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Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/10 02:44 pm Title: Prologue

Sorry, that wasnt what i was aimming for. :(

Author's Response: *pets* S'fine, hon. No worries. ^^

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 31: Chocolate cake

Im not gonna write a proper review on this story until you review my review cause i dont like writing reviews that dont get read cause i feel there was no pointt in even reviewing .... know what i mean? But i will tell you this! Like Alleys state drink, North Carolina's (mine) Sundrop is gonna be made nation wide next year. Its making me sad though cause then there wont be anything special about my hometown anymore lol. And ew chocolete >_< i dont like it so much i cant even spell it.

Author's Response: Hon, you've reviewed every chapter of Trebuchet since the prologue, correct? So you should know by now that I typically respond to every review before posting the next chapter. However, as I said when I posted this last one, I'd forgotten and therefore wanted to get it up as quickly as possible. Obviously, that meant skipping replying to the reviews until after.

"Im not gonna write a proper review on this story until you review my review cause i dont like writing reviews that dont get read cause i feel there was no pointt in even reviewing .... know what i mean?"

I know /exactly/ what you mean, but seeing as I always reply to your reviews, you should know that your reviews have been read and are not pointless for you to write. Please refrain from attempting to make me feel crappy and like I've been ignoring my readers or don't appreciate them. I didn't write this story, I'm merely the mediator; sharing with the author's permission. I'm a reader /just/ like you. So, until Tuesday...

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 31: Chocolate cake

Ooooohhh I wonder what their mischief minds are boiling up....cannnot wait to find out. Typical for Jay to blame being wasted for his actionS pfft JERK!

Author's Response: I know, right? lol, Jay's such a pig.. but he most /definitely/ gets what's coming to him. I KNOW you're going to love their revenge scheme, it's BRILLIANT. And his reaction is flippin' /gorgeous/. ^^

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 31: Chocolate cake

GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAA CLIFFHANGERS ARE GONNA KILL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lovely, lovely, can't WAIT for the unveiling of the REVENGE *cackles madly* euhm.... i'm done now....

Author's Response: *gigglefits* I LOVE YOUR ENTHUSIASM!! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on their revenge scheme when it happens. XD

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/10 12:29 am Title: Chapter 30: Gypsy woman

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!! BILLA U BAKA TELL HER YOU LOVE HER ALREADY AND RID ME OF THE SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (i'm done)

Author's Response: You've many, many, MANY lengths to go before that happens. *pets* But, I assure you.. it'll stick with you for YEARS.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 30: Gypsy woman

mmmm. this brought me out of my bad mood. ... for a little while atleast. dang bill why didnt you kiss her? lol

Author's Response: lol, because he loves to drive you bonkers! All good things come to those who wait.. and it'll be epic. I promise! ^^

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/10 09:51 am Title: Chapter 30: Gypsy woman

Nawww bills mesh fest made my heart melt! I really wish he did take the chance to kiss the hell outta her, that would've been...TOTALLY AWESOME!!!

Author's Response: *gigglefitdies* I <3 YOU!

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/10 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 29: Costume for a gutterball

Okay i tryed reviewing last night but my phones a piece of shizit. Yay for the Potter musical thingys .. Snape. Snape. Voldemore. Snape. Umm Jay is a *cough* douche *cough* I knew that he was usin her though .... ugh i hate guys... with the exception of a few. Ummnnn what else .... i dunno i cant think what was in my last review. ...

Author's Response: Meh, was never a fan of the Potter Puppet Pals. =/ I know, I know, "What the freak, Mis?!" *gigglefits* I can't help it, they bug the hell out of me! But I LOOOOOOOOVE AVPM and AVPS to bits and pieces. <3

And douche is FAR too nice a word for Jay. *sideglares* Just when you think he's gone... he'll be back. And yeah, I often have trouble remembering what a last review said, lol

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 29: Costume for a gutterball

umm, no....... should i?? GREAT chapter, i KNEW i didn't trust/like jay...... asshole..... FINALLY, ALLYE ADMITTED BILL WAS RIGHT, TOOK HER LONG ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Author's Response: lol, yes, it did. And she'll learn to trust him more and more. ^^

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/10 09:12 am Title: Chapter 29: Costume for a gutterball

No I do not know the significance of those words, do explain. Well I hope that is the last we hear of the yutz JAY. Blurgh I knew he was no good, from the moment she laid eyes on him I knew it was to good to be true. I felt her pain and her humiliation and it did hurt. Imagining bill going out of his mind with worry then seeing her crumbled against the door, he must have felt relief by dread that she had to go through it. Well she had to learn the hard way and that what you get! I just realized I revue every single chapt, if this is 70 chaps this is gonna take up a whole lotta space on my review page. But don't care the memories shall linger and be all worth it! ^_^

Author's Response: AVPM & AVPS were linked to in the following chapter. ^^ Sorry about responding late to this review. Wasn't intentional.

I've nothing to respond to your review really, 'cause you nailed it all on the head almost exact. I love how Ella can make us feel what Alley and Bill feel and I love how she draws us in to try to get into their mindset as we read, understanding their thought process even for the things she didn't actually put down.

And yes.. the memories will linger and linger, lol. You're in for a LONG ride. Keep enjoying and reviewing! ^^

Reviewer: isaTH01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 29: Costume for a gutterball

do i want to know what AVPM or AVPS mean?

Author's Response: YUS! YOU /MUST/ KNOW WHAT THEY MEAN!!! *flailflailflail*

"A Very Potter Musical" and "A Very Potter Sequel"

YOU MUST WATCH THEM! 8D

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 28: Lady in red

Sorry it took me forever to review. I just re-newed my Xbox Live and was watching the Marathon of The Walking Dead. And i just didn't feel like reviewing.
This is .... probably the only story I've reviewed on every chapter.
So ... yeah. Jay's gonna get hit by a bus so .... i don't need to be mad at him.

Author's Response: YAY for The Walking Dead! XD You're a very diligent reviewer. This is really the only story you've reviewed every chapter on? o.o And *pets* If only he did, sweety, if only... <.<

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 27: Got you where I want you

So, even though shes mad she still feels bad. I like that.

Author's Response: Me, too. ^^

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 28: Lady in red

GAH I knew there was somethin about that scuzzball that I would deeply hate with a passion. I was hyperventilation whilereadi g this knowing the truth about Jay. That JERK!!! Now I see what u mean that there is plenty to have u on the edge of ur seat. I think I nearly tripped over my own feet =p. If only Alley would swallow her pride and trust bill, they have been through so much thus far why stop now. Well I'm guessing she is going to learn the hard way.

Author's Response: Yeeeeeep, pretty much. She's a strong feminist in that regard, and she prefers to make her own mistakes. She's not your stereotypical OFC, which is why I love this story so deeply. She's a typical, ever day girl which is why you can empathize with her so well and love her so much. Her characterization, itself, is nearly flawless BECAUSE of her flaws. She's /normal/. XD

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 28: Lady in red

I KNEW I DIDN'T TRUST HIM!!!!!!!!! BAD JAY, BAD!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Author's Response: *gigglefits* Aww.. c'mon, give him his chance to fuck up again before you cast him out. XD

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/10 10:30 am Title: Chapter 27: Got you where I want you

Yeah bill!! Tell her stubborn head like it is!!! I thought he would have blurted out his feeling while he was at it, that would have been the perfect timing. But then again maybe not...the slow pace is the way to go. Alley is so blind, I hope she knows what storm is abrewing for her. Ouch!! Her word were so harsh even I felt the burn. Sux that u r sick AGAIN!! The bug must love ur immune system or something haha take it easy hon!

Author's Response: Trust me.. this thing is sooooo drawn out, and so beautifully done, that by the time something /actually/ happens you'll be jumping out your seat. XD I did, lol. *flails* Dammit, I can't wait for you guys to get there!

Meh, I'm sick and tired of being sick and tired, but I believe people are starting to think I keep mentioning it for pity, so.. A BADASS migraine last night followed me into today. *nodnod* I require 20 CCs of pity, stat! *gigglefits* Eh, I'll get better eventually. I blame the weather. XD

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 26: Clean

poor billa..... XD

Author's Response: He's a big boy, he'll live. XD

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 26: Clean

poor billa..... XD

Author's Response: He's a big boy, he'll live. XD

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 09:44 am Title: Chapter 26: Clean

Woooo! Hot bill with a chesilled chest...nice! To bad u ain't feeling good honey *gives u a hug* hope u feel better again soon. Take it easy love!

Author's Response: *huggles* Thanks. ^^ And this won't be the last of Bill's finely etched features.... XD

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 06:45 am Title: Chapter 26: Clean

Oohhh okayz. Hehe ... his thoughts are so cute ^_^ and he was in that shower xD bein a dum dum with the shower gel.

Author's Response: *gigglefits* Men... <3

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