Date: 11/02/10 01:40 am Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
way to BREAK MY HEART, you cruel sadistic baby killer!!! oh god, poor beautiful, happy Tomi must be so hurt right now. I can't imagine what he's going through, or how Bill must feel not knowing what to do. Does this mean Tom will have to leave the center? And if he leaves Bill alone, who will take care of Bill and his baby? i really hope their's a happy ending here :( please, update soon!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, it killed me to do it! (not really) I so totally am, I admit it. He really must be, and he really is, I assure you. YOU SHALL SEE :L
Date: 11/01/10 09:05 pm Title: Murdering Mr. Harper and naming babies Megatron
oh, shit's going down now! Tomi is such a good freind, and i feel so bad for Bill...but the kiss!! eep! i can't wait to see what happens next. i think Bill really needs a freind. and i can't believe everything Tom has been through. an abusive father, an alcoholic mother, and a jackass bf....he needs a freind too, lol.
Author's Response: xD Tom so is! That kiss was so... not part of the original plan but.. I added it and was like... YES. Yeah, I really am horrible to my characters. Not as horrible as others, but hey, it could be worse.
Date: 11/01/10 08:55 pm Title: Assumptions about Canadian Weirdo's
don't worry about people's expectations, teh only thing they could possibly judge you on is your writing so far, which has been awseom btw. i, as a reader, would expect no less than what you've been dishing out so far, which with each new chapter is just getting better. though i have to say, i hope bill lightens up soon, lol. tom's right, if anything it's not good for the baby. and the little listing boy sounds freaking adorable!
Author's Response: Yeah, I realized that from all the LOVERLY reviews ^^ Yeah ahaha, Bill is so.. EMO. Gah. I imagined him so adorable! With Geo coulored hair and eyes but Gustav's facial features ^^
Date: 11/01/10 08:42 pm Title: My milkshakes bring the pregnant boys to the yard...
lol at the seahorses, haha. I can feel Bill's pain. packing is an ass and a half. i know, i've moved 22 times, literally. Georg was hilarious, and i can't wait to find out more about Tom. He is A LOT more energetic that i anticipated. It should be fun to see how he and Bill get along :D
Author's Response: :D As can I D: I hate packing; so much it hurts. Ohfuckshit, that often?! Geo is a favourite character of mine in this. So hilarious! Yeah, Tom is adorable in an annoying way ^^
Date: 11/01/10 08:32 pm Title: Say what now?
ok, first of all, i just started reading this and i have to say...
I TOTALLY LOVE IT!! like, seriously, i dont think i've ever heard of a story like this before, and i'm already so interested and attached to the characters. I love the relationship you described with Bill and his mother, and how Bill is the chosen outcast...that voodoo shit was hilarious. But, i feel SO BAD for poor Bill. He has good reason to be anti-happy camper right now. I really hope things start looking up for him. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!!!!!! I try to make my stories as funny but realistic (in an mpreg-y way) and I'm glad you like how I made Bill ^^ Yes, that voodoo shit was based off of real-life. no joke. Gah, me tooo! Yes he does (:
Date: 10/31/10 09:41 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
i dont want Tom to leave since he isnt pregnant anymore... maybe he can stay with Bill anyways?
Author's Response: Neither do I... But, only time can tell, yeah?
Date: 10/30/10 02:59 am Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
oh Tomi you poor thing...*cries* its not fair!! why would yoy do that to him?!?! You have to update this soon! I need to know what happens!! please?!?!? this fic is so good so far and I don't even LIKE mpreg!
Author's Response: Gah, I knooow! No, it really isn't.. Well, it was NECESSARY! I'll update as soon as I can, for sure! Dude, dude, dude... You're fabulous! And Mpreg is and interesting concept, which is why I like it.
Date: 10/29/10 02:36 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
:'( That's so sad! Tom loved his baby girl so much! Why'd you have to kill her! BABY KILLER!....
Anyway, I really like this story :) Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I knoow! Yes, he really did. Because, it was NECESSARY. I SO AM. AHH.rnAnyways, I'm gad you like it. Thanks for the review (:
Date: 10/28/10 03:43 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
at first, i was EXTREMELY confused, iwht all the waking up and not really being awake, and the the ending just made me feel soo freaking sad.....i love it though, and i hope our Tomi feels better...
Author's Response: Yeah haha, that was the point ^^... I'm pretty sure the ending made EVERYONE sad... Thanks :D
Date: 10/27/10 10:44 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
aawww poor tomi....i like seeing tom being the emotional one and not always bill. i feel bad for him tho :( gotta give him a huge hug *HUG*!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I knoooooow... Yeah, I figured that it was time for a switch ^^ Me tooooo :P
Date: 10/27/10 10:30 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
AW!poor tom..i couldnt imagine that..thats so sad it made me cry a little.wow..i really love this story btw :)
Author's Response: Gah, I knoooooooow. I'm sorry you cried!!! Aww, thanks, hun, it means the world!!
Date: 10/27/10 08:46 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
oh, that is so sad!! Poor Tom. Thanks for the update, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Gah, I knooooooow! thanks for the review, it means the world, hun ^^
Date: 10/27/10 08:42 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
why? how could you? how could you kill tom's baby? T_T
Author's Response: Because it was needed. And actually, it was quite easy... Just signed onto my computer, opened the file and typed in a few words.
Date: 10/27/10 06:43 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
aww poor tomii. :(((
Author's Response: I knooooow
Date: 10/27/10 06:39 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
D: I didn't even think you would do that :(
I'm so sad about it. I shed like 4 tears >.< WHY!!! Poor little Anika Natalia. Was it all the milkshakes? Just asking.
Author's Response: D: SURPRISE!rnI'm sorry! But, it was needed!! rnHAHA, it so totally WAS the milkshakes. For sure.
Date: 10/27/10 05:23 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
oh no! poor tomi D:
Author's Response: Ahh, I knooow.
Date: 10/27/10 05:18 pm Title: Because really, this shit is serious.
poor Tom
Author's Response: I knooow :D
Date: 10/27/10 01:39 am Title: Murdering Mr. Harper and naming babies Megatron
Cute story. I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you, it means a lot ^^
Date: 10/25/10 11:25 am Title: Murdering Mr. Harper and naming babies Megatron
Love how adorable Tom is!!! Update soon please!! Make me very happy:)
Author's Response: Thank choooo :D I'll update ASAP, promise ^^
Date: 10/25/10 03:03 am Title: Murdering Mr. Harper and naming babies Megatron
yay!! I'm excited to see what happens after this.
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much ^^