Date: 02/02/11 01:03 am Title: Chapter 61: Pretty good year
oh, you fixed it :P i'll go read it again minus sarcasm/hazyness...
Author's Response: You were late. ^^ For about 2-4 minutes, I'd accidentally posted chapter 67 by mistake. MAJOR spoiler there considering it skips six chapters, lol.
Date: 02/02/11 01:01 am Title: Chapter 61: Pretty good year
good chappie :) nice to meet bill's peeps properly...and he finally saw alley's painting :D glad he liked it!
BTW the second half of the chapter is in italics, meaning it got read in my sarcastic/flashback voice...to interesting effect :P
Author's Response: Yes, the painting is a great tie between the two, and its mentioned many, many more times throughout the story. ^^
Date: 01/30/11 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Just a girl
“Somehow, she always seemed more amiable when she was in the kitchen...” I'm sorry, but I instantly went, 'CAUSE THAT'S WHERE SHE BELONGS.'
Awwhh, little Tom amuses me already, and I've only got, like, two words from him so far.
“Sort of hypocritical, when you think about it, considering some of the haircuts the locals sported...” I like how Bill's kind of got this sarcastic attitude to him. 's like...'Oh, yeah, I have long hair, so what? I also have a dick.' ...I have no idea where I was goin with that. But yeah.
“I’m about to be the first thirteen-year-old boy in history to have a heart attack.” RUN, FORREST. RUN.
“Heavy galoshes and thick clothing did not a sprinter make.” I lol'd.
“He looked like the kind of guy who got high all the time and killed kittens for fun.” D: Not the kittens, Mis! ;______;
“I’m dying, I thought grimly. Or, at least, my future children are..” D:< BILL'S SEED MUST LIVE ON.
Awhhh, Alley Kat's such a cute nickname. XD
Aaaand that's all I've got for this chapter. o/ 's really interesting so far. I really like all the characters. *licks and flies off*
Author's Response: *lawls* I can already tell I'm going to look forward to your reviews most of all ^^ *lickloveson*
Date: 01/30/11 02:47 pm Title: Prologue
Ayup. finally getting off my ass to do what I promised I would MONTHS ago.
“It’s flawed, but somehow perfect. Like I am to him. Like he is to me.” I love the comparison of the blanket and the relationship.
“When I hear more ‘shits’ and ‘fucks’ than actual notes...” I totally giggled. XD
“We leave the room, our fingers intertwined, fitting together like lock and key. Like we were made for each other.” Fucking AWWW. XD This entire chapter thing makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.
's short, so you get a short review. But oh well. ^^ On to the next one! Dundundun~
Author's Response: *___* MEIN APPLEBLOSSOM!!! *tackleclingsnugmolests* I LOVE your reviews. Might have to send them off to the actual author! :D
Date: 01/29/11 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
(holding glittery axe) MIS? MIISS?? Come out, come out wherever u r! Don't make me twitterstalk u (return perish smirk)
NAH!! Ok realize that he is gone now Cains my insides with grief. But with the confident words of the genius Louise makes it bareable to wait.
Wonder how long you gonna hold out now...haha I was waiting for the oppurtunity to become 300th reviewer but the smart hot ass tokiofan89 bet by a mile...damn it!!! Guess great minds do think alike or randomly.
Now if u excuuuse moi, I have to go iron my hankies in preparation.
Author's Response: *whiiiiiiiiiiines* You guys are violent! Glittery axes, bullet proof vest, a squad of chainsaw wielding ninjas...
*gigglefits* You're such a dork. XD Next update will be on Wednesday, love. ^^
Date: 01/29/11 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
Haha YES I was your 300th reviewer.
Author's Response: YUS! *tackleloveson* EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *s'plodes*
Date: 01/29/11 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
Ahhh! I'm dying to know what Bill's thinking.
Author's Response: I dun think you're gonna like what Bill's thinking. ;___;
Date: 01/29/11 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
I say Wed. should be the next update. Poor Alley, I still think that picture she drew of him might jog some memory.
Author's Response: Wednesday it is! *zipslips*
Date: 01/29/11 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
*sends squad of chainsaw-wielding ninjas after Misery* GET BACK HERE!!!!!!!!! you realize you love cliffhangers FAR too much, right??? oh, and btw, that threat is normally reserved for my friend Mistress Fang only lol... anyway, i hope i don't start bawling next couple of chapters, but i probably will, and i can't WAIT to see what happens...... dont wait TOO long, or else i might die from suspense lol....
Author's Response: O__________________________________________O
...at least they're ninjas! *yayhands - goes back into hiding*
Hey, /I/ didn't write this! *snickers* I didn't put all the cliffhangers in. And I think she updated once a week, so XP But oh yes.. tears WILL be had. I /guarantee/ it. Next update is Wednesday!
Date: 01/29/11 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
grrrrr......but I love it!!!!!!! =]
Author's Response: *beams* You wanna get upset, but it's just too damn osm to be angry with. S'like Bill! *yayhands*
Date: 01/29/11 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
OMG YES AN UPDATE!!*shakes butt around*
OMG NO! Short and poor Alley! He's gotta remember!!
This sporadic updating is gonna kill me
Author's Response: *giggles* 'M sorry! I just /really/ dunno what kind of update schedule to use, but next update is official Wednesday! ..at some point. XD
Date: 01/29/11 05:26 am Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
don't worry - i like long & brutal. wait, that didn't come out right...
i meant to sit down and read this half an hour ago but got distracted by pizza. sorry 'bout that. i always love updates, but then i just want MORE and it's a vicious cycle that never ends. the next update can't be TOO far away...otherwise you might want to invest in some bullet-proof vests...
Author's Response: *wiggles brows* Why, Res... *giggles*
Pizza makes it everything forgiven..so long as you share! *gimmehands*
...I just had that thought a few reviews ago *shifty eyes* Next update is Wednesday!
Date: 01/29/11 05:06 am Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
Aww poor Alley!!!! Update soon bitte!!!!!
Author's Response: I'd like to say she's stronger than she gives herself credit for... but she's not =/ Updating Wednesday!
Date: 01/29/11 03:53 am Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
*sniffle* i cried... ahh I have a feeling that it'll be a few more chapters until alley and bill are together ...a few more really tough chapters *sniff*
Update asap!
Author's Response: *slow nod* It will be... Next update will be Wednesday!
Date: 01/29/11 03:28 am Title: Chapter 60: When you're gone
I NEED TO READ EM ALREADY. DAMN.
Author's Response: O_O; Wow.. reviewers are getting hostile! *considers bullet proof vest*
Date: 01/28/11 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 59: Crazy love
Jennifer.. Alley. Aww, Alley. :(
Author's Response: =/ *patpat*
Date: 01/26/11 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 59: Crazy love
geez, i knew that would happen.... you are EVIL you know that????? *sigh* i'm going to hope that bill will remember alley eventually, the baka :D
Author's Response: *tarnished halo* Dunno WHAT you're talking about 8D
Date: 01/26/11 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 59: Crazy love
OMG!!!!! I'm shocked! I knew this moment would happen, but I ever really thought much about it. I can't wait for the next chapter....seriously....I can't wait. :)
Just so you know.....I'm bouncing up and down in my chair whilst flutter clapping like an overexcited walrus. :D
Author's Response: lol, well you're gonna have to, 'cause I've no idea when it's going to happen. Promise I won't wait too long.
And walruses and OSM! \o/
Date: 01/26/11 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 59: Crazy love
WTF NOOOOOOO!!!!!
While its totally fabulous he has woken up, did it have to be now?!?
I will be checking this daily for updates and will probably weep every time I see it hasn't been!
This is the review I am currently capable of right now. Mindboggled.
Author's Response: D: No! No tears! *whines* It's a great story, no teeeeeears!! ;__;
Date: 01/26/11 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 59: Crazy love
ugh these cliffhangers I mean it's about damn time he woke up....but I am like noooo what about Alley I mean I know it'll get better
Author's Response: *huggles* I know, and it will get better, and... the next update has another cliffhanger. *blinks* I think the majority of them do, lol.