Date: 03/08/08 11:06 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
LUCY!!
yey I have a name now (although I am stupdi..it was quite obvious considering your username)
I LOVE IT
the end is just so swett, the lasty sentence pretty much sums its up
thank you for a beautiful fic!
Author's Response: haha you're cute :) thank you for reading and reviewing sweety it means a lot to me !!!
Date: 03/08/08 09:53 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
the end??? no!!! this was great!! i'm glad everything went perfectly! they are together and their mom accepts them AWESOME! congrats! bye. take care. *kisses and hugs*
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing this :) *huggles you back*
Date: 03/08/08 09:52 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
That was a beautiful ending :)
Author's Response: thanks ;)
Date: 03/08/08 07:49 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
Thanks for the amazing story! Just like I guessed in the beginning, this was just as good story as the "Summer camp" story. I'm looking forward to see what kind of story are you going to write next, if you are. Thanks again! :)
Author's Response: oh that is so nice of you thanks...and I'm deffinitivly writing some more ;)
Date: 03/08/08 07:32 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
OH what a happy ending. And what a surprise to Simone, hehe. Naughty twins. I love this story, and i love the ending. Great Job!!! ^_^
Author's Response: thank you so much *huggles for review*
Date: 03/08/08 06:24 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
Absolutely gorgeous!! I am so glad that Simone accepted them in the end. I was grinning like an idiot by the end!
Well done and thank you for writing it. It was a joy to read and a lovely sequel. It left me with feeling satisfied. ♥
Author's Response: oh my god...so sweet of you and I...I...*blushes like mad* thank you
Date: 03/08/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
awww =)
how sweet ^_^
i loved it just as much as summer camp =D
hope u'll write alot more fics like this hun, cause it was awsome ^_^
*hugs*
Author's Response: thanksies and I will deffinetivly wright more, I promise ;)
Date: 03/08/08 06:12 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
it is? lol silly me. xP I forgot! I was so attached to the story I think I forgot! xD
yeah...that was it.
my head is a mess lately. Im forgeting things!
by the waaay..I send u another creepy email. (sorry for being a bother but I was sooooo in the mood for long random talking xD)
Author's Response: haha you being a bother *shakes head* not going to happen honey cus I LOVE talking to you *grins goofily*
Date: 03/08/08 06:11 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
aaw, they're so cute :')
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 03/08/08 06:04 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
AWWWWWWFUFUFU
noo it cant be over ;_;
butr awwww ♥
Author's Response: haha *grins* thanksies for reviewing :)
Date: 03/08/08 06:01 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
It was good! SHE ACCEPTED IT!!! What a woman, I wish my mother accepted me too...
Author's Response: ok now you made me sad...your mom doesn't accept you *sniffs* why ???
Date: 03/08/08 05:47 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
ooooooohoohohohohohohoohohoho. im soooooo HAPPY XD, i dontknwo its too cute thats why!
Author's Response: haha you're cute, thanks ;)
Date: 03/08/08 05:40 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
omg *cries* i can't believe it's finished!!
the ending was awesome =D
i loved it!!
Author's Response: thank you...I wondered if maybe the ending was a little confucing, but happy too see that it worked out :D
Date: 03/08/08 05:26 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
......ahah! first and second review!!!! AAAAAHAHAHHAHA *going mad*
...
sorry. realy random but I coulnt help myself! xP
Author's Response: ah me love random people...me is random people
Date: 03/08/08 05:24 am Title: Chapter 6 The beginning of the rest of our lives
me: O.O ....
crowd: O.O ....
me: (sighs) aaawwwww!
crowd: (sighs) aaawwwww!
me: isnt this the most cute and happy ending ever?
crowd: yes it is..!
oh hun! that was great! *hugs you*
I'm so happy Simone isnt freaking out anymore! ^_^ that was great great great great GREAT DAMMIT!
im so excited! ^_^
Now I cant wait for the next chapters of Embrace and Only Time will tell!!!
I dont know which one is my favorite xD
whats the next you're gonna update? *looks at you with BIG puppy eyes and a BIG smile*
Author's Response: *chaugs* well honey I have something to tell you *hides behind hands* and please don't kill me for this, but *whispers* Embrace is actually finnished *runns to hide, but manages to yell* I just updated the other one *gone*
Date: 03/07/08 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 5 Where this leaves us
God I was fearing this chapter and also really waiting for it at the same time....
“Shut up…just shut the fuck up.” Simone was furious, .--- I didn't notice XDD
“Illegal Bill, what you did was immoral and disgusting.” --- THAT WAS REALLY MEAN!!! I don't think I like Simone anymore TT.TT
Tom glanced one last time at his mom and turned, running down the street and promising himself to return to that house everyday until Simone accepted them. -- He's so prince charming!!!!
“Is mom, how wrong it is.” -- That's right Bill!!! Stand for yourself
“I’m so sorry baby…so sorry.” Simone knew there was nothing more she could do. She had always
known that one day Bill would find someone he loved more then her and still it was hard to accept that the day had come.
“Me too mom.” Bill was crying on the outside, but on the inside he was singing with joy. It would be ok, it had to be. --- Ok, I like Simone again!!!
“Is it safe to come over?” -- XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Yeah Tom, your mom is not going to shoot you in the head!!
“It leaves us being brothers, twins, best friends, soul mates…and lovers.” Bill laughed at the little chair coming from the other end of the phone line. --- Awwwwww I love that line!!! Bill is such a poet...well you are since you wrote it but you know what I mean
“What are you wearing?” --- XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD He's awesome, how lousy, but so good!!!
“Tooom, I’m trying to be romantic here…boxers.” --- Yeah he's complaining but he answers anyway!!!
“Good, I’m not.” -- You're not what? Being romantic or wearing boxers???
“I’ not wearing boxers…actually I’m not wearing anything.” -- OK, I'm going to open the window cause I'm feeling kinda hot right now!
“Take yours of and we’ll talk about getting naughty.” --- FREAKING PERFECT!!!!
oK, so I guess I'll read you soon....I'm telling you now,...I'll leave on monday and back on friday so don't you worry the first thing I'll do will be check for updates and review a little!!
Love ya!!
Author's Response: aaaaaaa just realized that I havn't answered (or seen) this review...that explains why I missed you so much !!! Hell you are...what can I say...FREAKING PERFECT...no other way to tell you...well actually there is...talented, giftet, sweet, super, exelent, great, breathtaking, *draws breath* lovely, witty, cute and most of all AMAZING !!!
Date: 03/05/08 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 5 Where this leaves us
wow
you (I really wish I knew your name, would make it easier) are the best!!!
this is just amazing
and heartbreaking, with her not recoginizing Tom
and then them being parted
and now back together again!
YOU whatever your name is, are the best writer around here!
Author's Response: aaaaaaa emelie that is sooooooooooooo freaking sweet of you, I mean *gapes* THANK YOU (oh and my name is Lucy) *huggs and kisses you till you squeel*
Date: 03/02/08 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 5 Where this leaves us
HaHaHa, thank all the gods that Simone accepted. Loved it!!!!
Author's Response: haha I know :) thanks
Date: 03/02/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 5 Where this leaves us
I think I'm in love with this story :O
It's so good, and I'm sooo longing for another chapter, did you really have to end when it was getting so good?! xD
Author's Response: sorry :) thanks for reviewing this
Date: 03/02/08 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 5 Where this leaves us
“Take yours of and we’ll talk about getting naughty.”
HELL YES!!!
hold on a sec.
*runs off*
...
*enters in Bills room* HELLOOOO STAR SHINE!!! READY TO GO?!
bill: who the fucking hell are you?! what are yo-HEY!!!
*grabs bill and runs off*
...
*enters in toms room*
tom: what the?! *covers this tomy-thingy* ...bill?!
me: *closes her eyes, take off bills boxers and places bill in toms lap* HAVE FUUUN!!!
...
5 sec. later
...
*the door opens quitely and a video camera appears*
- somewhere DISTANT - (my house)
me: feel in home. im gonna get some popcorns.
you: wanna help?
me: grab the drinks if you want.
15 min. later:
tv - oh yes tomi! harder!
tv - fuck..you're so...oh god!
me and you: *droll* (O_O) (x_x)
OMG!!!! I LOVEEE THIS!!! update soon! im dying here! xD
Author's Response: andyyyyy how am I going to stay serious for the rest of the day when I'm constantly fantasising about me and you and a certain 'movie' ??? we are good with the camera arn't we ;) anyways I promise to update soon, but I'll do "only time will tell first" kisses