Date: 12/27/12 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
this was a really good story!
Date: 07/28/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
Bill had a way of going from a helpless romantic and to a deadly seducer
That is exactly the way he is. Nice.
Date: 03/04/10 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 5 Where this leaves us
Like it! :) I love when somebody (mother, G's or someone) knows about twincs ^^ mrau! :3
Date: 04/25/09 09:28 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
Aww how sweet!!
Author's Response: ,) thanksies <3
Date: 03/01/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
oooooooooooh LOVED IT !!x
Author's Response: lol, thanks ^^
Date: 10/21/08 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
these two stories, the one before this one too. were extremely cute. it made me kinda mad that it took the necklace to make Simone realize but i knew it would happen. i love both the stories.
-)
Author's Response: oh thank you so much, this was one of my first chaptered ics and I'm so glad you liked it and the one before, thanksies !!!
Date: 09/10/08 10:34 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
I read the other one last night, so this morning I hopped straight away to read this one =)
I have to admit, I am really liking Simone's reaction to the whole thing- shock shock shock, and maybe a little... Shock!
Because it came off as a very understandable reaction, and then in the end? Acceptance for the two lovely boys. And I am such a sucker for a good happy ending. Wonderful fic, both of them!
Author's Response: aw thank you so much. I have to agree with you, happy endigs rock. I don't think I've ever writte anything with none happy endings. Even my death fics weren't really sad after all oO it means a lot to me that you read my stories and it makes me very honored that you take time to review them as well ! love <3 luce
Date: 08/06/08 01:38 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
ohhhh, if only nobody knew they were twins, then this could actually ahppen....*sighs wistfully*
here's a cookiieeee! :P
Author's Response: can't you just imagine them writing love songs and performing them for each other on stage, maybe even a little kiss to show the world *dreamy gaze* that would indeed be perfect ! *eats cookie*
Date: 08/06/08 01:29 am Title: Chapter 3 Timing is everything
well i think its sliiiiightly odd that simone is so alright with bill having sex in her house, you know, so openly fine with it....im absolutely certain any mother of my friends would NOT allow that :)
and i certainly loved this chapter's towel scene XD although simone walking in on her naked son climbing all over his boyfriend...ah, a little awkward but entirely hilarious!
but oh FUCK she just realized who tom is. (im writing this review as i go, if you couldnt tell from that last sentence.)
Author's Response: God, I love it when reviewers do that (write as they go) it's so much fun to see the reactions to stuff ,p lol, I totally agree with you, my parents would NEVER be okay with that oO hihi and the towel scene ,) if you haven't noticed yet (which I'm pretty sure you have) I love making Simone interrupt, in my fics she has the best worst timing ever ,p *hugs*
Date: 05/21/08 01:11 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
Yesh! =D *reviews* Cute!
Author's Response: thanks Summers :) happy you liked it !
Date: 05/21/08 01:03 am Title: Chapter 5 Where this leaves us
“I’m laying here in bed wanting you.” oh yes he was definitively back in his normal behavior. “What are you wearing?”
“Tooom, I’m trying to be romantic here…boxers.” LOVE THAT PART! =D
O_O Nevermind, love the whole scene. ;P
Author's Response: hihi oh Summers :) I was contemplaininf on writing phone-sex, but decided against it...not so sure why I did that now though ;p
Date: 05/21/08 12:58 am Title: Chapter 4 Truth hurts worse when it’s not a secret
A little too much crying too fast. =o But still very sweet.
Author's Response: they are way too out of character in this chapter, Tom shouldn't cry, but I was just in a crying mood so ;p thanks Summers
Date: 05/21/08 12:55 am Title: Chapter 3 Timing is everything
Oh shit! =o Figured she'd find out soon enough. O_O
Author's Response: yeah I know, she's not entirely stupid ;)
Date: 03/26/08 10:37 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
No, I't simply can't be the end..! :O
A great story and all, but I want more! :O xD
Loved it though! ^^
Author's Response: thank you, it was sad to end it here :)
Date: 03/10/08 09:50 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
it was nice, so sweet
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 03/08/08 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
wow, that was a amazing story :D
Author's Response: thank you so much :D
Date: 03/08/08 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 4 Truth hurts worse when it’s not a secret
god :'(
Author's Response: aw :)
Date: 03/08/08 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 3 Timing is everything
I just hope things becomes okay..
but love the story
Author's Response: thanksies, they will darling
Date: 03/08/08 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
LUCE!!! *waves like a maniac* my dear lovely luce..how are you? everything going alright there? wherever there is...i'm absolutely marvelous today...
and that was it for the small talk, let's get down to bussiness *rubs hands together*
*melts* so romantic...throwing little stones to your loves window...i wonder what wouldv'e happened if it broke *grins*...Bill wouldv'e fallen down and Tom wouldv'e catched him in his big manly arms...*giggles*
wooootwoooot *cheers* dirty/naughty part!! *giggles* so ..hot *touches part and pulls away hand* waaaaaaaa i burned my hand! *whines* luce i burned my hand, it's to hot... O_O' owkay...
"Toast, egg and bacon dropped to the floor to accompany a large amount of clothes." damn i thought i picked up my clothes! *mutters*... i told them 'don't leave any evidence'...cuz it bites you in the ass later on, boy's will be boy's i guess. *sweatdrops*
*holds indexfinger and thumb together* belissimo!!...or something like that xD the perfect ending for a perfect story... wait...ending!! *looks wide eyed* no..not another ending *whines* make one again!!! for me? *grins*...bitte?! *pleads* i'll make you a cookiestatue in your name?!
i mean it!! i'll make the order right now! *gives orders to cookieminions*
*points at one* YOU!! go build a firelucycookiestatue...NOW!!
^-^
::gives you neverending lovecookies::
Author's Response: oh cookie how would I survive without you ??? I actually thought about the window braking and waking up Simone, but figured it would be mean to do in the last chapter ;) as for another story...I have some ideas and I just uploaded a new one-shot (twincest of course) *eats a neverending lovecookie and goes all heart eyed at you*
Date: 03/08/08 11:21 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
I didn't know it was the last chapter until I saw "the end" :O
Well, I really enjoyed reading both of your stories and I think they're both really cute and lovely.
You're a great author and it's a real pleasure to read your works :)
Thanx for both wonderful stories and hope we'll see more from you! :D
Author's Response: that is so extreemly ice of you and I just have to say THANK YOU SO MUCH hope to read your reviews again soon :) huggs