Date: 03/07/14 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 4- The Engagement Party
He shouldn't have to change for Tom, he needs to talk to Tom. And Tom that was uncalled for, you basically just like all those other ppl that use to bully him at school.
Date: 03/07/14 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 3- Lunch and Fights
Oh man Tom is in for a huge day that day, I hope it all goes well.he needs to stop thinking about what people think and just focus on he and his brother I think thats Toms problem.
Date: 03/07/14 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 2- Questions and Answers
Lol some of Bill and Toms conco had me laughing, but I will admit my heart did ache for Bill. You would think Tom would feel like he was put on the spot when Bill asked asked "ask me to be your bestman" it seems Tom is oblivious to his brothers moods and emotions. Like he can't feel or notice nothing at all from Bill, just the facefront that he is indeed gay and that it makes him uncomfortable. I really hope these six months brings them together to finally overcome all these boundaries and bring them closer than they ever were before.
Date: 03/07/14 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1- Introductions and Announcements
This has a lovely beginning :) and wow over a decade. Man I'm sure they have a lot of catching up to do.
Date: 03/07/14 04:55 am Title: Chapter 7-Mother Knows Best
Love this story so far!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/07/14 02:19 am Title: Chapter 7-Mother Knows Best
God I was so into this chapter! As far as excuses go I understand Tom's. Being young and impressionable when Jorg was being disrespectful & hateful toward Bill validated that it was ok to feel that way about Bill. The longer it went on, the harder to stop. Really can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! XD
Date: 03/01/14 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 6-Bachelor Party Disaster
Awww.
I feel so sorry for them both. Obviously Tom's battling some inner demons. Is he really a homophobic? or did he go through something traumatic in his past? Involving Bill? Did he get beaten up? Or worse - did Bill get beaten up? and that's why Tom wants Bill to kinda tone his personality down? That could makes sense. All I know is that it's got to be a hella good reason... since he's been awful to Bill and neglected him for so many years.
Again, I feel sorry for them both. It can't be easy being Bill. He's just being himself, which is totally right. He's not supposed to be anyone but himself. And I felt so bad for him when Tom 'kicked' him out of the bachelor party. He was so glad to finally be 'accepted' by his twin and then Tom just... slapped him across the face. Not cool! My heart just broke for him.. He was so happy and comfortable and then Tom was the one humiliating him. I totally understand why he doesn't want to come to the wedding now. Poor Bill.
I'm so curious to find out why Tom's behaving the way he does. I'm sure he's not a bad person. He is just struggling with something. Maybe he doesn't even know it himself. And well, I can understand that Scout's disappointed and that's she's had it with this... but still, she should just... try and help Tom. Try and make him realise things.. Leaving him certainly won't do anything better, even though I do understand her motives.
I just hope that everything turns out alright! That Tom can come to terms with himself and Bill, and redeem their relationship. And of course, that Scout comes back to Tom! I really like her! :)
Yes. I had a lot to say about this chapter. So I guess I don't have to say that I loved it, huh? Nah, I'm just going to say it anyway - I loved it. :)
Date: 03/01/14 05:02 am Title: Chapter 6-Bachelor Party Disaster
This is a beautifully written, but sad chapter. I cried about it. I'm sorry, Bill, and I'm mad at Tom. Gustav made r03;r03;a good decision.
Date: 02/28/14 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 6-Bachelor Party Disaster
Scout and Gustav are my two new favorite people. Tom is an ass for that. How could you treat your own brother like that? Now he needs to learn that Bill is who he is and he needs to just accept it.
Date: 02/27/14 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 5- Brother's Reunited
Bill, honey, you're fabulous. You don't need to get Tom's approval. Tom, you're an asshole. You reject your own brother because he's different. That is literally the pettiest shit I've ever heard in my life. Gustav is right Bill don't change because of him. Tom needs to open his eyes and realize that despite Bill being different that's still his brother. He's just as tormented because of his actions. If he would just let shit go, he wouldn't have to feel that emotional burden. I almost jumped into this story and slapped him when he said that Georg was his best man and not him. Wtf?!?! I would never treat my family like that. I absolutely adore Scout. She put Tom in his place and she better continue to do that because he fucking needs it. Tom is cold for that. Bill still agreed to plan his wedding despite being hurt by him. I swear Tom is a mega douche, an asshat, a dickhead, a bastard, and a fuckass.
Author's Response: Bill is fabulous, and Tom should accept his brother no matter what. And I agree with all those names you have for him, haha. Hopefully he can resolve that issue of his soon. And I'm glad you like Scout. This was the first time I ever tried to write a female character that was romantically with one of the guys, so I was worried about it. Thank you for the review!!! :D
Date: 02/27/14 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 5- Brother's Reunited
It was a nice chapter,I can't wait for the next. I hate that Tom do not like how Bill behaves, but is still lokking after him.
Author's Response: Thank you! You won't have to wait long for more :)
Date: 02/27/14 11:56 am Title: Chapter 5- Brother's Reunited
It's a pity that Bill has to pretend for Tom!
I think that something happened to Tom for hi, start thinking this way of Bill
Author's Response: I will explain Tom's issue not in the next chapter, but the chapter after that. THanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 02/27/14 10:37 am Title: Chapter 5- Brother's Reunited
I feel so sorry for Bill.
I know he wants his brother back, and his approval. And it must've felt good to finally hang out with Tom after all this time... But Bill, if Tom can't be around you unless you're being someone you're not, it's... sadly not worth it. You shouldn't have to change for anyone, not even your own twin brother. Yes, it must hurt like hell, knowing that your brother - twin brother - doesn't accept you... But, Tom is the one who has to change here, not Bill. He needs to stop worrying about what other people thinks and just... ignore the world. Cause honestly, those people who doesnt know them? why would their opinion matter? It doesn't matter.
I got a little upset with Tom when Bill just had that cute little outburst and he was ashamed. Yes, I know what kind of pressure he is but he just needs to get over it somehow. He doesn't have to like the same things as Bill, but he can just respect him and stop worrying so much. is his reputation more important than his own brother?! -__-
Haha, I get too into it sometimes. This is a great story and I cannot tell you how awesome I think it is that you started posting again! I can't wait to see what happens! ^^
Author's Response: I feel bad for Bill too! I hate putting him through this! lol. And thank you so much! It feels good to be posting again :D And I promise you won't have to wait more than a day or two to read more!
Date: 02/27/14 03:48 am Title: Chapter 5- Brother's Reunited
I'm happy that you've upgraded so fast. I love the story. I love Bill's flying around. This is a very good story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! XD
Date: 02/27/14 03:46 am Title: Chapter 5- Brother's Reunited
I'm happy that you've upgraded so fast. I love the story. I love Bill's flying around. This is a very good story.
Date: 02/27/14 02:40 am Title: Chapter 5- Brother's Reunited
Great chapter and ready to read some more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've finished writing it now, so you won't have to wait more than a day or two :)
Date: 02/09/14 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 4- The Engagement Party
This is very, very good!I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/08/14 12:45 am Title: Chapter 4- The Engagement Party
WOOHOO...so happy to see this updated too! Tom needs to grow a pair and accept Bill for who he is and Bill changing the way he acts won't change anything. Really can't wait for more, thank you!
Author's Response: Agreed, Tom needs to come to his sense! And thank you! There will be more in the not too distant future XD
Date: 02/06/14 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 4- The Engagement Party
Poor bill I feel so bad for him I think I'm going to really like this fic can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 02/06/14 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 4- The Engagement Party
Good to have you back. Right noe I hate Tom for being like that and I love Bill, it is so sad that he thinks that he has to change to spend time with Tom. I can't weait until the next chapter, I hope you are faster this time ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter might not be for a day or two, but I can promos it won't be a year or two, lol