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Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/10 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Just a girl

Awww...and here I was hoping for a good old-fashioned rape scene ;D

Author's Response: lmfao, not that kind of story, Anna. <3

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/10 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Just a girl

Awww...and here I was hoping for a good old-fashioned rape scene ;D

Author's Response: lmfao, not that kind of story, Anna. <3

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/10 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 20: All my fault

Yeah but the clothes were visable till he put them on. Then nobody could see them. But of you couldnt see them then either the map should have been always visable so it looks like its floating or either invisable. *sigh* im just gonna stop questioning and just go with itt.

Author's Response: =/ I wish I had an answer for you, but I guess it's just something I never thought on while reading this. Ima just go with... the entire thing is super natural, so I'm not going to hang on to one detail, lol. But some other things will occur later on that /might/ help with your questions, but no guarantees.

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/10 11:27 am Title: Chapter 20: All my fault

DAWWWWWWW....... so cute!!!!!! i'm glad she found him.... yay!!!!!!

Author's Response: *yayhands* I know!! I remember being so scared FOR him when I first read that, because I'm easily able to slip into the main character's shoes. ;__;

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/10 07:49 am Title: Chapter 20: All my fault

You scared me with the nightmare, I thought he went back and left alley for good. Phew! Thank goodness he didnt. Imagining Alley floating in the air while she is huggin bill may have been a bit disturbing for outsiders to look upon... Stuff them and what they think! She found bill!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wouldn't care what totally strangers thought of me hugging the air. It's not like they'd ever see me again, or their opinions matter. It's BILL, dammit!

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/19/10 06:22 am Title: Chapter 20: All my fault

See. It all went well. People think Alleys crazy for hugging air but who doesnt do that at some point in there life? lol. If Bills clothes are invisible then how come the map in his pocket isnt? You should be able to see it but no. You cant, it just magicly apears when it comes out of his pocket. Just like that. It makes no sences. And im still eaiting for answers. Omg did you just update three days in a row? Yay *happy dance* That must mean that ..... wait did you update the 18th ...... yeah i think so .... so ypu update Sat? And we all mut go see Harry Potter today so were all set :D

Author's Response: Bill's /not/ invisible, love. He's very much so there, but only Alley can see him. I'm not quite sure how to explain it, really. =/ I didn't write this, and it's something I never really thought about before, but I've read the whole thing and know how everything goes, and ends. And YES, lol, I updated three days in a row. Really, I stuck to my original schedule and just added an extra update for funsies. Next update won't be until Sunday. <3

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/10 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 19: Wish you were here

uh-oh.... billa's lost.... oh, dear.... lol, great job on this!!!!!!! looking forwrard to more soon!!!!!

Author's Response: I update every other day. ^^

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 19: Wish you were here

She lost bill???!!!! Argh oh no! I bet he too g off his nut, if he had a hussy fit int store wonder how he is going to be on campus? But u did say he has a map, so not all lost.

Author's Response: You'd be surprised... *innocent smile of innocence*

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/10 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 19: Wish you were here

Hehe okay.

Author's Response: ^^

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/10 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 19: Wish you were here

Ah ....well. Atleast they plained for this kind of thing ...

Author's Response: You'd think that would make all the difference, wouldn't you? *le sigh*

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/17/10 03:21 am Title: Prologue

Did u say seventy?? 0_0 whoa!! Well I do love this anywho so now that I am braced in let me join the ride. Haha cant wait!

Author's Response: Yep, 74 chapters, an epilogue and six one shots.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/10 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 18: And she was

Im sorry did you say ... penises scare you? Haha so take it they wont have sex? xD Bill. Cooking. And its good. Hahahaha .... but im hungry ... its been waaaayy to long since ive ate. Why would he want to gp to collage? I feel people there are gonna thank Alleys crazy ... cause Bill gets jealous and stands in front of her again. ..... Were was i? I cant remember. Ohhh well ... til next time.

Author's Response: lol, it's an inside joke between my friends and I. ^^ And I didn't write this story, so... any sex scenes will remain a surprise! ;D

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/10 11:31 am Title: Chapter 18: And she was

uhhh..... sorry, but i think i sold it (soul) on ebay a week ago...... lol

great job, i love alley and bill together, they're so CUTE!!!!!!!!!! and lolsy.... XD

Author's Response: ;_; B-But... *whiiiiiines* Ah need mah soul! Cannot function without it. >.> Meh, I'll just borrow Alley's \o/

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/10 10:39 am Title: Chapter 18: And she was

review later

Author's Response: k

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/10 09:41 am Title: Chapter 18: And she was

STAB!! Haha

Bill going to collage should be awesome to see what mischief he gets up to there. But when r they going to find a way for him to get back to his body

Author's Response: lol, do you /really/ want them to find a way back to his body already? Then the story would be over.. and with only nineteen chapters? Nah.. there's over seventy chapters in this story, love. And various one shots to follow after. XD

Reviewer: PedoBearGoesMeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/16/10 09:32 am Title: Chapter 18: And she was

*lawls* IIIIII really need to read this. XD Shall do so after I finish my schoolwork for the day. *nodnodnodod* But, yeah, seriously. Peens are scary.

Author's Response: XDDDDD Ah luffles joo! And yes.. unless they're rubber and good for sword fighting.

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 17: Seether

Gosh the way u describe the review box makes me want to stay!! Hehe anywho...
Jess: Hate her
Bill: cute, jealous little lump that doesn't like to be left behind.
Alley: disceiveing little spark that is getting very lucky.
Alex: sounds hot!

The part where u said she was waiting for pig wings to sprout, was exactly what I was feeling. Bill is so cute and adorable when he is mad!

Author's Response: Future fight scenes ftw! \o/

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 17: Seether

I think Bill likes Alley. *nods*

Author's Response: I think so, too. *nodnod*

Reviewer: cleverone Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/10 10:53 am Title: Chapter 17: Seether

I loved it! Bill seems a little jealous and bitter. I kind of like it. ;D

Author's Response: XDDD

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 16: Don't leave me

*snorts* ha rape it! Hahaha!! Now I feel icky to even think I have cause rape...kidding! They are getting so cute!! Bill is so funny being all dependent on Alley. I could picture her face when bill is standing between her and the sales guy. Of course it would be hard not to notice bill freaking kaulitz who is blocking ur view. So adorable!!

Author's Response: Isn't it, though?? *gigglefits* And if I remember right, the next chapter has an equally funny piece. ^^

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