Date: 11/28/10 01:46 am Title: Crimson
Gah, I didn't think I'd ever be into this sort of gender play, especially having both Tom and Bill playing girls- but this is honestly one of the hottest fics I've read recently, and I've never liked femslash. I can't wait for more- the air between them is just sultry. I love it.
Author's Response: Aw, wow, that means a lot. Thank you! :D
Date: 11/27/10 04:46 pm Title: Crimson
I just wanted to drop a few lines and say that I keep reading this even if I'm terrible reviewer right now. I like girl!twins so much, they are so fresh compared to "normal" selves. This is so cute.
And I have a crush on girl!Tom. I'd love to get myself a tomboyish Tomi, I really would. She is so adorable :)
Anyway, just wanted to say that and that the first kiss was really sweet. Nice job!
Author's Response: I think we'd all like a tomboy Tomi of our own. ;) I know I do! Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm really glad you're enjoying this. :)
Date: 11/23/10 11:32 pm Title: Crimson
Woot yay for updates, although now both of the girls are confused xD
Author's Response: It's all right, that will be fixed soon. ;)
Date: 11/23/10 08:06 pm Title: Crimson
I freakin love it!! I also love all the little subtle hints (im not sure if you put them in on purpose, though im sure you did) of how Tomi gets the spaghetti with no meatballs or how Billy says not all of us blood lust for meat. lol Idk maybe my mind is just in the gutters but thats was funny to me.
Author's Response: Haha! I wish I could be suave and be all "oh yeah, totally" but I'm not that awesome. xD That was totally on accident but I love you for pointing it out to me. Also, thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 11/23/10 07:27 pm Title: Denial
Badazz is all I have to say about Billy. And the vivid desriptions you give of her..yummy.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 11/23/10 06:39 pm Title: Favours
Love it! So much drama and intensity. I love how even though it was a sexual experience you made the focuse not even completely on that.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 11/23/10 03:08 pm Title: Crimson
Awww They kissed! That was adorable, the tension was so well described I could feel it! Really good chapter, this fic is really interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/23/10 02:17 pm Title: Crimson
luffs it!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/23/10 02:01 pm Title: Crimson
oooooooooh *____* they kissed! I flailed a heck of a lot during this chapter, I am so in love with both your Billy and Tomi characters. Tomi's sort of awkward disposition is so endearing, I'M falling for her xD And Billy, well she just oozes sex appeal. This is such an amazing fic! It's beautiful and I can't wait to see how their relationship develops :) You're one of my favourite authors on this site and this fic is the perfect example why!
Author's Response: That means so much. Thank you. <333
Date: 11/23/10 11:58 am Title: Crimson
It's funny that Billy was the nervous one. Such a contrast to Tomi in previous chapters.
Can't wait to see Andreas get jealous!
LOVED this!
XD
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 11/23/10 10:30 am Title: Crimson
Aaaaw so cute!! Poor Tomi is just out of her league here. I love it. :D And Georg is so oblivious, bless his heart. I love this story - a realistic buildup of a crush. I love it! :D
Jane
Author's Response: He kind of wants to be oblivious, if you know what I mean. ;) I'm really glad you like it! Thank you!
Date: 11/23/10 10:28 am Title: Crimson
Lovely! Oh, poor Andreas. He shoulda known, though. But Tomi wasn't be fair either (in asking that of her friend).
Author's Response: Well, in her defence she doesn't know how he feels. :) <3
Date: 11/23/10 09:46 am Title: Crimson
Im completely hooked on this and really looking forward to more!! I cannot wait for these two to get together!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you!
Date: 11/23/10 08:43 am Title: Crimson
tomi is charming, haha. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 11/23/10 06:41 am Title: Crimson
lol First kiss!!!
Andi is in such a weird position imo :/ I wouldn't like to be him at all XD I wonder how often friends do that for each other w/o the friendship being ruined.
Author's Response: Firsts are always awkward. ;) And I have no idea about friendships getting weird. I've never been in that position.
Date: 11/23/10 05:32 am Title: Crimson
this is... cute is the wrong word, but it's something similar, and it's so... /that word/ that i almost can't breathe in the most fantastic way possible. it's almost like i AM tomi, my heart is beating and all that... LOVE IT.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm so glad! <3
Date: 11/23/10 04:58 am Title: Crimson
Oh sweet naive Tomi...how can you still be confused after that kiss XD lol. I loved everything about this and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It's a lot to take in! ;P I'm so glad you liked it, thank you! <3
Date: 11/14/10 11:00 pm Title: Uncertain-certainty
I'm really into this fic. It's so different and well written, I just love it! I really can't wait to read the next chapter to see what's gonna happen between Billy and Tomi!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you're so into the fic. Thank you. :)
Date: 11/14/10 10:49 pm Title: Denial
Billy is awesome! And so is Tomi! I really like how you describe and develop the characters in this fic! Reading more about Tomi and how she feels was very interesting !
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/14/10 10:41 pm Title: Favours
Wow ! That was an intense first chapter! I kept wondering if Tomi was going to go all the way or back out at the last second! I feel so sad for her...
This is a very original and different story and I'm interested to read more :)
Author's Response: Yeah, she's determined to ignore what she really wants. I'm really glad you liked this. Thanks. :)