Date: 12/24/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
As he tried to control the anger that he was feeling over the whole situation, he thought, ‘Maybe it’s time I tell her.’..
OMG! you are so mean! I'm dying to read the next chapter! well thanks for the Christmas gift, I loved it. This storie it's great you know, I love seeing tom being the one in love, but he is still tom you know, so it's not reeally OOC. Please continue. I'm gonna read wrapped in your arms til the next chapter is up! LOVED IT, by the way.
Author's Response: I know...I am mean. I have started the next chapter (which is in Emma's POV by the way) I just have to get it finished. I have to get it all sorted out in my head and see how I want things to go. I have next week off so I will most definitely have the next chapter up then. rnrn
I love seeing Tom as the one in love as well. I thought it was different from the other stories out there. I'm glad you are enjoying it. =] Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. rnrn
Merry Christmas hun!
Date: 12/24/10 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can feel it: I'm gonna love this fic as well. I've just finished reading 6 months and seriously, it took me less than one day to do so. I'm gonna be honest, i didn't like the first chapters of 6 months THAT much, but then there was a point when I just could not stop reading! Your the best writer! I love all your fics! Please don't stop writing, cause you are really good! I know it's hard sometimes, but hey,just take your time you know..but do NOT stop writing, I'm addicted to your stories. Sorry I didn't reviewed earlier..and I'm sorry if my english sucks, I speak portuguese.. Well, keep up with the good job! I'm loooooooving it!
Author's Response: The first chapters of '6 Months' weren't that great...I know. It is my first story and I had a lot to learn with writing. I honestly don't know why people even continued with reading it. I am glad you and everyone else did though. I wouldn't be where I am with the story without you all. =D rnrn
I wont stop writing, don't worry. I find that it is something that I really, really enjoy. I feel at peace when I sit in front of the computer screen and put my fingers to the keyboard. It makes me feel absolutely wonderful when I have finished a chapter...or even a story for that matter. I absolutely love writing. It makes me so happy to know that there are people out there that are enjoying my stories as well. rnrn
Thank you! =D
Date: 12/24/10 05:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Yo yo yooooo. I pretty much freaking love this story so far. And I know I say this every time I read something new from you, but this one is definitely your best. Like, fo sho. The quality of writing is much better than in your past stories (I'm not saying the others were bad!), so your writing is improving! Which is a VERY good thing! Aight, I'ma read on another day when I'm not so tired haha.
Author's Response: Hey hun! You freaking love it? Really? I was wondering what you were going to think of it. It is different than any of my other one's and I think that's why I like it. I love how Tom is the one in love with the girl and not the other way around. rnrn
Thank you for the compliment. I feel my writing is improving as well. I only say this because before, I feel like I didn't take nearly enough time with a chapter. Now though, I take my time and make sure it's absolutely perfect before posting. Sure, I know I still have mistakes from time to time. Probably more often than not, but I think after writing for a while, my skills have just improved. Plus, I think getting a bit of criticism from time to time helps as well =P rnrn
I'm glad you like the story so far. I can't wait to see what you say about the rest of it! =D rnrn
Oh and by the way...MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!
Date: 12/18/10 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh wow go tom! :D
Author's Response: Go Tom is right!!! =D
Date: 12/18/10 02:26 am Title: Chapter 9
naaaaaaah, you think, tomi???????? mebbe you shoulda told her however many years ago it happened to be..... XD oh, well, TELL HER AND GET IT OVER WITH, DANGIT!!!!!!!!! ugh, gotta love boys.... XD
Author's Response: Boys are stupid lolrnrn
He never told her before because he thought it would ruin their friendship. He still thinks it will ruin their friendship. To Emma, Tom is just Tom...her best friend. If he would have blabbed his feelings to her, she probably wouldn't have known what to do. She probably still wouldn't know what to do. That's why it's taken Tom so long to get to this point...the point of frustration and practically craziness. rnrn
But you're right, you gotta love boys! =D
Date: 12/17/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just started reading this...
It's simply amazing. I love the way you write this. It just seems so real. And Tom's character is totally believable. (:
I have an impression that I am going to love the rest of this story. :D Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you =D rnrn
I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. I hope I can keep you interested and keep you wanting more =D rnrn
I will try and get another chapter posted soon =] Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/17/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yes another update!!!! Its eating Tom up now. Oh boy can't wait to see how he is going to tell her. I also read Confessions its so suspenseful & full of drama =D HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's eating him up pretty bad. Poor guy =/ I can't wait to see what he's going to tell her either HAHArnrn
I really enjoyed all the drama in 'Confessions'. There was so much going on and it kept me wanting more and more! I loved it!rnrn
Happy Holidays to you as well hun!!
Date: 12/17/10 07:32 am Title: Chapter 9
It IS time for Tom to tell her. Not sure how she'll take it at this point, but it'll be better than not telling her and her being mad at him.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Yeah? You think so? =P rnrn
I'm not too sure how she'll take the news either. I have a feeling things are just going to get more complicated haha
Date: 12/17/10 05:46 am Title: Chapter 9
ARGH TOM!!! he should have ran after her and confronted her right there and then...grr the tension is frustrating as me imagining Toms groan! haha. When i saw that this was updated i had to read it and take a ittle whittle break from ur other master piece, to praise the one that made me introduced me to you. Ha! so happy to hear more.
I have read confessions...not my cup of tea to be honest. I stop halfway through, I'm just different i guess. I hated the main girl character it was so real cos i knew girls like her. It made me a bit uncomfortable with my head full of memories like that. But like i said i am different!!
TOM BELT OUT YOUR BALLAD OF LOVE ALREADY! PLZZ!
Author's Response: Yes, you are right! He should have ran after her and done just that. But Tom is Tom and he's stupid LOL rnrn
Maybe the confrontation will happen next chapter? We will see. rnrn
Awe, you're too sweet =] I'm glad you are enjoying all my stories. It really means a lot to me so thank you so much! rnrn
Everyone has their own taste and I completely understand why you didn't care for 'Confessions'. It was a bit hard to read at times. rnrn
Thanks for the review hun. I'll see about the whole 'belting out his love' in the next chapter HAHA
Date: 12/17/10 05:20 am Title: Chapter 9
Emma being a prick ha ha but I guess I would be too If my bestfriend din't tell me a juicy secret (: and for once In my life I dislike Georg
Author's Response: Awe, don't dislike Georg. It's not his fault that he's wrapped up in this whole mess. (It's mine LOL!)rnrn
Yeah, I would be a bit upset too. Emma has been noticing the way Tom's been acting and she's been putting it to the back of her mind. Now though...now she's fed up. All she wants is for Tom to be honest with her.
Date: 12/17/10 04:00 am Title: Chapter 9
yaaay, new chapter! :D thanks, love it! please upload soooooooooooooon :D cant wait, for whats gonna happen :D
Author's Response: =D You're welcome hun! I will try and get another one up soon. Now that I have this one up, I have a few ideas for what's to come =]
Date: 12/17/10 12:20 am Title: Chapter 9
Ahh 'Confessions' was one of my firsts too! and i agree, IT IS AMAZING.
for a girl, Emma is pretty...unobservant. i can't believe she hasn't noticed that Tom is utterly besotted w/ her - i mean he treats her so well AND gets jealous/upset when she dates other guys. he might as well have a billboard on his forehead that says "I LOVE YOU" on it, lol (although even then, would she realize that it was directed at her? bahahah) XD
Author's Response: Well, as you could see from this chapter...Emma can tell that something is up with Tom. She knows there is something going on for sure and that he's acting differently. She may not know exactly what, but she does know something is going on. rnrn
In the past, Tom hasn't been as obvious with his feelings. Now though, things are getting harder to keep everything hidden. I think Emma knows a lot more than she's letting on though. She's just keeping it in...she just doesn't want to admit to what's really going on. rnrn
HAHA I really loved trying to picture Tom with a billboard on his forehead. Totally made my day! rnrn
Thank you for the review and I hope to hear from you again =D
Date: 12/01/10 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
Poor Tom, my heart aches for him every chapter. And I love me some Geo, so that's saying a lot!
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: I know...mine does too. rnrnThanks! I hope to get another one posted soon =]
Date: 12/01/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I totally understand, so of course just take all the time you need (: i'm exited for new chapters :D
Author's Response: I have been working on getting a new chapter up...it's just been taking me a bit of time to finish it. Hopefully it will be done in the next few days. It makes me happy to know that you are excited for new chapters. I will try and get it finished soon =D
Date: 11/29/10 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
but at least it came!!!!!! good job, i enjoyed this chapter..... and im really liking how you make the reader able to feel your charaters feelings... wonderful job!!!!
Author's Response: =] Thank you. I try to convey as much feeling as possible. I'm glad you can feel the character's feelings. It means I am doing my job =]
Date: 11/29/10 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
dont worry about the wait, because its sooo worth the wait, I Love it (: when are you gonna upload wrapped in your arms :D
Author's Response: Thanks hun =] I'm glad you understandrnrn
As for WIYA...I have the next chapter started, but I'm slowly working on it. Like I said with this one...I haven't had any inspiration for anything lately. That means, I haven't had any inspiration for WIYA either =/ Hopefully I will be able to get the chapter finished sooner rather than later. I've had a lot of crap going on and it's been messing with my writing. =/
Date: 11/29/10 10:11 am Title: Chapter 8
That was an awesome chapter!
Bill is soo sweet for staying home, but hes also a horrible person for it! Poor Tom...
Author's Response: Haha, I hear ya. Poor Tom is right.
Date: 11/29/10 09:43 am Title: Chapter 8
I really like this.It's sad though that Tom can't have what he wants for once (:
Author's Response: Yeah it is sad. Maybe eventually, Tom will get the girl =D It is a Tom/Ofc fic so, yeah =D
Date: 11/29/10 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I just have to brush up on my typing here... Stupid phone keypad is mucked up. When the review says "at least I still have the drive for creative writing", what it as MEANT to say was " at least U still have the drive"...blah blah blah LOL =p I read and review on my phone and this stupid autospell/insane small buttons make it hard to make sense. So I apologise again! ^_^
Author's Response: No worries! I understood what you were meaning =D hehe
Date: 11/29/10 09:22 am Title: Chapter 8
Well at least I still have the drive for creative writing love, it's a gift but it is hard to handle. Some people hit a wall sometime in their life, so it is understandable that u would find it bars to press forward. Now for the review of the chapter:
As always yay!! Tom made me laugh for kicking himself letting bill get to his head. Imagining him mumbling and grumbling while blaming Bill under his breath cracked me up! I was thinking tho if it is so easy for Bill and Emma's father to see Tom's feelings for her as clear as day, how is it that she can't? I don't expect u to answer this, but is just lingers. She kno something that there is a resin why he acts strange in certain events. But she must push it aside for...I dont know... Fear, perhaps. But I guess these things linger to make it interesting. Till ur next update, I shall be here!
Author's Response: haha I'm glad I could make you laugh =D rnrn
Bill and Emma's father are bystanders...they have seen the looks Tom has given Emma and noticed the way he acts. Emma, has maybe only just thought he has been acting like a friend. Maybe, she has just been ignoring it as well. More will be revealed in upcoming chapters and a bit more drama is to come as well. The next chapter will be the second part of the date...perhaps in Emma's POV. She may start to realize some things then...who knows though =D rnrn
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you are enjoying the story! I am hoping to get another chapter up again shortly but I'm glad you understand if I am taking a bit longer than hoped. =D