Date: 01/13/11 04:09 am Title: Chapter 52: A wolf at the door
I have a feeling that the more people that can see him the closer he is to waking up 0.ô? Me loves this story! Hope Alley realizes that he loves her! Update soon!
Author's Response: Quite possibly. It could be a sign of a lot of things, actually. ^^ I'm glad that you're enjoying and I update every other day. XD
Date: 01/13/11 02:55 am Title: Chapter 52: A wolf at the door
bill - 1, jessica - 0
awesome chapter ;)
Author's Response: \o/ He's just gettin' started <3
Date: 01/12/11 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 51: Coffee shop
I was watching Family Guy and i dont know if you like Family Guy but i do so imma tell you about it. Well It was Petters Birthday so Cleaveland game him a birthday card. But one of those you can record messages on. But he forgot to turn it off and when he got in the car MMMBop was playing and he started singing along. Hehe, i dunno why but i had to tell you ^^ you probably dont care lol.
Author's Response: *_____________* *totally has the official Hanson birthday card released by Hallmark that plays MMMBop and even sent Alcie a generic 'PopStar' birthday card that played MMMBop as well* \o/ And I LOVE Family Guy! <3
Date: 01/11/11 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 51: Coffee shop
agh, no, no conffessions?????????/ NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! oh, well, they'll come eventually.... XD
Author's Response: *snickers and pets* Yes, they shall. XD And you'll be al O__________________O when they do. ^^
Date: 01/11/11 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 51: Coffee shop
I wounder if Bill was teary eyed cause Andrew and Tom were saying something about Bills heath and it wouldnt be long till he woke up. And then he was upset cause hed leave Alley so soon and thinking he wont remember her. Which if he doesnt when he wakes up and gets the picture he gets a flash back. And BAM the rest falls in place ....
Author's Response: lol, I love your interpretation of that scene as to what he might have overheard that left him teary eyed. My take on it was just that his brothers were hangin' out, shootin' the shit and Billa got emotional because he missed them /desperately/ and they couldn't even see him /standing/ there. It's bad enough going through /all/ this time being unable to tell Alley that he loves her, but to go all this time, finally see his brothers that he's known his whole life, and being unable to tell /them/? =/ S'a tear jerker..
Date: 01/11/11 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 51: Coffee shop
Aww :( This is so heartbreaking. Fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: It is. *nuzzles* But it /does/ get better. Story will have a happy ending, of course. ^^ Just gotta get us there.
Date: 01/11/11 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 50: He was my brother
uh-oh.. brothers appeared.... this is gonna be interesting.... XD
Author's Response: ^^
Date: 01/10/11 09:52 am Title: Chapter 50: He was my brother
Argh this is getting too damn good!!! *squeal* bill sees his brother he must have been so overwhelmed to have missed them for such a long period of time. I was thinking what happened if u saw those little muffins poof into thin air. Haha mysterious muffins now u see them...*poof* now u don't. I apologize for the randomness, I am sooooo tired that I am at the point of full energy and have no control of word vomit hehe....PENGUIN!!! Sorry I should really stop now. ^_^ but back with it all can't wait to find out Wat Alley has to say in the next chap.
Author's Response: *gigglepets* S'fine, hon. I love seeing my readers so into the story that they're too excited to control their outgoing word flow, lol.
Date: 01/10/11 01:21 am Title: Chapter 50: He was my brother
WILL BILL BE AWAKE WHEN THEY KISS?!?! How can you suck at video games, those words just don't go togther for me :P No but seriously ... 8 more chapter, 16 more days, a little over 2 weeks. Thats time for Bill to wake up! Or will they get back to K Town before he wakes up?! Soooo many questions, so long to wait haha. For this story 2 days is a hell f a long time lol.
Author's Response: I GUESS YOU KNOW BY NOW!!!! XDDDD
And *shrugs* I just do. Never been into that kinda stuff, really. Was big into The Sims when they first came out for the computer, and it took a long while before I got into the Sims 2, 'cause I didn't have my own computer.
And it does seem pretty long, lol, but if I could sit and wait through it the first time, you guys can too XP and I didn't get updates every other day =/
Date: 01/09/11 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 50: He was my brother
Oh. That's very funny! That was good. Will Tom be able to see Bill? Please update soon!
Author's Response: o.o /Will/ he?? *giggles* Guess we'll find out, but that'd be pretty epic. Especially, say.. if he'd been to see his brother in the hospital the day before, then walk into a cafe to see him sitting in a booth with two random chicks? I'd freak the eff out, myself, lol.
Date: 01/09/11 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 50: He was my brother
Ooh i hope you feel better. Oh shitz. Whats gonna happen, can they see him? Will Alley try to make convo?! Ahhh hurry up Tue!
Author's Response: I think it'd be osm if they saw him, lol. Not gonna lie, but say they'd been to see him in the hospital just the day before, then they walked into a cafe and he was just sitting there with two random chicks? I'd freak out, lol. Guess we'll find out on Tuesday. XD
Date: 01/09/11 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 50: He was my brother
I love how Bill adores Alley. O wow! Tom & Andrew coming into the coffe shop was a surprise. Although they were bound to run into them at some point. I think it's exciting & can't wait to read more! Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: I know!! *flails* S'about Tom and Andrew made their appearance, huh? Get use to seeing those names, 'cause they're gonna be around more often toward the end of the story. *nodndo
Date: 01/07/11 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 49: Great escape
I knew it!!! Mean I knew it would be hilarious, oh the sneaking alley cat quick thinking too. At least she found out that bill is progressing makes men feel better too. So about the gibberish at the end meaning about the photo Russian dude. This is a role play of some sort huh? Haha funny, I love the way ur mind works *giggle*
Author's Response: YUS! Dearest Billa is showing improvement! *__* Wonder if this means he'll wake up soon. *shift eyes*
Date: 01/07/11 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 49: Great escape
Yeah yeah yeah, thats the one. Hehe Yay! Um MW is Call if Duty Modern Warefare 2 :DD my favorite video game for xbox besides Halo lol. Umm ....
Author's Response: I never really got into video games aside from Harry Potter and The Sims. XD I suck, lol.
Date: 01/07/11 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 49: Great escape
Totally dont understaind the end note but whatever. Ah Alley you get into to much trouble. The hospital i go to isnt like that, uselly you g whereever and they dont care. Like ICUs and stuff they do but still.
Author's Response: And... I /think/ I explained this in the chapter update, so yeah. XD
And yeah, same here, but given that they might have many a celebrity within....? IDK, lol. You'd have to ask Ella that. ^^
Date: 01/07/11 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 49: Great escape
Alley is so damn funny. I just love her xD Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: *hearts*
Date: 01/07/11 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 49: Great escape
hahahahaa.... poor alley, kid can't catch a break, can she????? XD
Author's Response: I kinda like that she can't. XD Ensures something interesting will always happen, lol
Date: 01/07/11 12:53 am Title: Chapter 48: Runaway run
Hehe, okay. Omg guess what?! Did you guess? Don't continue reading this if you havent. What did you guess? Huh, no haha. Im listing to Hanson ... i like them. Penny and Me is my favorite though, and then i like ... uh i think it has train and mountain in it. I just got a brain block. But it makes me wanna read the original ... of course .... this one has Bill. Lol. But i like the um oldest i think, Issac ... who like my spelling? Lol but then the guy in this story Taylor? And ....eh to the other dude. Now back to MW 2 :)
Author's Response: *giggles* YAY! I'm... not sure which song you're talking about. "Fire On the Mountain" comes to mind, but that doesn't mention a train. o.O You might have to refresh my memory, lol. And what's "MW"? o.o But *FLAILS* YAYNESS!! Another Fanson is born! *yayhands - is totes osm* XDDD
Date: 01/06/11 09:29 am Title: Chapter 48: Runaway run
The chap was aMAzing! I love bearing bills thoughts, it's like adrenaline pumping through my veins...bless his little heart strings. Knowing Alley and her Temper combined with her impatience, it sounded like it didn't go well and sounds frickin hilarious!! I can't wait to find out what she actually did! I also grimace about what state they may find bill in, that is if they can ever find out. *warmembrace* =]
Author's Response: Ugh, your review makes me want to update NOW, but I must hold off. *whimpers* Yes, Alley certainly got herself into a bind. So much so that she was chased out of the hospital by several staff and security guards? *__* Woah..
Date: 01/05/11 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 48: Runaway run
Lmao! Alley is just too damn funny xD Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Oh, if you think she's funny NOW, just wait until the next chapter. ;D