Date: 12/02/10 08:58 pm Title: For the Price of One
*flails* Noooo. Twins need to be alright again. Poor kits.
Author's Response: :( I'm sorry to bring the hurt! Poor kits indeed. Thanks for your review! ♥
Date: 12/02/10 08:43 pm Title: For the Price of One
I am so VERY glad that I finally caught up with this story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still with me! :) Thank you for your review.
Date: 12/02/10 08:19 pm Title: Small Pain for Pleasure
Hee! I giggled that Tom kicked the piercer because he felt Bill's pain. I imagine Simone's going to have a conniption, omg. lol
Author's Response: It's SO Tom, don't you think? ;D And, you may find Simone more understanding on THIS than you'd think. *hugs* Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/02/10 05:26 pm Title: For the Price of One
As I said curious!Tom will get himself in trouble and hell he did! They're so interdependent...
Author's Response: Curious!Tom just can't seem to help himself, the doof. :P They are completely inter-dependent! That's not likely to change just yet...
Date: 12/02/10 04:10 pm Title: For the Price of One
I know I don't comment nearly enough on this fic as I should but have I ever told you that I absolutely love this story.
The story overall and the plot is great, but the way that you are able to retell the events of the twins' lives in this and still make it exciting by keeping readers on the edge of their seats is amazing. I pity Bill in this chapter, Tom can be so thick sometimes.
Author's Response: I appreciate every time you comment! :) And it's good to know you're still enjoying it when you check in. ♥ I wish I could move this along faster for you all...I hope to really devote the second half of this year to making significant progress on this story. :) And yes, Tom can be so dense, poor bb.
Date: 12/02/10 03:08 pm Title: For the Price of One
Awe Kits are growing up and tings are never easy. I felt sorry for Tom just so lost and confused.
Author's Response: They are indeed! Poor kits, you're right, it's never easy for them. And Tom's not the only one. ♥
Date: 12/02/10 03:04 pm Title: That Which Makes the Difference
This is definitely my favorite chapter. i love Tom's mixed feelings.
Author's Response: Poor Tom. ;) Yes, he's growing up and it's proving difficult, of course!
Date: 12/02/10 01:23 pm Title: For the Price of One
Bah! Look what you did Tom! Bah! That's all I can say, LOL
Author's Response: I know, I feel like a bad person. =_= Sorry? ...Resolution to come! ♥
Date: 12/02/10 12:54 pm Title: For the Price of One
Ohhh! Poor kits, I felt so sad for them while reading this chapter! You wrote Bill’s pain so well, I was really able to feel it. The ending especially was really sad but I trust them to work things out together. I love how possessive Tom was of ``his Bill``, it was really cute and I hope he realized what he has done and that he'll never do it again. Can't wait for next week's chapter!
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry! They're in a difficult spot, they will hurt each other, as they go on! Poor lil' kits. I'm glad you could feel it, though! Tom is definitely possessive, always. Thanks and next chapter to go up soon!
Date: 12/02/10 05:26 am Title: For the Price of One
wow. that was an amazing chapter. growing up sure it hard. thanks so much for this wonderful chapter, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, it's difficult whether you're kits or human. But especially if you're twins I suppose! I appreciate your review, and I will definitely continue! :D
Date: 12/02/10 04:11 am Title: For the Price of One
Really cute the way you handled their "first kiss w/the same girl" story in the youko-verse! Just caught up... cuteness abounds. I love Scotty showing up and I think it's adorable the way Bill says, "Go 'way" like a little kid ^^
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :3 I'm really glad you enjoyed it. They will continue to be cute but push each other's boundaries! ...until we hit the surly teens. >_> Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 12/02/10 03:15 am Title: For the Price of One
Oh boys. :( I really hope Tom's learned his lesson and never does it again.
Author's Response: ...we'll see about that. ;_;
Date: 12/02/10 12:43 am Title: For the Price of One
Yikes. That's the price of discovery, Tomi! You've opened Pandora's Box. *sniffles into hankie*
Author's Response: Yes indeed! Poor baby, he really didn't think about that ahead of time...
Date: 12/02/10 12:38 am Title: For the Price of One
Get used to this feeling of angst, kits. Ah, the joys of the preteen and teen years. I'm so glad that's over for me! Oh wait, the twenties are the new teens. DAMNIT! Sorry kits, looks like you'll be suffering through drama for the rest of your lives!
Nice chapter Tay. Glad to see you remembered us this time!
Author's Response: Yeah, this is just a taste of what's to come. *cough* I mean. Uh. Yeah, I'm glad it's over for me, too! As for youko - they're considered "teenagers" essentially until their thirties or so, which means...yep, you guessed it.
Thank you! And it's not a matter of forgetting you guys! I just get busy and caught up in other things. ♥
Date: 12/01/10 11:55 pm Title: For the Price of One
Oh Tomi. *sighs and shakes head* I was kinda expecting him to kiss Alisha, but I so didn't see Bill kissing her coming. It was a great way to drive his point home, though, and show Tom how much he hurt him by kissing someone else. I guess it won't be too easy for Bill to trust him fully again after this or at least that's the impression I got after that last scene. I'll be looking forward to more. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Bill knows how to hit where it hurts! ;D And yes, the trust is a bit frayed, poor boys. They will have to work to build that back up. Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/01/10 11:47 pm Title: For the Price of One
Poor sweetlings. They're so curious, but it's that thing again, the "I can change and explore, but you can't" concept. I want to cuddle them.
Author's Response: More of that theme, yes! They are definitely at the age where they need cuddlings. Thanks for your review sweetie!
Date: 11/26/10 11:55 pm Title: Small Pain for Pleasure
ooh, the teaser for the next chapter looks really really good. i loved this chapter, yay for piercings!
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it! Thank you so much.
Date: 11/25/10 06:51 pm Title: Small Pain for Pleasure
Well, I said I've review so here I am ^_^ I think I'd best go back and start from year one :D I didn't read this for fear of spoilers, but I did promise a review even if this is a bit of a poor excuse for one .-.
I'm looking forward to reading through their years, I've never been a particular fan of CreatureFic but you know, I'm pretty much hooked on anything you write so I'm in no doubts I will love this series :) Hope this helps to knock up your numbers :D *love*
Author's Response: Hehe, I didn't think you were reading this, so I wouldn't have asked you to review! It's incredibly sweet of you to offer. ♥
This is definitely a young twins fic and there's not too strong of a creature element, I don't think. I'd be honored if you gave it a try!
Date: 11/25/10 02:38 pm Title: Small Pain for Pleasure
Oh those troublesome kits. ;)
The bit telling us the difference between Scotty when he just joined them and now made me misty. What a sweetheart.
That's very interesting about the metals and youko rejecting them. I wonder why. And I hope they get to meet more youko eventually to ask!
Author's Response: A trend that will continue. ;D
Scotty's their baby! They've done good things for him. And he, of course, will be their loyal boy forever.
Hmmmmm, can't say...And as for youko, it's, um, gonna be. A WHILE.
Date: 11/25/10 12:59 pm Title: Small Pain for Pleasure
Uh-oh, sounds like trouble in the next chapter
This makes me miss my eyebrow piercing, but I'm glad the twins are slowly growing up. :)
Author's Response: Trouble indeed. ._. The twins are getting there, bit by bit! Even if it's taking me a long-ass time.