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Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 15: New

Noo it doesnt. Cause now what you first said wouldnt matter cause new clothes are on him and people cant see it ..... ughhh how is it possible!?!

Author's Response: *gigglefidies* Is it bad that I'm enjoying your torment? 'Cause I SO flippin' am! XDDD

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 16: Don't leave me

Oh that sucks ... the heartattack part not being a mommy. But thats not a reason not to smoke. I could ship some to ya if you wanted to see if the kush doesnt do that haha. Ugh it would suck .... Your pet lesbian ... what?

Author's Response: *nodnod* I have a pet lesbian. Her name is Lynne and I drew up the ownership paperwork three years ago. She signed herself over to me and my mom and friend signed as witnesses. XD I keep the contract in my wallet at all times because it seems I'm CONSTANTLY being contested of this and other people try to steal her from me. *glowers at the evil, nameless people* Mine. *clingluffles her LynneMonkey* Back off, wenches!

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 15: New

Heck yeah i am. I NEED TO KNOW! i need to.

Author's Response: lol, then keep reading. Mentions of laundry schedules will be had. Hope that helps... somehow. ^^

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 16: Don't leave me

Lmao. Noo dont rape it. Smoke some weed, might not get you better but atleast you will feel good .... im kidding >_> arent i? ..... I dont know what to review about.

Author's Response: *whiiiiiines* I /can't/. *huffpouts* Ima mommy.. and though I used to LOVE weed, now it just makes me feel like I'm having a heart attack ;__; And the thing is, weed might ACTUALLY help my issue, funny as that may be. *sideglance* I might have to go see my pet lesbian today.. She'll have what I need. XDDD

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 16: Don't leave me

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok, now that i've got TAHT outta my system..... nice chapter, i'm interested in seeing how alley's and bill's relationship goes, coz right now it's freaking HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: *snorts* This is /nothing/. ^^ PLENTY of lawls to be had, I assure you.

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 16: Don't leave me

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok, now that i've got TAHT outta my system..... nice chapter, i'm interested in seeing how alley's and bill's relationship goes, coz right now it's freaking HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: *snorts* This is /nothing/. ^^ PLENTY of lawls to be had, I assure you.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 15: New

Lmao. Well. Oh boo who likes psp's, Not Me! This shoppings gonna be weird, what if he picks up a shirt and everybody sees a flooting shirt. Haha, ohh i guess this will answer my question on the invisble cloths on him or not ...

Author's Response: Guess so. lol, you're really fixated on Bill's clothes, aren't you? XD

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/10 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 15: New

man, i am adoring their relationship.... so darn cute!!!!!!! *spazzes* ok, i'm done...... ^_^

Author's Response: lmao, it'll get even better! *nodnodnod*

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 15: New

Shopping with bill! Should be interesting.

Author's Response: ALWAYS is! ^^

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 14: Drive

Oh so hes like me O.o thats scary lol i knocked one of my friends to the floor, i kick and my sheets and pillows almost always end up on the floor. I would never want to sleep in the same bed as someone like me, poor Ally. I .... what? He grouped her? xD I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: \o/ Wednesday can't come fast enough!

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 14: Drive

Ive never heard the Austrailian Anthem. Why aren't Bills cloths visable? And i can see Ally moving all over Bill while they are sleeping.

Author's Response: Neither have I. I've no idea, possibly because they're the same clothes he initially woke up in back home in his own bed. And actually, Bill's the severe tossing and turning bed partner. XD If I remember, Alley gets injured at some point.. and Bill cops a couple feels in his sleep. ^^

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 11:42 am Title: Chapter 14: Drive

Well i cant really do a good review cause im at school so i might write another afterwards.

Author's Response: <3

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/10 10:11 am Title: Chapter 14: Drive

The toilet scene made me giggle, the Australian anthem is the way for distraction hahaha! Hope he doesn't fall asleep and them end up somewhere else like what happened last time.

Author's Response: That would be heartbreaking o.o; Having to go through this /all/ over again? Getting someone else to believe and understand him? And then /Bill/ having to explain Saint Augustine's words to the new person? Something tells me he'd do nothing but confuse EVERYONE, lol

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/10 05:18 am Title: Chapter 13: The grand illusion

I have to say this is really well researched, I see why u fell in love with the original, but I do enjoy ur version tho. I liked it when bill was quick to say that "god makes no mistakes!" shows how much faith he has and that anything is possible. Glad to hear ur getting better too. ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you, I am. ^^ And really, the only thing I've changed in the story is the names and the male lead's physical description because the original had blond hair and blue eyes, which is /not/ our Bill, lol. Other than that... yep, everything is original. *had to think for a moment* LOVE this story. <3

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 13: The grand illusion

Damn that little man coming outta Bill. Upppdddaattee fasterrr.

Author's Response: o.o;

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/10 08:54 am Title: Chapter 12: So impossible

It's sad to hear her life story, but comforting to know that she is willing to help bill even if she doesn't know how. I think this chap was a good way to break the ice and show that they r comfortable with each other. I hope u feel better soon!!

Author's Response: It was, wasn't it? Thanks hon, I'm starting to feel a bit better. Was FINALLY able to make it to the doctor today. \o/ Shall be better soon!

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/10 02:24 pm Title: Prologue

I feel weird telling you what i like or dis-like about the story, since El someone wrote it ... i just ... i don't know. I mean i do like it .... but i just ... nevermind.

Author's Response: lol, feel free, hon. I'm a fan just like you, and fans discuss their likes and dislikes.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 12: So impossible

SUNDROP IS BETTER! Than that drink ............ yeah ..... thats all i guess .....

Author's Response: ......*whimpers over disappearing Vault* ;____;

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Just a girl

I just wanted to say that I absolutely ADORED AND WORSHIPPED Catapult. If I ever had the opportunity to thank Ella, I would. I love Hanson, and so Catapult was right up my "Alley". HA! GET IT? Right, so, I just want to say that I hope this works out well for you, and I hope you do a wonderful job. And, seeing as you said you got permission to re-work and re-post this, if you ever speak to Ella, please tell her that someone out there enjoyed Catapult IMMENSELY and would love to be able to shake her hand for that wonderful masterpiece, which is now saved to my computer. I can't convey how wonderful it was, and I know that this will be a wonderful thing all on it's own.



Author's Response: ....how could I have POSSIBLY forgotten to have Alcie pass this on to you?? *fails all over the place* Catapult was/IS BEYOND amazing! It nearly kills me that HET has such a bad reputation of self inserts and the like on this site, so then things like this that WE know are beyond epic, don't get the recognition it deserves. Then again, this was intended as a Hanson fic and got MORE than enough in that fandom. Those that read it here are just lucky enough to partake, now. XD Ella is one of the kindest, sweetest people I've met online. Takes FOREVER (literally, MONTHS) to contact her, but once you do she's very easy going and laid back. Apparently, people do this kind of thing all the time without asking and she was thrilled that I'd gone through so much trouble to contact her. *beams proudly* I hope I do it justice.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/10 10:31 am Title: Chapter 11: Building a mystery

Aw ...He needs a hug, Y U NO RUN AFTER HIM?!?

Author's Response: lol

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