Date: 12/20/14 12:08 am Title: Chapter 38: Sing
still reading, adorable chapter
Date: 02/20/14 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 36: Breakfast
I love THis, I love THis so much!
Date: 02/20/14 10:13 am Title: Chapter 34: Magic Carpet Ride
THat was so sweet, his reaction to THe present, to her dvd and... OH MY GOD SHE CAN SEE HIM, Not good, not, good, not good!
wow, great twist.
Date: 02/20/14 09:55 am Title: Chapter 33: Sweet revenge
Oh my God, THat was awesome, im so glad THey were able to get back at him for what he did to THem, Bill's plan was genius, GENIUS!
Bill and Alley are probably my fave fan-fic pair, i love how THey act around eeach oTHer and THe humour THat comes out in THeir banter, its so fun to read.
HOPE THEY GET TOGETHER! :D
THis is such a well-written story, i could read it all day wiTHout getting bored and THen start over when i was finished, THe story is so interesting i get completely drawn in, its great, you should be really proud of THis
Date: 02/19/14 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 31: Chocolate cake
OMG I can't wait to see what Bill is plotting, its gonna be good, I love THis story so much and its just getting better and better as it goes
Date: 02/19/14 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 30: Gypsy woman
Poor Bill, he said he owned bad timing but i dunno, he seemed like a pretty good friend to Alley right THen, so sweet of him to take care of her like THat, THey'd make a great pair.
I never THought of Bill going back and not remembering anyTHing of his time wiTH her, THats so sad, i agree THey should THink of someTHing. Wow i've missed THis story its just awesome.
Date: 12/15/13 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 28: Lady in red
I have no sympathy fr her on THe grounds THat she didn't listen to Bill because THey'd been fighting. He had a valid point to make and she should have known THat by THe way he was screaming at her not to go, people don't get THat panicked wiTHout reason. Nope she set herself up for whatever THis is THat's coming.
Wow THis is my first time back as a reader in ages, i forgot how much i loved THis story. Its amazing how after just one chaper I can be just as hooked as i ever was. THis is great
Date: 08/24/13 11:35 am Title: Chapter 26: Clean
Did he just say he was staring at his reflection, he doesn't have a reflection does he? or does he? cool.
Date: 08/24/13 10:59 am Title: Chapter 24: Love hurts
how awkward for Bill, love it
Date: 08/24/13 07:27 am Title: Chapter 16: Don't leave me
Such a cute chapter
Date: 08/24/13 05:59 am Title: Chapter 11: Building a mystery
Wow what a cool twist, really that was awesome, i've been trying to thonk of theories as to what's going on with Bill as i read but nothing sounded realistic (Not that its suppost to be realisting, its a story LOL)
I really like the coma idea, it gives your story a strangely eerie supernatural edge which is something i'm quite into right now. But now i'm thinking, If Bill is in a coma, shouldn't his body be in a bed at the local hospital or something? is this story about his spirit before he wakes up? However, if that's the case Alley shouldn't have been able to touch or interact with him should she?
I can't figure it out but i absolutely love it. Alley and Bill are great characters and the story is so well-written that its easy to get drawn in. I really felt for them this chapter, in fact i'm unashamed to say i almost cried when Bill got emotional and ran from the room. I hope he's okay after he's had a chance to take everything in
Date: 08/24/13 05:13 am Title: Chapter 9: Reflection
Well she believes him now, i think they're getting somewhere. this is such a great story i love it.
Date: 08/20/13 10:23 am Title: Chapter 6: Vertigo
ahh, theres the story, okay i'll just wait nxt time.
This is my fave chapter so far, it was great you really got to understand things more and i really found myself empathising with Bill's emotions, he was just so happy she could see him.
Also i loved the image of him amusing himself until she woke up by watching TV.
I was so happy to get the story of how he ended up at her house.
I really love the style of the story, with each chapter told from the viewpoint of the character of the person involved in it, but literally told, its awesome it's like Bill is sitting down in the corner actually telling the story as he remembered it. Thats not something i've seen done before and it gives your story an extra level which makes it even easier ro get drawn into. Not only that but the words have such a perfect flow and the detail... wow. I can't fault you at all, I love this story, you should be very proud of it.
Date: 08/20/13 09:02 am Title: Chapter 5: Rock in a hard place (Cheshire cat)
Have i mentioned i love this? your characters are amazing, I love Ally, i love Bill i just, yeah I love it.
I understand jer iritation after waking up at 6:30 and finding none other than Bill in your bedroom with no plausable means of entry... i assume it would be scary but at the same time i found myself wishing she'd shut up and listen to him (not least because i wanted the story of how he got to her door... do we get it later?) but surely the way he almost cried with joy on realising she could see him would be enough of an indication he wasn't going to hurt her. Attackers just get the job done, not burst into tears as soon as they're seen.
What a great story, i'm literally drinking it in, i can't stop reading. I'm not surprised your story was featured when you wrote it, it deserved to be. I'm just surprised your read and review count isn't higher. I'd expect you to have gotten more for this level of work, seriously.
Date: 08/20/13 07:29 am Title: Chapter 4 - Rescue Me
I'm really liking your story, really the detail is amazing and i can see everything as i read as i said before but now i have to admit i'm kind o confused... is it because Bill is dead that nobody can see him and his family have changed so much because many years have passed? Is he unaare that he's dead and just trapped on earth because he wasn't ready to die? I was thinking that he wasn't supposed to die because his accident was so freak and so he's stuck here.
But then, ni, that can't be the case because a few chapters back in the intro, he was living with the girl.
I'm so confused, i think i'm just gonna have to keep reading and hope it becomes clear. Its a great story tho, love it :)
Date: 08/20/13 06:41 am Title: Chapter 2: Come undone
I'd totally be stressed by the thought of this if it hadn't been mentioned in the summary as part of the plot and therefore not the end... looking forward to seeing what happens next
Date: 08/19/13 12:59 pm Title: Prologue
Hi, I don't know if you saw it but i was the person who wrote under your post on THF's facebook today that i'd been looking for this story, how that i've finally been pointed in the right direction...here i am.
Wow this looks great I think i'm gonna love it, i really like the style of your story, its so detailed and well put together that I could litterally see it as i read... i love to be able to do that, if i can do that i know i'll stick the story out.
Great intro, your characters are already so believable and i loved that the first look at Bill we got was while angry at his piano, it worked so well.
Loved that, now i have to go and read more :) I love sending reviews too so you'll probably hear from me a lot more as i go through the story
Date: 12/09/12 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 26: Clean
I didn't think Bill could see his reflection in the mirror...
Author's Response: Keep reading ^^
Date: 08/22/11 05:03 pm Title: Epilogue
This story was so beautiful! I do believe in fate.
I think if you don't, you gotta run into it, or see it with others. And you'll believe in it as well. :)
I enjoyed reading it! All da food kept making me hungry though xD
Author's Response: lol, me too! I think I gained five pounds during this story, lol
Date: 08/10/11 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 28: Lady in red
He did get his reflection back! :D yay!!
Author's Response: *yayhands* XD