Date: 10/19/10 05:04 pm Title: First Chapter
Interesting start ^^
More please :D
Author's Response: Yeaay :DrnI'll hopefully update today! :)
Date: 10/19/10 03:49 pm Title: First Chapter
Lovely first chapter.
Stardust is one of my favorite movies and I'm definately looking forward to reading more. :]
Author's Response: Thank you! :*
Date: 10/19/10 03:42 pm Title: First Chapter
Oooh! Omg!
I just watched Stardust again too :DD
I just loved this.. Bill is so sweet and, swedish is awesome :D (I'm from Finland :D)
I hope you put more up soon!!! :))))
Author's Response: Yeeaay! :D :D rnOh hello neighbor!! haha :D rnThank you so much for your review! :*rnHopefully, I'll update today!
Date: 10/19/10 03:04 pm Title: First Chapter
I would be your beta. I was going to give you a review anyway. Um. Be careful on your spelling of words ok. This is good and so far you kept the speed of your story at a reasonably good paced. But the word it gently not genteely. but yes if you need a beta and you want me to do it. Just put your email in the author's response nad I'll email you back. O.k.? I would give you a longer review but I have to go to class so. Ja.
~Azriellia
Author's Response: Yeah, the program I used to write in changed some of the words on its own hahaha... It would be great if you wanted to beta! :)rnrnMy mail is fightback@live.sernrnThanks for your review!