Date: 02/12/08 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1 Our mother…
Ofcourse I'm going to read if you write more^^
I love this story you are writing^^D
Keep up with your greate writing hunny^^)
Love Liebetub
Author's Response: danke...it's really sweet of you :D
Date: 02/12/08 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1 Our mother…
OH MY GOD!! OH MY GOD!!! YOU GOT ME CRYING!! WOW I CANNOT BELIEVE IT!!! I LOVE YOU!!! AND NOW I'M GOING TO READ IT!! CAUSE I WAS SO EXCITED TO SEE THAT YOU POST IT THAT....
I think I'm going to review as I read that way I won't forget anything!!
“Hell no, we’re identical…you’re never gonna look like crap” XDDDDD
“Bill tipped his head and connected their lips causing Tom to get momentarily lost in the stars that were spinning in front of his eyes.” wow they are just so adorable...*o*...*o*
“stopped Tom from pushing Bill down on the couch and devour him completely was the sound of the front door opening.”SIMONE is always in the middle...God I really, really think you enjoy it!!! You've got issues ^^...let the poor boys satisfy their hormones...you're meanie!!
“Hi, I’m Simone Bills mother, it’s so nice to meet you, are you staying for dinner?” Are you kidding?? seriously are you kidding?? I mean...well it's been a while and they do look different but still...poor tomi!!!
“A smile grew in his face and Bill suddenly found himself on the receiving side of Toms’ great kissing skills. He made out with Bill like there was no tomorrow and even though Bill was a little taken aback of this he quickly responded and moaned into Toms’ mouth.” Ladies and gentleman...Tom Kaulitz!!! ^^ way to go tom!!
“Don’t you get it…she doesn’t know” Toms’ hands stroke Bills sides and he acted very much like this was the best thing that could have ever happened.” he's awesome!! what an optimistic making the best of everything!! he's the man!! ^^
“Not if your…our mother knew I wouldn’t” just then Bill realized what Tom was talking about.” he's a little slow isn't he? but so cute!!
“Oh I’m sorry, didn’t mean to interrupt anything” still, she's a pretty cool mom...I don't know what other moms would say if they found their son making out with a hip-hop dude ^^
“This is so fucked up” and that's why I love it so much!!! ^^
“what do you think guys are you gonna read more if I write more ???” do you really need to ask???
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
AND YEAH! YOU'RE DEFINITELY A GIRL OF YOUR WORDS!!!
READ YOU SOON ^^!!!
KISSES!
Author's Response: that is by far the longest review I've ever recieved and I just have to say WOW...thank you so much for this :) and about Simone, well I'm not sure what I was thinking it's just something about her and her food getting in the way of everything ;) and Tom, he is priceless isn't he lucky bastard Bill who gets all his attentioun. I hope you will like my next chapter and really hope you will review it :)
Date: 02/12/08 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1 Our mother…
YAY shiny sequel time!
and to answer your question, yes, yes I would.
Author's Response: haha thank you doll :)
Date: 02/12/08 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1 Our mother…
Yey! You did a sequel, great work! Love it!
Author's Response: danke ;)
Date: 02/12/08 04:48 am Title: Chapter 1 Our mother…
yey ! I love it :D Great start!
Author's Response: thanksies :D
Date: 02/12/08 04:01 am Title: Chapter 1 Our mother…
yay! Sequel...
i thought Tomi would go BAM...depressive seeing as his momi didn't recognise him but this way it was sooooooo...oooo...better *giggles*
it was so good...i want more...i'm being lucestorydeprived xD
please update soon Luce..you'll make an ill girl very happy !
want a cookie...::waves basket loaded with cookies in front of you::
nawww i can't be mean to you after this,
^-^'...::gives basket to you::
Author's Response: *jumps up and down for cookies* thank you oh great queen of the golden cookies, you make my life shiny :)
