOUS ALLURE
I wrote it as a twelve-year old at heart! But yes, boobs are the one thing that could come between the twins. Bill has zero interest in boobs, so Tom took over his share for both of them?
There's always a twist, with me. ;D
Date: 11/10/10 09:44 pm Title: That Which Makes the Difference
Ahaha, Tom finally gets his boob obsession. Poor, bb.
Author's Response: AND HIS LIFE WAS FOREVER DIFFERENT FROM THAT POINT. Only not really. >_> Thanks and yes, poor bb.
Date: 11/08/10 12:09 am Title: The More Things Change
So frustrating that the school can't do anything, but I love how Scotty was introduced. HATED the shape he was in, but how sweet that he and the twins took to each other so quickly. Wonderful chapter, Tay! :D
Author's Response: It is, and they've been trying for years to get the school do do something...it's just no good! Gordon definitely had to rescue a puppy in that condition, poor boy. And of course, he'll make the perfect companion for the twins. Thank you so much!
Date: 11/04/10 11:03 pm Title: The More Things Change
Tom's ears were up, too, and he broke into a surprised grin. It was difficult to say which of them were scrambling harder to get through the door- so cute, I was smiling like an idiot reading that part.
I adore Gordon in this story, he does so much to try and help the kits.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yes, Gordon wants to take care of his boys. Thank you! Next chapter coming up tomorrow!
Date: 11/04/10 10:06 pm Title: The More Things Change
I love that the twins are finally growing up and being more *cough cough* sexually active. And aside from me being a pervert this chapter was great!
Author's Response: They are indeed! *cough* I think this year may actually earn an NC17 rating... Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/04/10 09:23 pm Title: The More Things Change
aww! that was so sweet! the part with the dog, the poor thing, so ill treated at first, they will give him a good home.
Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it! They will definitely give him the best home.
Date: 11/04/10 06:43 pm Title: The More Things Change
Poor Gordon, he's so frustrated and just wants to protect his boys. And gah, I can imagine how he felt once he understood that people would want the kits. Like that old perv before that wanted to buy Tom! *shiver*
And you broke my heart with the description of scotty. I can't bear the thought of any animal in that condition. But I'm so glad he has the twins now!
I love this story to pieces. I truly do.
Author's Response: It's a really tough position for him. All he wants to do is protect his boys! And...yeah. Gordon had hints before, but hearing it now...it's always going to be tough for him, of course.
Scotty's going to be 100% loyal to his new owners, he's gone from the worst to the best, poor boy. Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're still enjoying it so much.
Date: 11/04/10 04:16 pm Title: The More Things Change
Aww, yay, doggie :3 Sorry for the lame comment, I'm on my lunch break. I'm still here though :3
Author's Response: They finally get their Scotty! :) Thanks for your comment, I'm happy you're still with me.
Date: 11/04/10 03:06 pm Title: The More Things Change
I love how easily Scotty took to the boys, but Kas seemed to dislike Bill with a passion xD Maybe they're just not cat people? Haha.
And it sucks that the school couldn't do anything about the bullies =/ Stupid boys...it's not their fault they're so damn cute.
Author's Response: Bill's just not a cat person! ;) Or he was trying too hard...
It really does suck about the school, poor kits. We'll see how things progress...