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Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 25: Morphine and Chocolate

What? No gorgeous wise cracks to finish off this wonderful chapter? Shame...hmm... Anywho!
WOW!! Bill is changing!!! Oh dear should I be worries or scared? The akward feeling in the air around the two is so inviting, bill and Alley I mean. I sure Bill must have REALLY enjoyed Alley running her fingers through his hair...gah ENVY!! I wanna touch it!

Author's Response: Yeah, lol. I've been sick again ;__; I lack my wisecrackness when ill, apparently. It shall return soonish. XD

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/10 06:29 pm Title: Prologue

TwitterVerse RP?
It ... it was the size of a quarter .... 0.o I ... i saw him on the celin and then i looked for somethin to get em with and ... and, he was gone.
*deep breaths*

Author's Response: *nodnod* I posted a link to it in one of the last chapter end notes. Was just a purdy picture, and if you clicked it then it took you to the RP. ^^ Leeeeeeeet's see if it works here:

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 11:55 pm Title: Prologue

But .... but .... thats how i pick storys i want to rea ....o.O sp-spider

Author's Response: *gigglefits* Aww... you remind me of a muse in the TwitterVerse RP I'm in. ^^ He HATES spiders.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 25: Morphine and Chocolate

Jay's ON Cocaine AND he's GONNA try AND get ALLEY on it OR .... or RAPE her. D:

He's leaving, On that midnight train to Georgia, And he's goin back To a simpler place and time.
... sorry, i'm a tad hyper o.O
Fuck Jay! And ... and Alley ... she doesn't know she likes Bill yet, but booy she will. I just know it! (cause its Bill/OFC :P)

Author's Response: lol, don't cheat and use the story tags as plot spoilers!!

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/10 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 25: Morphine and Chocolate

oooooooooo.......... SUSPENSE!!!!!!!! lol

Author's Response: \o/

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 24: Love hurts

*sigh* and this is like 70 chapters long was it???? i think i might die of cliffhangers LONG before then.....lol

Author's Response: I think it's 74 chapters, not including the prologue and the epilogue, and six one shots to follow after.

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 24: Love hurts

I love long chapters!!! And I am happy to kno I made u laugh with me last review, even if it was not intentional lol. Anywho Bill finally coming to terms with himself that he does love Alley is like a big sigh of relief *exhale* the jerk off Jay just sounds like he is using to up I his grades. Alley!!! Wake up!! bill has I love u written on his forehead!

Author's Response: It's so hard to reply to these reviews and not be able to /really/ answer all these questions 'cause I KNOW what happens, lol. *dramatic sigh* Guess you'll just have to wait and see~

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 24: Love hurts

Aw, why cant you just tell her how you feel? Hm, Alley loves someone thats not Jay? Maybe its Bill xD hopefully

Author's Response: Maybe? XD

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/10 11:43 am Title: Chapter 23: Spoon man

*snarls* NO!!!!!! BAD JAY, BAD!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol, no one seems to like Jason very much.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 09:13 am Title: Chapter 23: Spoon man

See! Hes using her to pass the class! And then shes gonna get kicked out for letting him cheat >:( Happy Turkey Day. And for the other comment. I was at the hospitial and saw my brothers girlfriend have her baby. It was .... discusting. >_< Anywho you said good things happen to people who wait .... so Jay is gonna get hurt? :D

Author's Response: ^^

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 07:46 am Title: Chapter 23: Spoon man

NOO NOT JAY!!! BILL, BILL, BILLLLLL!!!!
but I'm gonna have to trust you don't i? *sigh* fine! Bill tapping a spoon in a threatening way ooohh better watch out! haha

Author's Response: *gigglesnorts* Wow... this should /not/ have made me laugh as hard as it did. XD

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 07:06 pm Title: Prologue

Haha. Okay. So maybe ... i do know who she is. Cause i looked through my favorite storys .... and the was one in there .... >_> shows how much attention i pay. *sigh*

Author's Response: lol, I was gonna say, s'kinda hard to hunt around THF without stumbling across one of her fics at some point. *hearts*

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 22: Loneliness is worse

Uugghhh. :( that makes me want to wait till you update 2 chapters before i read the next. >_> And i wouldve liked for you to update at 4am Monday instead that way i had something to do while i was waiting xD and the waiting payed off on me never wanting kids ... which i never wanted in the first place.

Author's Response: ......congrats? *confused*

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 22: Loneliness is worse

ummm..... is it bad that i can't pick a favorite part?????????? it's all so good so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HAPPY (belated) BIRTHDAY, ANONY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: *beams* and I c/p'd your review to Anony and she giggled. *shifty eyes* But it's also 'cause "ANONY" is a shortcut for one of my emotes on MSN, so... you 'shouting' her name made her levitate ^^

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 08:26 am Title: Chapter 22: Loneliness is worse

Birthday review for u! Ha

Hearing bill arguing with himself and playing little scenarios involving him and alley was hilarious. Then kicking himself for giving alley love gazing thoughts made me aww. But also fill with envy wishing it could be me! Jay get the he'll outta the picture!!! And make way for Billy Boii!

The remark that bill made about chester the cat being too fat, made me think that is exactly what he would say lol!

Author's Response: lol, does seem like Bill, doesn't it? My favorite part hasn't happened, yet. ^^

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/10 05:28 am Title: Chapter 22: Loneliness is worse

Hehe. I don't know who Aanoy is but happy late birthday. O.O i cannot wait for the next chapter! Omg. But i do have a feeling it wont go in my favor lol.

Author's Response: *__* You don't know who Anony is?? *faints*

Anony's THF Bio
Seriously, wow.. lol. Anony is the 14th most favorited author on THF, and the 3rd most prolific. She's... /amazing/. Yes, I am biased, but you can check the Top Lists section on the side bar for yourself. *swoons*

Aaaaaaand... yep, you're probably right. XD

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/10 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 21: Pantyhose and Roses

Yeah no. I know hes gonna do something to hurt Alley ... I know he will -_- Be rid of him!

Author's Response: XD Good things come to those who wait...

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/10 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 21: Pantyhose and Roses

NO, bad jay.... alley and bill, bill and alley.... lol

Author's Response: Bill and Alley. Alley and Bill. *shifty eyes* BILLY! \o/

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/10 11:43 am Title: Chapter 21: Pantyhose and Roses

Oh you douchebag, why must you come back into the story .... unless your using Alley -.- blah

Author's Response: lol, not a Jay fan? Trust me, you'll learn to hate him. *nodnod* And then... *shifty eyes* you'll LOVE to hate him. XD

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/10 10:44 am Title: Chapter 21: Pantyhose and Roses

Wow run in the pantyhose is sexy... Would sound WAY better coming from Bills mouth...ooohhh if only he didn't have a girlfriend. I would love for them to be together, but I love the slow pace of this. Lets see where this heads of too... And I have never hear of putting nail polish on a run in pantyhose hmmm learn something new everyday =p

Author's Response: I love the slow pace, too. It's not a rushed romance sort of deal. You can see their friendship grow and blossom and since it comes from both of their POV, you can see where they're both coming from and understand their dynamic and how it grows... to be more. ;D
And yeah, lol, that's an old trick. It doesn't fix the run or make it look better, but it does stop it from getting any bigger.

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